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Midir_Nisba
So let's all praise our dear author for this excellent work. First of all the beginning is really original cause our vampire empress doesn't appear directly and finally appears by stepping out of her coffin and killing human-like a fucking savage. To make the story better we can really imagine everything in this story with the description that the author use. For me it's the principal forte of this novel. Also, love how it shows that Milla is not from this era with how she acts. It will be perfect if we will have the information at the end of the first chapter that the people at the end were vampires cause wrote like this we could think that they were humans. So if you like vampire stories this novel is made for you. Will now wait to see what the author will give us just hope that we will not always have something happening at each chapter cause it can quickly make the story boring.
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Magical
Gurl!! If you readers want a little tinge of twist in vampire novels! I definitely R E C O M M E N D this book! This is a work of art, definitely well deserved novel entry! What more can you possibly like aside from a thought-provoking title?! CHECK THIS OUT AND YOU'LL BE AMAZED!
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red_grapes
This isn't your ordinary shameless author (which is also me), I'm here to give a review and some insights for this novel. This is a Fantasy Novel, not a Fantasy Romance Novel. The focus won't be directed at romance. It mainly concentrates on mystery, action, secrets, powers, interactions, and a little bit of comedy. If you like a touch of romance, this will be a slow one. Let's talk about the main protagonists, they're not really likable at the very start. That's actually my goal. Because you'll get to know them as the story progresses. I believe that there's more to every individual than we might perceive them to be. It's possible to find yourself preferring other characters over them and that's good, too. All of them have their own spotlights and deserve recognition. This will not be a novel about a vampire falling in love with a human. It will be about an ancient female vampire finding answers about herself- her past and origin, besides discovering what this modern world has to offer after waking up 300 years later. But she's not the only one, there's also the other vampire protagonist who needs to recognize his own self. Both of them can't give love because that was taken from them. Don't worry, there's no abusive/toxic relationship in this novel. Did I forget to mention that we have overpowered protagonists here and romance is still a very long way for them? Yes, they'll be overpowering each other, heck, they'll even try to eliminate one another. The setting of this novel is in a parallel universe where humans and vampires struggle to coexist. And that is all I have to say, for now. If any of you begin to read this book or already is reading it, know that I truly appreciate y'all! Thank you, everyone!!!
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Jyojiko
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Jyojiko

Interesting read! I think it is a good touch of putting something that isn't the usual thing in vampire stories, like even though they drink blood, they can eat normal human food. keep updating!
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BLOOPINGBLOOPER
I really love your world building! i typically don't like stories or anything about vampires, but you made this one interesting. also, strong characters. waiting for next update. <3
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SomethingLikeDeSun
WE HAVE A STRONG FEMALE LEAD!!!! Enough said, read this, she is such a savage, I LOVE HER. I absolutely love vampire stories, but I'm not being biased when I say she really is a savage. Keep up the great work Author. πŸ‘πŸ½πŸ§›β€β™€οΈπŸ§›β€β™€οΈ
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Drapetomaniac12
I rarely read books based on vampires but this book is so good. The author has done an incredible job. We have a strong female lead. What else do we need? Keep writing!
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bibiyenini
Hey, this story is good! Admit it or not, in the world full of darkness, there are creatures who wander around like vampires. First things first, the story has an impact on me in the first chapter. But something catches my eye between the lines, the - *thuds*, I recommend using descriptions to make it more formal. Also for the readers to not be uncomfortable when reading the sentences. Thus, overall your story is great, it really has potential in WN, might as well post in on other sites for it to be discovered in larger platforms. Good luck with your story!
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MichelleLeeee
Exciting read! Can’t wait to read more on what the journey for or Vampire Princess will be. Seems the story is picking up~ a bit early for a full review but well done to the author!
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