This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I miss this story!!! It was so intriguing and just beginning to get really good.
Author i hope youre well give us an update to know how you are and if you plan to continue the noVel? It would be very Much appreciated. π
If I had to describe this story with two words they would be awesome and exciting.
It was a really good read and I enjoyed it a lot from the interesting world to the incredible characters and it was well writen wich is always a plus.
All in all keep it going Author!
I love the cover, how I wish it was yours :D anyway love the cyberpunk premise. Here's my initial review for the potential of your book. Hoping to read it once completed and polished.
Can you also please drop an initial review for my work, WAR GROUNDS (the all caps version please)? Thanks in advance! Cheers!
I usually don't read the books in this genre but this book just captivated my heart. I read first couple of chapters and now I love it so much. I wish there was a little bit more character development. But overall it was great.
Promising! The sense of realism (?) got me. What if technology advanced enough to create superhuman war?
The design is amazing and also a quality you need to fill your library!
A true gem!β¨β¨β¨
The storyline is amazing!!!
A very unique plot and I love the way the story just flows..
You're an awesome author myonaπβ¨π€
I like that although Meili is meant to be a superhuman, she still has her own thoughts, funny thoughts at thatππ
I'm thinking she and PK might become really close friends before the 10years lapses(I hopeπ)
My favourite characters are the Liu brothers ππ, the way they just accepted a master is really hilarious π
I really love the way you write tooπ...
King and Cheng Lei, I dunno why I feel they may be the second male lead and Male leadπ€π€...just guessing though.
Your book has great future prospects! Keep it up author!π
Really sorry that I'm just writing the review, I've been super busy...ππ
Not too much I can say about story development considering there are very few published chapters. But from what Iβve seen, it has potential. The writing quality is pretty good save for a few grammatical errors and awkward sentences here and there. The world building so far seems pretty good and it seems to have a very well established history.
Nice. The synopsis hooked me in immediately, and the chapters delivered. Very few grammar mistakes and the characters are interesting. Keep it up canβt wait to see more
The writing is done well and is very interesting!
I loved the synopsis and as I read the story; I felt the savoury character of the MC. I am very interested to find out what happens to her.
Keep up the exceptional work. It was a wonderful read!
Looking forward to more!
Since there are only two chapters there is not much I can say about story development but the synopsis got me very excited for the book! it is written very well. Keep on writing author!
Cool.
Not really too much in terms of substance just yet, but what's already there is considerably of high quality. The stage is set for some good stuff to happen, simply keep up with the quality you have right now.
Keep on writingπ
Honestly it was the synopsis that hooked me up.
I got the feel of the terminator movie, sending back in time to kill annoying people in the future.
Promising so far, keep up the good work.
So far, itβs super interesting and Iβm really looking forward to where this goes. There are very few of any grammar mistakes and the writing quality is very good
An interesting start! Needs a little more work on environment descriptions to be frank, but the concept has some real potential. It'll be fun to see where this goes. Try your best too keep this up author, ayye?
The premise of tge story is interesting. Although I can't say much about the story dev and character dev considering it only has 2 chapters, but the character design and world background is quite solid so far.
Good job author, and keep the chapter coming!
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