- Acts like a 8th grader himself and acts 'cool'
-Becomes a lapdog to Fallen Angels
-Grammar is terrible
- Chooses Demon Slayer template in DXD. DXD power level is way higher than Demon Slayer. And he did this because it's 'cool'.
I want to kick the MC in his nuts.
well i like it so far it is easy to read and understand takes loads off my mind
lots of good content could be better could be worse.[img=coins][img=recommend]
could have been good honestly, i find this kind of story where mc should not hide their true power but nah mc goes "lets hide it"or smthing could have been grate but not my slice of pie
Personally, I enjoy this Fan-Fic quite a lot. (1. The Writing Quality is... Not bad, but not the best. There are some misha** now and then, but I'm not a picky person, so I don't mind it that much like other people. (2. Updating stability. It's not the best. If you have a pair of eyes, which we all should if we are reading this, it's obviously only one chapter a week. I wish there were more, but as long as the author keeps writing, I won't complain. (3. Story Development. It's not too fast-paced and also not too slow-paced; a perfect mix of both. (4. Now when it comes to character design, I I'm only talking about the MC, due to the other characters not being original. It's cool. Giyu is one of my favorite characters in ‘Demon Slayer. An ok personality too. (5. Well... It's just the normal, DxD plot, timeline, location, etc.
Sometimes i think how a retard can even write so much bullshit, i know the you are not the most intelligent ones of our race, but come on this is basic.
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So this a romance slice of life or a harem slice of life with a dash of action I like it just confused lol I like the character design be fan of the eyes you went for but yasaka you telling me he not nose bleeding she is bout that life 😂😂😭
i'd thought your mc will different like from other fan-fict dxd...im dissapointed...im still dont get it why most fan-fict dxd always steal fate protagonist dxd? i mean yes he pervert so what? as if you are saint
Make this a small Harem ..... and focus on the story ..... please don't drop this fanfic ..... I support you..... Make this a small Harem ..... and focus on the story ..... please don't drop this fanfic ..... I support you.....
I think that is Kuroka will OK to harem.
And waiting are so long.
Nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
well,since the author itself lowered his own review stars then it's our commitment to up it to the notch (*˘︶˘*).。*♡(*˘︶˘*).。*♡(*˘︶˘*).。*♡(*˘︶˘*).。*♡(*˘︶˘*).。*♡
Good work you should continue it........Good work you should continue it........Good work you should continue it........Good work you should continue it........
I'm only here to say one thing:
I don't care about this fanfic at all, all I'm here is to support the author and say that he should focus more on his Naruto and Atg fanfic.
reasons:
1. All three of authors fanfics are all Naruto related meaning he knows his naruto. He could finish his Naruto fanfic quicker.
2. Author said he doesn't really know the plot of dxd apart from the animes. Meaning he woukd get stuck writing since he doesn't know the story.
3. Why are u still reading u already know I want more of the Naruto and Atg fics.
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