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TacoKun
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.
I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...
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lyniar
Keep going Master Im here to support you all the way. I just read the first chapter and Im here giving you a review. Because this is so interesting to read and I want you to cheer up. Aja fighting!💪😍
Goodluck and Godbless master ❣
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RDream
So far, The story was interesting, especially the car scene. 'When you think you know what will happen, then you're wrong' vibe.
On top of that, I got interested in Levi's character/trait. (Nope, Not the one from AoT!) How she would develop in the future is something to watch out in this story.
Overall, the unpredictable events, combined with Levi's interesting character, I had high expectations in the development of the story.
That said, I hope that the author won't be pressured. And keep doing a good job.
(No Pressure!)
Good luck!
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AteJanz
I have a nice reading experience from this one. The plot is great, character designs are well detailed, and world building is fantastic! I like Levi's characteristic, being bold and frank and not afraid to do something reckless in an attempt to escape xD 1st chapter is a great start and got me hooked up in an instant.
Well, just ignoring the typos and punctuation errors, all in all the story was beautifully-written. Keep it up ❤️
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qweenamanda
*sips sprite* this book is perfection( just a few punctuation errors, little to too many spaces, apart from that), perfection. A must-read. What are you still doing here! Add it to your library and read it.
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Chuck45Single
This is a really good story. The plot is very interesting and unique and the author is good with words. The main character is relatable and well thought out. Keep up the good work!
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Andrea_joi2020
It's a nice story I'm super duper proud Andrea here using my dad's account hi kc beh Ako to hahaha anyways im super duper proud of you and take care and always chin up okay haha
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Rankuza
This book is very interesting, it sent shivers down my spine when I read the first few paragraphs, it is a book that will definitely become one of my favourites as time goes on, keep writing.😁
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Uninflammable_Mgh
The writing is decent and the level of articulation is superb.
One thing im worried is how the story is progressing too fast. Im not belittling it or anything but the plot is in the side of being cliche, unless you make up for it by using the plot development and world building.
Nice read though!
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heyimliane
Woh! I love this!! The plot’s great and I came here for the gory gore ;))))) more updates to come!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really have nothing much to say anymore but I hope you update more and fix some errors.
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DestinyBassey_1320
What impresses me is the character development, the author exposes us to Levi, the role character giving me something to look forward to. The overall story is filled with suspense. Good job, I would recommend this book.
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Eam123
I loved how you started this story - It's interesting and drags whoever reads it in. I also like how you go straight to the point. Keep up the good work!
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Hana_Frederica
I didn't know why but yeah I admit it I like your story design because you wrote it very well. It is a good story with fantasy theme in it, hmm it is also good how you describe the situation in the story.
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Jwcwwd
don't know what I was thinking
Leaving my child behind
Now I suffer the curse
Knowing now I am blind
With all this anger, guilt and sadness
Coming to haunt me forever
I can't wait for the cliff at the end of the river
Is this revenge I am seeking
Or seeking someone to avenge me
Stuck in my own paradox
I wanna set myself free
Maybe I should chase and find
Before they'll try to stop it
It won't be long before I'll become a puppet
It's been so long
Since I last have seen my son
Lost to this monster
To the man behind the slaughter
Since you've been gone
I've been singing this stupid song
So I could ponder
The sanity of your mother
I wish I lived in the present
With the gift of my past mistakes
But the future keeps luring in like a pack of snakes
Your sweet little eyes
Your little smile, is all I remember
Those fuzzy memories mess with my temper
Justification is killing me
But killing isn't justified
What happened to my son, I'm terrified
It lingers in my mind
And the thought keeps on getting bigger
I'm sorry my sweet baby
I wish I've been there
It's been so long
Since I last have seen my son
Lost to this monster
To the man behind the slaughter
Since you've been gone
I've been singing this stupid song
So I could ponder
The sanity of your mother
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Exxcaliber_Guns
I love your story! It's very engaging and well written. Though it didn't catch my eye, I can tell you put a lot of effort in it and it paid off. To me it was quite easy to predict what would happen in the next chapter, but perhaps it's because I've read a lot. Good job!
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AmrutaShinde95
I really love the story so far. Very much interesting. The book is written in first person mostly so u get the feeling that you are in that world, good work author
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TheALONEMan
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bibiyenini
The book is really good! The 1st chapter got me hooked hehe, and I'm honest with this. The title also speak for itself haha, HIGHLY RECOMMENDED💕
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The_Procrastinator
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Oemardanoes
The story is cool, about an amnesiac girl who search her destiny. She must know who she is and what the purpose of her life. Because the theme is fantasy, it's remind me of Zack Synder movie, Sucker punch. Good development for the character. Keep it up.
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