Great start. Initially I was looking for the moment the main character starts to create more intensity and I found it refreshing chapter 8 onwards to 12. Catherine gets confused - her feelings between Grey and Victor starts to play out. Old flame dies hard they say but the guilty feeling of having both at the same time came through the read which is good that forces her to decide I guess later. Well done at tugging that feeling bringing it out for the readers . The initial chapters were slightly blend with many conversations but compensated towards the 7/8 onwards. I enjoy reading this @yourbestmomfriend. Write your heart into it I’m sure the excitement in subsequent chapters - the confusion, decisions needed to be made? How victor and grey will race to win over her will lead readers on leaving them to anticipate more on the story line. ⭐️
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