This is my newest fanfic. Hope you guys like this as I have put a lot of my time and effort into it. And although in this fanfic that people would argue about some things so, please keep in mind that everything is according to the context and you must read the story by focusing on the context and not just a single line or sentence. And honestly it's you choice what reviews you want to give, but do not use uncivilized language in y comments and do not say things like "I want to kill this author" or "I want him to stop writing" because I write the fanfics for fun, not for pandering to others.
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Havent completed reading it yet but so far so good i will probably recommend it to some of l my friends as well its cool πππππππ€π€π€π€πππππ
the novel is good and the charecter development is very nice i like the idea your going with this novel and dont rush into the relationships . their are a few plot holes but they can be ignored like where he got back his emotions in one chapter and next you made him emotionless again i dont mind but it is a little bit annoying only a little and this is just a request but can u make auxillary chapter for the harem members with their pictures please i am begging u on behalf of all those people who have low imagination like me . Great novel 5 stars
Look Author, your idea is great nice how it goes, some misspelling but nothing great to Hurt it.
The worst you do are 2 things that if you fix you should really makes it a better work.
First: CHILDREN ARE REALLY REALLY STUPID THEY DO NOT THINK LIKE ADULTS DONT BLUSH AND THEY ONLY THINK POOP OR SOMETHING!π
Second: DO YOU HAVE A GOLDFISH'S MEMORY OR SOMETHING? IN BETWEEN 20 WORDS YOU MAKE THE M.C. 4 Y.O. AND 6 Y.O. OR A TIER 1-5 TO 1-4.
That's it as readers we can't expect anything from the Authors but at least don't make mistakes about your own story at least and the he/she him/her because it makes story really painfull to read, that's it good luck.
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i superrr love tge story. s
im a fan of rakudai kishi no cavalry. good character also. super awesome oc. please continue this. i really love it. i cnt wait for for the story to reach canon. im excited on what your take of the canon. keep up the good work.
Honestly i quit quite early but he created a story with too much incoherence to apreciate even if you try your best
( one moment the MC is the best the second moment he don't know anything)
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I like the way the protagonist slowly changes from a apathetic,distrustful and unemotional charterer to a person who starts to feel diffrent emotions akin to the first time.
a few character interactions could have been better(like the one b/w ryouma and karna )
i hope the antagonists are good enough to spice things up
In overall the novel is based on a good concept but it's too early to tell anything about it.
Overall this fanfic is fantastic. There are many things you have to wrap your head around but once you get it your set...honestly if you donβt like op characters this will not be your cup of tea...ALSO TO THE Author...please continue this Im enjoying it immensely
Great fanfic. Definitely not the best out there, but still good. The story is good and I can also detect character development. There has not been much interactions, but since author said it will begin soon, I am looking forward to it.
This series just like a joke. Even in the 40th chapter he is fighting in an elemantary school tournament. And he needs to clean worlds from evil. I see slow development series but this is another level.
The overall story is good. The integratiob of the characters just fits in well in my opinion. The only thing that could really use some improvement is the writing stability ...
Very good
Please don't drop this story and PLEASE DO NOT MAKE IT A HAREM
As a possible world i suggest familiar of zero (he can be summoned by tiffania so that he wouldn't replace saito) i also suggest tales of demons and gods Worm and Douluo Dalu
Loving the story so far my guy. Keep up the good work. The only problems i really find are a lot of grammer ones, but its not that hard to figure out what it should mean.
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