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Write a reviewLixo li ate o capito 630 tava boa mas depois ficou uma decepção do caralho o prota tem força para uma porra mas continua sendo um lixo ele simplesmente e capitado por hum bando de lixo e ainda fala que não vai abaixar a cabeça nem para os céus mas mesmo assim deixa uma lixo chuta sua cabeça e ainda ele fica gostando de atuar pois ele vai encontra o mestre dele mas rápido caralho
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Parrei no capítulo 54 tava um lixo Mc 0 inteligente e indigno --------------------------------------‐------------------------------------------------------------------
they story is amazing.but the MC is kinda slow and the Arthur goes back on things a lot in the story and some things that the mc does in the book just doesn't make sense.
I think this novel is great especially as a beginner but has you read more novels it becomes pretty bad as you begin to see more flaws for example you be in this novel you can see the main character not being able to realize how lucky he has been because he is like almost died three times in like a hundred chapters which is like pretty short after getting crippled and facing death. I know there is development. but I felt like he needed more reflection early on.
it's really a greet story, my favorite on webnovel and couldn't help but read it again, again and again
Hey dude are you writing 天珠 and divine god against the heavens both together but why the raw has less chapter than translated that's first time I have seen something like this.
All I can say is IDIOT MC😜 He even say that he will not to be looked down but that plant creature calling herself queen is looking down on him and he is like idiot that fawning phew 🤢
Reveal Spoilerok so let's start off with positivity, nice concept love the idea and it has a lot of potential, but potential is just potential you have to either proofread your work or give it to someone else to proofread, on top of that you have to make your characters more intelligent or give better explanations, example there is this talented guy who also has a "golden finger" when he meets our mc he then without any pressure what so ever from our mc, out of his own initiative goes on and reveals that he has a secret. then we get half a page worth of explanations why he told our mc, that explanation didn't really give us a good excuse though. to summarize it is a diamond in the rough you have to polish your work.
Reveal Spoilerbest cultivation story ever read. keep updating this way and keep adding new concept and new thing. 🥰🥰
Reveal Spoileramazing book, love the scenario,interesting plot, most recommended for those interested in fantasy, action and thriller novel, interesting book keep up
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Reveal SpoilerThis novel is really awesome and had many such qualities. To me, the grammar does not really count as you would be lost in make_believe world fantasy. I only hope the author will consider some of us our financial background for now.😐
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Reveal SpoilerWas actually debating to continue with this one as I found it a bit boring but I’m glad I stuck with it as it got more interesting but also how everything linked together.
It's one of my favourite light novel in my life,so don't stop the update and continue the novel without a time gap till end.It my request for the author.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
so I'm 500 chapters in the novel and it's amazing overall the MC is overpowered his dumb personality changes after 100 chapter. *spoilers* what I didn't like that around 400 to 500 chapter he said he would let his women inside the pagoda to cultivate wich instantly toss's aside that the pearl inside his Devine sea is his greatest secret and no soul shall know of it. and here is the MC wanting to let his women inside the 3rd floor even tho he said he won't let them wander outside the 3rd floor the women will still have many questions about it.
i guess many readers of this story had already discontinued from reading this book due to discontinues updates or either very slow in releasing the recent updates or chapters of the story. Its better if the writer should already release all the updates all at once for free reading. Maybe some readers would make a second thought of reading because its free...
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This why there are novels written about destroying MCs like yours. The Main character in these Novels destroys those Chosen Mac's just like yours. For example Paragon of Sin, the MC there hunts down Chosen's that are favored by Heaven, just like your MC, Author. The Chosen MCs are super dumb and they only have a strong will power that's it. In any case, this novel disappointed me. Just a loser granted with Cheats and being saved by girls.
So i have just finished reading all the free chapters and so far the story has been pretty enjoyable however as i progressed in the chapters it felt like the grammar and overall word choice started to become poorer and poorer. At first it seemed like there was a few grammatical issues here and there which is to be expected as the author stated this was his first book however they seemed to increase in number as i approached the end of the free chapters. Can anyone tell me if the story writing quality improves or atleast seem to have been proof read before i start to pay for the premium chapters. As for my review i would say give it a try as the story progresses pretty well from what i have read so far and i would say it is better then a lot of the cultivation novel on this site
Amazing, really amazing. This is my second time rating this novel and I am I'll once again rate it with 5 stars because this novel really deserves it. The mc's character development is also interesting in this novel. In the starting chapters, he acted like a dumb young man. I will not say he acted because he really was dumb but as the story develops, MC's character also changed. In the later chapters, he became smart as all other novels. Well, really interesting story begins after chapter 120. I really f*cking loved the story after that follows after chapter 120. Not only MC becomes powerful by devouring, Heavens also targeted him as he could become an existence that could threaten the heavens in the future. Eyes of heavenly dao also wanted to exterminate Ye Xiao but the Heaven Devouring Divine Dragon devours its attack and even tried to devour the eyes of Heavenly Dao. That was really awesome. There are also many more scenes that follows it. In the end, I will only say this, please be patience while reading this novel because maybe some time in the starting chapters you will get annoyed by MC's foolishness but in the later chapters, the story becomes much more interesting. you will not regret reading this novel, I guarantee it..
Lixo li ate o capito 630 tava boa mas depois ficou uma decepção do caralho o prota tem força para uma porra mas continua sendo um lixo ele simplesmente e capitado por hum bando de lixo e ainda fala que não vai abaixar a cabeça nem para os céus mas mesmo assim deixa uma lixo chuta sua cabeça e ainda ele fica gostando de atuar pois ele vai encontra o mestre dele mas rápido caralho
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Parrei no capítulo 54 tava um lixo Mc 0 inteligente e indigno --------------------------------------‐------------------------------------------------------------------
they story is amazing.but the MC is kinda slow and the Arthur goes back on things a lot in the story and some things that the mc does in the book just doesn't make sense.
I think this novel is great especially as a beginner but has you read more novels it becomes pretty bad as you begin to see more flaws for example you be in this novel you can see the main character not being able to realize how lucky he has been because he is like almost died three times in like a hundred chapters which is like pretty short after getting crippled and facing death. I know there is development. but I felt like he needed more reflection early on.
it's really a greet story, my favorite on webnovel and couldn't help but read it again, again and again
Hey dude are you writing 天珠 and divine god against the heavens both together but why the raw has less chapter than translated that's first time I have seen something like this.
All I can say is IDIOT MC😜 He even say that he will not to be looked down but that plant creature calling herself queen is looking down on him and he is like idiot that fawning phew 🤢
Reveal Spoilerok so let's start off with positivity, nice concept love the idea and it has a lot of potential, but potential is just potential you have to either proofread your work or give it to someone else to proofread, on top of that you have to make your characters more intelligent or give better explanations, example there is this talented guy who also has a "golden finger" when he meets our mc he then without any pressure what so ever from our mc, out of his own initiative goes on and reveals that he has a secret. then we get half a page worth of explanations why he told our mc, that explanation didn't really give us a good excuse though. to summarize it is a diamond in the rough you have to polish your work.
Reveal Spoilerbest cultivation story ever read. keep updating this way and keep adding new concept and new thing. 🥰🥰
Reveal Spoileramazing book, love the scenario,interesting plot, most recommended for those interested in fantasy, action and thriller novel, interesting book keep up
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Duffy name BBC us dB Hakka bags is and and vsbdbdvjdnsbsbbsjjsjshshbdbdhhdhdbdbdhhdhehdhdhbdbdbbdbdbehdhbebdjdbrbjfirbdjdibebdjdbndjdbbsbznnsmdjdjhxhebz jsjdhhduebsbsjhs shhsusjsgsubssbshushshsj
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Reveal SpoilerThis novel is really awesome and had many such qualities. To me, the grammar does not really count as you would be lost in make_believe world fantasy. I only hope the author will consider some of us our financial background for now.😐
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Reveal SpoilerWas actually debating to continue with this one as I found it a bit boring but I’m glad I stuck with it as it got more interesting but also how everything linked together.
It's one of my favourite light novel in my life,so don't stop the update and continue the novel without a time gap till end.It my request for the author.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
so I'm 500 chapters in the novel and it's amazing overall the MC is overpowered his dumb personality changes after 100 chapter. *spoilers* what I didn't like that around 400 to 500 chapter he said he would let his women inside the pagoda to cultivate wich instantly toss's aside that the pearl inside his Devine sea is his greatest secret and no soul shall know of it. and here is the MC wanting to let his women inside the 3rd floor even tho he said he won't let them wander outside the 3rd floor the women will still have many questions about it.
i guess many readers of this story had already discontinued from reading this book due to discontinues updates or either very slow in releasing the recent updates or chapters of the story. Its better if the writer should already release all the updates all at once for free reading. Maybe some readers would make a second thought of reading because its free...
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Reveal SpoilerHAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
This why there are novels written about destroying MCs like yours. The Main character in these Novels destroys those Chosen Mac's just like yours. For example Paragon of Sin, the MC there hunts down Chosen's that are favored by Heaven, just like your MC, Author. The Chosen MCs are super dumb and they only have a strong will power that's it. In any case, this novel disappointed me. Just a loser granted with Cheats and being saved by girls.
So i have just finished reading all the free chapters and so far the story has been pretty enjoyable however as i progressed in the chapters it felt like the grammar and overall word choice started to become poorer and poorer. At first it seemed like there was a few grammatical issues here and there which is to be expected as the author stated this was his first book however they seemed to increase in number as i approached the end of the free chapters. Can anyone tell me if the story writing quality improves or atleast seem to have been proof read before i start to pay for the premium chapters. As for my review i would say give it a try as the story progresses pretty well from what i have read so far and i would say it is better then a lot of the cultivation novel on this site
Amazing, really amazing. This is my second time rating this novel and I am I'll once again rate it with 5 stars because this novel really deserves it. The mc's character development is also interesting in this novel. In the starting chapters, he acted like a dumb young man. I will not say he acted because he really was dumb but as the story develops, MC's character also changed. In the later chapters, he became smart as all other novels. Well, really interesting story begins after chapter 120. I really f*cking loved the story after that follows after chapter 120. Not only MC becomes powerful by devouring, Heavens also targeted him as he could become an existence that could threaten the heavens in the future. Eyes of heavenly dao also wanted to exterminate Ye Xiao but the Heaven Devouring Divine Dragon devours its attack and even tried to devour the eyes of Heavenly Dao. That was really awesome. There are also many more scenes that follows it. In the end, I will only say this, please be patience while reading this novel because maybe some time in the starting chapters you will get annoyed by MC's foolishness but in the later chapters, the story becomes much more interesting. you will not regret reading this novel, I guarantee it..