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mary_olajire
This book is really awesome. I love the relationship Celestina has with Danica and her Nana. I also love the air of mystery surrounding Lianno. The author is great at describing the character's emotions and the build up to future events. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Amazing work, author ❤️.
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Aislinn_Jasper
Recommended To Everyone...
hehe, I don't why but such stories always catch my interest. It's a nice plot or ill rather say cute one. There are some typos but they are barely some. You can edit it.
Waiting eagerly for the next chapters, please update daily :)
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DaoistJ4DuG3
Hello, I really like the novel. I enjoy reading every chapters of it. I do like how the characters are built, the background of the story and the plots. I think it was well written and easy reading. Thanks author. Love love love
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cutelit4ever
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Beautiful story
I love how the author did the story, it really is good and very beautiful...
The synopsis already show the beauty of the story what more in the chapters...
I love it ❤❤❤
I will add this to my reading list~~
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Nomed_Forcraziness
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The story is overall interesting.
it caught me from the first chapter .
I'm really interested to where this will lead to at the end.
English may not be your cup of tea but you're doing great. you're hard work can be seen through your writing.
And as a reader I appreciate that alot.
Thank you for your hard working.
Hoping for more in the future .
And my wife! Good Luck ! ❤❤💓💞💖
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bibiyenini
A good and simple story with the right touch of light drama coming your way.
Good points you have in the story:
1) You have an exemplary plotline that will make the readers trigger their butterflies in their stomach whenever they will read this.
2) You have this genuine idea about love that makes me wonder what if my boy crush and my world would collide in the future or maybe in the present time.
Negative feedback (for me):
1) I want to suggest that make the point of view of the synopsis into one only. You tend to mix up with the character's mind and the omniscient point of view. If you use the third person limited, that means you only have to focus with the mind of your main character.
If you the third person point of view on the omniscient, you have to describe the characteristic and thoughts of the deuteragonists and the extras on the story.
I suggest to do the latter for the synopsis.
2) I've seen a few grammatical errors in the first chapters, but that's okay, we could fix it.
(Please do not hate me. I have shared my thoughts and learnings from this career to you.)
Good job and best of luck, author!
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Regine91Pin
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ZOA
The story is just awesome and is doing wonders. Keep writing author and update soon 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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NotFamous246
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Roman06
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Crissye_Emmanuel
Interesting story, I can't seem to get enough of it, can't wait to continue to see if she'll go back to her world, could this be love?, He is engaged already can't wait to see the outcome.
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Light_ray
As soon as I read the first chapter of this story, I got so immersed in the book that made me to curious to know more about the world the author has created in this story.
Celestina, the female protagonist's character is nicely developed. I'm looking forward for more character development of the Prince in the story.
The events you've created are really mysterious and is making me curious to know why the things are that way especially about the Prince.
Well, I would like to recommend this book to be read by the readers. Believe me you will curious to know more and more in the story. Keep up with the updates and Keep going like this.
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ShadowPrincess96
It's a great novel which is permanently added to my collection!
Loved the character depiction & plot!
Readers will get hooked to it easily❤️
Good job Author-nim 👍
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Oemar_danoes
What a marvelous relationship! You can observe the admiration between the two and the harsh decisions that the heroine is going to have to do. Celestina discharges enthusiasm and fierce ascertainment. The writing is influential and I will cheerfully read this with each release.
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Jyojiko
I like how you put efforts on writing small detailed quirks to your characters, e.g paying with card, cause she hates carrying cash
it helps build up characterization. I see that English isn't your first language, so i think you should make time proofreading your story.
waiting for the updates. :D
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TheSuccessor
I read Chapter 1 and 2 of the book and overall, it has a fantastic bond. The emotional feeling is successfull in this book because of the description and diaolgue. keep writing it'll help you someday
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THE_WORDSMITH
What do I say? This novel makes one pray that the MC gets a good life, that may she gets someone who really loves her and cares about what she wants.
Looking forward to future updates.
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nixrsr
im really into this story! godh i feel like in in cloud 9 while reading this! i really enjiued every chapter. i hope theres more in store for us readers coz its really good!
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JP_TransLaLa
What an amazing relationship! You can feel the love of the two immediately and the harsh choices that the heroine is going to have to make. Celestina exudes passion and fierce determination. The writing is strong and I will happily read this with each release.
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Cle4ningD1shes
The story is amazing itself. I’m looking forward to the characters development and the story the author will tell. Hope the author can update regularly. Looking forward to guture updates
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eyyzeyyy
This is my first time reading here and i saw this book in my explore page. The story is good and the characters are good. Well some of your grammar is quiet off but i read your synopsis and you mentioned that english is not your first language so it’s ok. Looking forward to this story
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Animegirlzzs
I got hooked in the first chapter. Will definitely wait for more updates. Hoping the author would update soon.💜💓❤️💜💓💓💖💜💓❤️💖💜💓❤️💖💜💓❤️💖💜💓❤️💖💜💓❤️💜💜💓💜💓💜💓❤️💜💓❤️💜💓💓💜💓❤️💜💓❤️💜💓❤️💜💓❤️💓💜❤️💓💜❤️💜💓❤️💜💓❤️💜💓❤️💜💓❤️💜💓❤️💜❤️❤️💓❤️❤️💜💓❤️
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