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Me gustó mucho la historia , los personajes están Muy bien desarrollados y espero que contiene con la historia ya que tiene un buen comienzo.
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I don't know if this will be continued. if not it would be really sad because it began good and interesting. So~ there is already my favorite fluff plus the baby bun and cute and good relationship between family.
The story itself is rather short, so it is a bit hard to give a giod review, but I will try anyway. It doesn't seem like the story will continue, but here we go. The characters itself are... a bit bland. The MC is Omega, and the two things in his life are his child and his work. A bit of a tragic background, but the impact of that is right now not significant. A bit more of... a hobby or something like that would be good. maybe something surprising. that would help. The child character is surposed to be 5, but sometimes he could be 3 and othertimes act like an adult. It is so bit hard to wrap the head around. Of the other characters we don't know enogh yet, so I can't give a comment to that. The story overall is so far cliche. Omega gets pregnant, thrown fom the (rich) family and rises to the top, while collecting a harm. Not that this is bad, but the story isn't far enogh to set itself apart from other. The only thing that I find a bit distracting is the comments of the author in the text. I don't like that. Also sometimes the scenes are very short and a bit chaotic writen. If you have time to kill and like this genre, it is passable but only 7 chapters and doesn't look like it will get more.
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Me gustó mucho la historia , los personajes están Muy bien desarrollados y espero que contiene con la historia ya que tiene un buen comienzo.
Reveal Spoiler I don't know if this will be continued. if not it would be really sad because it began good and interesting. So~ there is already my favorite fluff plus the baby bun and cute and good relationship between family.
The story itself is rather short, so it is a bit hard to give a giod review, but I will try anyway. It doesn't seem like the story will continue, but here we go. The characters itself are... a bit bland. The MC is Omega, and the two things in his life are his child and his work. A bit of a tragic background, but the impact of that is right now not significant. A bit more of... a hobby or something like that would be good. maybe something surprising. that would help. The child character is surposed to be 5, but sometimes he could be 3 and othertimes act like an adult. It is so bit hard to wrap the head around. Of the other characters we don't know enogh yet, so I can't give a comment to that. The story overall is so far cliche. Omega gets pregnant, thrown fom the (rich) family and rises to the top, while collecting a harm. Not that this is bad, but the story isn't far enogh to set itself apart from other. The only thing that I find a bit distracting is the comments of the author in the text. I don't like that. Also sometimes the scenes are very short and a bit chaotic writen. If you have time to kill and like this genre, it is passable but only 7 chapters and doesn't look like it will get more.
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