Reviews of HPRP (New Chapters in fanfic section version) by Alexander_the_grey - Webnovel

frankly, mediocre. the character is too arrogant, wants too much, and then suffers. you need to know the limit of your desires and strengths, so as not to be too greedy. I'm rating only because I don't like this character. just annoying.

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I really love this novel, it is a nice hp fan fic. Also the fact that mc creates lots of organizations however I hope he reveals that he is the founder

I really like this story I got addicted to harry potter stories now lol this is really a good story. I really recommend this story and I like the mc

Story is interesting I suppose but it just feels "Meh". Review DoneReview DoneReview DoneReview DoneReview DoneReview DoneReview DoneReview Done

Good writing, with an average understanding of the canon, too little interactions with characters from Rowling, and way too much interaction with OC, it's well written but not my thing, from one side you had the horrors of the death eaters and from the other, the naivety of a child story, the idealistic points of view and hero complex of the MC are a bit over the top for my liking but that's only my point of view I stick around until chapter 67 and couldn't go further. I gave you 5 in writing quality even when taking into account some misspells because you deserve it, but 2 in story development and character design, as I said too much contrast between a gritty reality of the horrors of the death eaters and the "fluff" you presented, anyway keep going in your projects, although it wasn't for me, I see why many people liked it. I wish you success in your future endeavors.

I'll be honest, it's not a bad story, the protagonist from what I read (ch. 25), has a character between the neutral and the good, tending towards the good, this is already a negative point for me. the second thing about this story that i want to highlight is that it looks more like a kingdom building story, the author wants to build a better world in the magic kingdom, this is not something that I like very much, mainly because of the way he does it. basically he has a body with the powers of a wamppus cat and a phoenix, he has great magical control, he has the power level of an auror, and when he finishes school he will be even stronger than dumbledore, I see no reason to him to initiate a policy of struggle with the ministry. oh, don't you accept that werewolves are entitled? Empire! ah, do you want a blood purist society that will eventually weaken? Crucio! ah, do you want a genocide to happen purging everyone who is not pure blood? Death spell! even if you don't want to be so extreme, arrest everyone you consider "bad" and it's over. I am a person who does not like problematic things, can he be considered a new Dark Lord? and? well, only my opinion, intelligence and wisdom win a fist, but it's just a matter of how many fists you need.

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it's definitely one of the top or maybe even these top Harry Potter fanfiction novel on this app. everybody likes a strong MC but he's not overly ridiculous, however his strength is explained and it's exciting when he stomps on losers.

I love it . l

This book is truly spectacular, a perfect blend of everything I want in a book. Though, I still don't get how it is R-18, please explain it to me.

Great fanfiction! It has a nice explanation of how magic works, and an OC that's using his head............................................!

Great book. Very well written. Even reading through google translation, I am delighted. A great hero and his friends. Отличная книга. Очень хорошо написано. Даже читая через гугл-перевод, я в восторге. Великолепный герой и его друзья.

The author needs to update more. he’s become tooo infrequent !!!!!!!".......... . ................,,.L,L.,.................LL..LL.,,L,,,.LLLLL

So the mirros hah. He should broadcast voldemort ressurection and pledge and return of death eaters like malfoy, nott, crabbe,goyle etc to all of magical britian live so that everybody finds voldemort has returned. Then immediately the next day he should remove fudge and umbridge and place madam bones as the minister.

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This is by far one of my favorite HP fanfics I’ve read so far!!!! Love the story progression and awesome while not too op MC. The reasoning makes sense and has me wanting more chapters immediately lol Thank you and I hope you complete this story!!!

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Love the story so far! I keep looking for New charters evers day. I sincerely hope you don´t quit halfwaardetijd like so many other stores.

Great chapter. Take all of my power stones.Great chapter. Take all of my power stones.Great chapter. Take all of my power stones.Great chapter. Take all of my power stones.

@chapter 113 i just love how author doesn't change the main plot but makes the story interesting its like kind of revisiting harry porter from 3rd person perspective obviously there are small changes but overall its fun read till now ..

Very interesting story,i believe. Tho,even if the Mc is op,i think there should still be a point in his life he actually faces a real challenge. All in all,I'm enjoying the book. Thanks

FS to the same was true for the chapter with proper character development of the comment section below to continue tyttttt to ty for the chapter with proper character

He should at least kill the death eaters that are in azakaban like bellatrix and lestranges.He should at least kill the death eaters that are in azakaban like bellatrix and lestranges.

This book is a total drug.

Maybe my review will get drowned in all the reviews but i feel like the author needs to know that of the several of fanfictions i have read, this is the best one. Keep up the work, you bring joy to my life.

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