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varietyy
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bayoeditor
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Avidfan
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Avidfan

The English is definitely good since writer is a native:) The story are interesting and easy to follow the MC. Definitely worth following. Wish the chapters are longer:) Only con is (may not be a con) is the mention of gym class in a ancient setting. I'm not sure if there are gym in the ancient setting. It should be routine class or routine training session?
3yr
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JBandJHope
Yooo this book is so cool!! I'm super intrigued, you have quite the imagination. The world you have created is absolutely praiseworthy and exciting. Can't wait to take in more of it!! Good luck you talented writer!
3yr
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MikruZero
To be honest I shouldn't review this book yet. It's still not at its initial pace but believe me, this book has potential. If you continue to improve as a writer or maybe gain some unique ideas then this book will be more appealing than before
3yr
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Hbk
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Hbk

Okay, so here’s what I have to say, the book is pretty nice, has a kind of eragon mixed with Harry Potter vibes, the world is vast and it might take a while to get used to the names😂😂, but the story is really worth it.
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Nocturnal_Dreamer
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
3yr
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SilentMild
This is my initial review to show my support for the author. Keep up the great work, and I hope that you can see this story through the end. I'm hoping you could help me too with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged). Cheers!
3yr
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sir_impeccable
Oh my God! If you are not reading this book, then what the heck are you waiting for? Seriously, WTH? This book will make your blood boil, the actions are surreal and the descriptions combined make it feel like an action movie in the mind. The powerful use of words and mix of thoroughly selected powers and abilities with amazing personalities.. Like OMG! I AM BREATHLESS HERE! MORE... Author needs to work on his punctuations, especially in first chapter. Some unnecessary commas, wrong capitalisation etc. The speech sentences is not well defined from the thought sentences. And some paragraphs are mumbled up- Please fix it. (Usually, we can ignore this but with punctuation overlooked errors, makes it harder. World building is fine, Punctuation and capitalisation didn't allow me enjoy those narrations. Story development iss OMG AMAZIN!!! MAN... I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEE...
3yr
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Aryna_Stan
It was a real mind blower, literally. It made me actually work to understand it and made me use my head too, I mean light novels are all very well but sometimes you need books like these to show you the fun side of action and adventure.
3yr
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Drapetomaniac12
The author has done an amazing job. The interactions and the action scenes are the strong points of this novel. I like how he introduced so many characters by giving us their POVs. Great job. Keep writing!
3yr
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ephemery
Well-written. It's action-packed and filled with adventure. The narration and the way you describe the scenes are topnotch for me. It seems like we have the same love for action scenes. So well, I loved it. Good job, author! 👍
3yr
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YennuiXiel
the story is very nice and it's worth it to read... the plot is actually good too... keep up the good work my co-writer :) May God bless us more wisdom in writing :)
3yr
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Nikkie_LZ
The author seems to be a super action fan. [No complaining, thou] The way he narrates the novel involving descriptive details that help a lot in capturing the scenes in the reader's mind. The writing quality is easy to understand and unfolds fluently. From the first chapter and the first line, I was very intrigued by the new world the author created. Really wonderful! The setting is one of the most unique and mesmerizing parts of the joyful journey this book has taking me in. Definitely, is a phenomenal novel [Please, don't miss this hidden gem.]
3yr
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Jhema
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Jhema

Greetings to the author! Great story so far. I'm loving the flow of everything and how it goes well together. It's developing nicely. I sure do hope you'll continue. Don't relent. Kudos!
3yr
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Readoholic
Great book, great writing and superb character development. The book stays consistent with writing and develops the world beautifully. Overall, the book has an overwhelming sense of self. This isn’t a story that follows every other trope or timeline, but one that follows its own path. Good Work!
3yr
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MokouFriedChicken
Nice. Grammar-wise, there's some minor hiccups, mostly on tenses and some missing punctuations in some areas. Dialogue and prose is natural, making for a pleasant reading experience. The world-building in particular, is something that I liked in its descriptions. Over all, a fairly good read. Keep on writing👍
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BLOOPINGBLOOPER
omg, i dont typically get so many reincarnation fantasy stories- but this one was really interesting. kudos for making it cool to read. nice one <3
3yr
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O_Wolfs
The novel jumps straight into action and that was handled pretty well!! The world background was planned out well, and the concept is great too. There are some little punctuation slips here and there, but it doesn't really matter at all. The story is still very enjoyable! Good job!
3yr
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Miao_Miao_2769
When I read this book, I could imagine myself in a movie. Like I could literally imagine all the scenes really vividly. It's an awesome book!
3yr
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pelzy
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pelzy

The description is what makes one want to read it or not, and I really liked the description. It really made one expect good things. Could use a little vocabulary check, but otherwise good work.
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NOLONGERAUSER
Hello, hello readers! Welcome to my story. I've always been a big fan of anime's manga's, and manwa's that dabble in fate, and have lots of action, so that's what inspired this piece! I think you'll enjoy reading it and taking a nose dive into the Four Great Continents of this magical world I've created! If you do feel free to leave a comment on my chapters, add my story to your library and leave a review!
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NotUse
So far, so good. Definitely worth the read for people who are fans of this genre. Grammar seems good with a few errors and mistakes. That can be easily fixed with proofreading. Nothing much to critique.
3yr
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Lizabelle88
This novel is full of action! Thrilling, energizing and invigorating! It keeps you on your toes! It's also a page turner. The Author established a different world that will amazed you. It was well written and well plotted. You can relate with the protagonist struggle and sacrifices. A novel worth reading for those who loves action adventure novel! Well done Author! Must read! Try it!
3yr
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GloriouslyFamous
Well done! The story is great, with a lot of world-building and power structures. I really liked the prologue and the interesting action-packed chapters. Well done with the prologue and character development. I also enjoy the jokes in the chapters, it makes the flow of the story smoother and dialogues richer. Will be looking forward to more of this story.
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winterdaisy55
Hey I like it so far! I really like how you write a detailed explanation in the prologue, it made it easier for the readers to understand the world better. The story and the dialogues flows very naturally, and it's also well-paced imo. It is an interesting work! Keep going :)
3yr
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Joe_Trimble
Good story so far. Liking the world you’ve created so far and the story you have planned for it. The pacing within the story is pretty good and the descriptiveness is top tier, can’t wait to see the finished product!
3yr
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