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Hope_57
This is probably one of the BEST novels i have ever read before.I like the pace of the story and how strong the female lead is. The male lead is her slave and is SOOOO ADORABLE around herπβ₯οΈ
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AnnabelleXP
Oh my GOSH!!! I want moooore! Why didnit end so quickly!!! I started reading after school, which ended at 4:00pm, and finished reading it all at exactly 12:00pm tonight! Such good writing and visuals! I applaud you author, but plz, i need more of my new found life source lol! Like please post more soon, i just cant stand it and i have only stopped reading by force at 12:04pm to write this! ... welp i actually have school tomorrow so i should go to sleep but im not tired bc i am contemplating about how soon you will post more lol... if i manage to sleep i will likely dream of outcomes for that cliffhanger you let me dangleing on lol! No pressure but plz post moreee sooon!!! #ishallreadtilltheveryend! β₯οΈππ
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Kora_McGuire
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DaoistaDuyf1
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Becky_Becky_0794
Though I haven't read it yet butππi have the feelings that this novel will be an interesting one can't wait π€π€thanks dear author/authoress ππππβ€β€
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Mangonade
I didn't even realize the time I have been binging reading this book the story is great love the FL and ML some are quite cliche but I still like it (ββ’α΄β’β)β€ I like that even though the FL is a demon she is kind (~οΏ£Β³οΏ£)~ the ML is like your typical Alpha but atleast he respects her and thank you so much author for creating this novel ( Λ Β³Λ)β₯
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chilia_co
nice cute story with a storm like a flo I love the fact that the ml is a real gentlemen to everyone who deserve it and the story development is good all wish for is more chapters shameless me
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soma_dilshad_
I just wanted to do a shameless review for myself. not bragging or anything but i Kinda like my own book.
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chilia_co
I love this story so mush it is so amazing the main leads are interesting too with good development and the ml have great respect for the fl and also I love the way the story is going not too fast nor very slow it is simple romance with touche of fantasy two broking souls who found each other and the you author for the story
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chayasreedeka
To be honest this book deserves ur time and reading it made me really happy...author did it a get jobπππππππππrecommended highly ππππππππ
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NorthStar
Thank you author for sharing this story. I must say hmm I hardly read many stories presented in this perpective hence Iβd like to offer the word βcreativeβ to describe my overall perception. Having read the whole story I stop to think what is the objective behind or the message behind this story and it also pricked my thoughts what inspire the author to deliver this story creatively blending together characters depicted from Heaven and Hell and V as immortal with an angel best friend and V brought up by Alfred and Ben both creatures of their own nature. So the morale that I drew from here
1. That even as frightful creatures - there is love and kindness in them as shown through Alfred, Ben, Xavier abd Cole
2. That V immortal can mingle with and angel and enter both heaven and hell - which is interesting
3. Hell where L resides can summon V an immortal to oversee situations where human kind commits crime - so the bad goes to hell and angel rescue the weak - logical just that L is also seen as then βhelpingβ the situation
The all use mobile phones - innovation at the core of imagination. I was trying to figure out and visualise this
If I synthesised it further - hence then I gather then the key message was both hell and heaven at this stage seems quite accommodating and corporative.
I canβt imagine yet the plot moving forward - will the centre of focus be the sparkling romance that V and Xavier will continue to harbour n build their kingdom or it will be heighten conflict when they get married and power chaos will happen between Heaven and Hell. So it leaves ample opportunities for the author to navigate the readers through what to expect.
Nevertheless Iβd like to say great job in describing the characters. Awesome details in scene setup. Keep up the good work and will hold on to see whatβs next βοΈ
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bibiyenini
Hey, another fantasy novel coming to town! Check this one out in your library.
A few typos here and there but in a major revision, this book is really great!!!
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Bloom759
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the supernatural(a demon incarnate, an alpha) the fantasy realm sort of thing It's a nice plot, the uniqueness of the female being the sort of devil and the male being an alpha is by far out of the cliche way of things.
Like I said earlier in the comments, I liked the fact you cleared up things at the beginning so readers don't get confused.
I really want to know: why she had a panic attack?, why she made a deal with the devil?, I hope this is addressed in the following chapters
I personally love Fantasy novels! Will be adding this to my reading list.
All being said, keep up the good work.
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Dawn_in_dark
Great romance novel. I found it very interesting and impressive. It's story development and character design is perfect. Keep it up ππ
Keep updating regularly.
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Ysabel_xox
Your story is good!!! It start off good and I like the characters...(Especially V's parents hehe)...though there are some typos it is readable. Good job author! ππ
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Nicole_99
A refreshing read from my current reading list.
Few typos here and there but there is a general understanding and explanation for the particular sentence.
I love the fact that even though discrimination exists within the story, it was still kept at a minimum.
The first chapter felt as if it flew by in just a few short minutes.
I love what you did here and look forward to future updates.
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Yrmynoodlescold
The book's start is really hooking. It was a very good start, a few typos but that doesn't prevent the story from being very interesting. I really like the characters and how they are introduced. The background of the world could be slightly improved but it's a very good book in my personal opinion.
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