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3.65

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rayray5236
I read like 10 chapters. Not the same story as the synopsis and I feel like my time has been wasted.
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Werid_vibes
The synopsis does not match the book. I was looking for a historical romance not some modern one.
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Arshveer_Deol
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S_Klinko
The series does not match the title and description. What is actually published seems to be more of fanfic with multiple spelling errors as well as inconsistent sentence structure which shifts from past tense to present tense even within the same sentence. As for the story it is fine but the bad language makes it just harder to enjoy.
1yr
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Sutradna
Is it just me, or did the synopsis say something about a princess, a king and a historical setting? I can't find anything of that inside this book. Does my app not work properly or did webnovel mix something into the wrong place? I'm sorry, but with this, I can't write a good comment. It is more like, neutral. PS: On the internet you can find the real book.
2yr
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Green_duckling
Writing Quality: 1 star Compared to some of the other books on this site, the grammar isn’t actually that bad but what I do hate is that it’s like they’re having two conversations at once. Like Sidney would say somegthing and then say something else and then Azalea would reply to what he said first and then what he said second. It might just be me but I was really confused reading it. Also there is a chapter just filled with a few repeated paragraphs. Updating Stability: 5 stars It’s completed so I really don’t know but without this 5 star rating the overall rating would only be 1.8 Story Development: 1 star They fell in love just on their first day together, even though Sidney swears he wants to take it slow. Character Design: 2 stars They do a good enough job for Sidney, giving him a personality, background, and describing at least some of his features, but with Azalea, she has no personality and then suddenly becomes flirty, is overly calm about the situation even though she was sober when he proposed and they don’t even describe her features for like 20 episodes but then when they finally do all it is is we find out her hair is ebony black-brown. And she seems heavily uninterested in meeting her parents, which I could understand but she should at least be a little bit hesitant to decline his offer. World Background: 2 stars They do a good enough job about being diverse in the places Sidney and Azalea go but there’s no description about it so when they were walking around the company building I just imagined the most generic thing possible and they don’t even describe the penhouse so it’s just a regular apartment in my mind. Overall Rating: 2.6 stars It could have been better, really, and it isn’t even the story I was promised from the synopsis so I’m heavily disappointed in this book, please author, take this review as creative criticism and polish up the book a bit and change the synopsis :)
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Bug_the_Destroyer
Dear author ,what happened? I wanted to read the historical novel but I found a modern one instead. This one is okay ,but I can't enjoy it properly when I'm wishing for the other story .
2yr
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Omoroge_grace
Nice book,love the starting,very interesting,I like it thanks a lot author for giving us the unique bookπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–,it is one of my best book .I recommend this book to every One keep it up
2yr
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Omoroge_grace
I love this story,its so fantastic.Nice starting,it one of my beast bookπŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“πŸ€“,thanks a lot author,I really appreciate your effort you put in writing this story.Keep it up
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LowVSdiamond
I found the original story from the synopsis on Wattpad. It's written by Meirina Soe under the same title and is a Wattpad exclusive. Don't know how this one was switched, maybe copyrights infringement πŸ€·πŸ½β€β™€οΈ Just starting to read there, but it looks great! You should check it out πŸ‘πŸΌ
2yr
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N3iT_666
Confused with the title, synopsis and content. What happened? Got mixed up? The storyline looks interesting though it doesn't matched with the title and synopsis. Another story on contract marriage with started from one night stand
2yr
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Daoist_4301728771
the story line is awesome πŸ‘Œ. but the synopsis is not what I see in the story.the names don't match is the synopsis for another book. your quick response will be appreciated
2yr
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LadyChef
The story doesn’t match the description at all. All of characters names are different and It’s about some guy getting drunk and marrying his one night stand.
2yr
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Ultramansaia92
is it just me who thick that the story i read is totallt different from the synopsis????? there is no gianita or the prince or the plot is says???? i saw azalea and sydney???
2yr
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Cher_Yan
Author, This is a fantastic book. I really loved it from the beginning all the way to the end! You are an amazing writer, and I can’t wait to read more. Keep up the amazing work!!!
2yr
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Jafa01
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Jafa01

im not really sure if its the real story but judging from the synopsis and the comments it seems like its its a completely different story. all the chapters got updated 5 days ago and there is no sign of an emperor anywhere, the names are not even mentioned with the synopsis . looks like it is a modern contemporary idk .. he thinks its one night stand, playboy wishywashy character, drunk marriage, who decides to propose to his girl best friend the next day after his supposed last one night stand? ugh .. the girl, idc what happened but it seems she just needed money.. thats the 1st chap for me and not gonna continue ....
2yr
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SneakySqueaky
I don’t know what the author is doing but what is going on!!??? What happened to Gigi, Cal and Junior? The story does not match the synopsis!!! I was enjoying the story with those characters and it went downhill when I realised the story became a totally different story because the author was updating a new story not long ago. I feel ripped off because I was spendi g fast passes because of Gigi, Cal and Junior.
2yr
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DaoistH0OPkE
I really enjoyed this story . it is really good. The plot is well done, the concept quite popular while being innovative , the characters are well designed. I recommend it . The only problem is that i think it’s on hiatus due to the lack of new chapters .
3yr
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DaoistH0OPkE
This story is really good, all in subtlety and sweetness. I admit that I greatly appreciate it and therefore recommend it to those who want to be able to relax while reading. It feels good considering the fact that I was on edge because of other novels !!!
3yr
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DaoistOowVnR
I love it, really. But one annoying fact about ficool is that, u can't read more if you don't have money. Very sad and it really annoy me to death. Not like my other novel apps which contain a lot of interesting books which are for free.
3yr
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Pem_Shang
I love this novel it's so interesting and I looove historical romance so this is by far the best one l have ever read . looking forward to more of the author'' works.
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Hiya_Jain
Beautiful story. It is factually accurate, the character development is amazing and you always want more. With hot protagonists ;), it is a must-read!
3yr
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Livia_Angelica
The world-building is fantastic and the characters are so real and well-written!! I haven't managed to read everything but I love everything that I have read and I can't wait to finish up the rest once life settles down 😌πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ’™
3yr
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diska_lora
I love the way you have mixed so many things together in your parallel dimension, yet somehow managed to avoid a catastrophe!!! That's an amazing way to portray that their marriage was on merely for benefiting the empire. It used to happen and in certain cases it still happens. It has its own pros and cons and I think, you book will show some of this points.
3yr
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LadySupernova
Sometimes I overlook the appearance of characters. But Meri, it looks like you'll never allow me to forget Gigi's beauty 😍😍 She's stunning ❀️❀️❀️ Wonderful, powerful and beautiful she’s a true leader! I love that she uses her intellect for the betterment of both countries! ❀️ #Beauty&Brains
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Nuri_Bilge_Ceylan
Trust me, the fact the Emperor respects her and take into consideration her own feelings is amazing. I’m tired of reading stories where the guy is a slave to his instincts and the girls along for the ride. You genially know her and care while understand who she is. There is a reason all the readers are in love with you Cal Sr.!!!!!!!!
3yr
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Zalshabila_Audrea
Okay first of all, teaser novelnya aja udah sangat mengundang untuk dibaca:) tata kalimatnya baguus banget dalam menata konflik, a never-ending tease till the end! Semangat selalu Author!
3yr
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Winona_Boenadhi
Love the world-building and how the author able to describe and convey emotions and the settings in this book! TT πŸ’–πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’• very good! Totally my top recommend XD
3yr
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Missrealitybites
This book is so good!! The language is oh so beautiful, the plot is intriguing, and I love the couple's interaction. This feels so real and interesting. Sadly, I don't see any way I can support the author. It doesn't have gift feature and even if I unlock the chapter with coins, it still doesn't show any fans. Btw, well done, author. I love your book!
3yr
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Thalassa_bara
I live the efforts and hard work the author used on creating the world, the character and the story plotline, it is a worthwhile story to read.
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