I think you are doing a really great job in writing your book! The characters are pretty amazing & interesting! Their personality is something that triggers me! I just can't explain how amazing you have written the book! The story is so unique & it is one of the main reasons why your book is outstanding! I want you to make this book even more interesting than it is.
The only problem in the book are the grammatical errors & some minor spelling mistakes.
But overall the book is on top & has a very good potential to outshine the book shelf!
Continue doing a good job in making your book the best!
With regards,
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