I usually dont do reviews on stories I read but this one is great, I’m rereading it as of now. I started it a few months ago as it said its being re written so I hoped it wouldn’ take too long, author when is this story coming back?
oii aurthor the story is this novel dropped or something 🤔, cause I'm waiting for the update. It's frustrating to see one of my favourite novel is being rotting in my library not updated for too long. Please continue to update 🙏.
Okay, so I gave a review on this a few months ago and it was pretty harsh. And terribly scarse on detail. And I honestly kept to what I thought until I read, unknowingly, the authors second book, "Sunshine in Fairy Tail?" and really liked it. And when I realized that they were the same author, I still thought that the start was a bit to drawn out and that the conversation between the mc and the rob was to long and full of exposition NTR, so that's still a big reason to skip. But if you do what I did, which is forget everything before the DC transition actually starts and just read the wishes, the story isn't actually as bad as its beginning.
Writing quality wise, there really needs to be smaller paragraphs as some of them drag on really long.
Story developmen: The start was obviously not well received. The first few chapters are basically the prologue while everything after moves rather quickly. This is definitely the story's weakest point.
Character design: Meh, pretty good. Not very edgy or soft, not brain dead but not written like the authors trying to show off by saying the mc did something ridiculous through pure intelligence.
World Background: Its DC, just look it up.
So that's my revised review. Rating as a story? 3.5 stars. Rating as a story written by a brand new author? 4 stars.
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seriously why do you even make that tragic background if you are not gonna continue it. the reason I was reading this because I thought he will take revenge on that God now you are not continueing it. just don't make depressed like us who read so they can get of their world and feel better. don't think I hate you it just my opinion.
Amigo me gusta tu historia, por favor trata de actualizar mas seguido amigo te lo agradeceria mucho....
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It is a really creative story with the Mc having a mixture of Escanor's and Superman's power's. Making him a superior version of Superman with none of his disadvantages.
I feel like it's going to fall before I start
the author is not paying attention to the fic
has potential keep going with this
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I binged the story. This is really good.
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This fic gives me what I like to read. There are questions in chapters that get answered later. When I'm left wanting more, it's the expectations making me want to read more not like others that are just lacking. The concept is good and so far it's giving beyond ideas I first guessed about while delivering the goods. I don't know if I'll get it , but I'm hoping for loving peaceful omniverse anchored by a truly profound philosophy that holds it all together......... !MILFS! !MILFS! !MILFS! !MILFS! !MILFS! !MILFS! !MILFS! !MILFS! !MILFS!
First, you ripped off from facebook videos, that's just lazy. secondly, you decided to go on a rant when people pointed out your mistakes. not to mention your story doesn’t follow logic at all. You have good writing that's true, but your execution just lazy and forced.
quando riparte daiiiiiii ...............................................................................................................................................................................
author continue this HAAHHAHA this is so good to be wasted, I love diana and many superpower woman came to his harem, oh btw the the pace of the story is so good, I love the story goes on that it only focus on one scenario so there are not to many problem HAHAHAHAHA I hope you continue this author..
La historia esta muy buena, lo unico es si que hay pocos capítulos pero bueno ya veremos si luego suben más y más rápido, en cuanto a lo demás todo va bien
continua ti prego ...............................................................................................................................................
Yeah, dunno about you but I read novels to entertain myself, not to depress myself with self centered people who can't even notice his mom has a sickness. There a lot of glaringly obvious signs hays...
And dude, are you a masochist or something?? Emo??
Seriously?? Is this what's entertaining to you?
Cause I don't know if anyone noticed but his overly shitty background was not even necessary in the story.
Then he wasted his wishes on stupid wishes that looks cool but has a lot of limitations.
He happily made them but he could've wished that he is born in a peaceful universe where no god could take control of anything. Or that his mother's next life after her current one would still be his mother or his daughter.
He could've wished reality bending powers but he ****ed up by wishing almost of it into his body.
sunpower for his body (powerful, yes but anyone could easily fuxk you up because they could easily just suck your soul)
eye powers for his eyes
zenkai boost for his body
immortality tied to his body (cause ban almost died when his soul was sucked out of him in nanatsu)
the system was the only useful thing.
he could've wished for his ex happiness.
he could've wished for the god's son death.
he could've wished that no god could interfere with any mortal again.
Fuxk!! even the gift about no one could control him or anything was even sketchy, if he could grant you something he could easily take it as well.
and why the fuxk would he believe that god's metaphorical son was the one who did it, for all we know, he was the one who did it.
fuxking naive self centered pussy!
Lastly, he could've wished for god to fix his past into a happy and peaceful one.
overcomplicated unnecessary backstory that is full og plotholes hays...
this just depressing and annoying.
I've dreadfully read 5 chapters but the story is ruined by plotholes, the mc is pathetically self centered, even the wishes are a big waste.
ugh.. .hays...
masochists would love your novel
continua la storia plz .........................................................................................................................................................
Keep up the good work. dont listen to those morons your doing great. your also doing great at making me cry. if I have anything to criticize then please no more sadness its breaking my heart. Emotional stories are my weakness and make me sad easily so please tell me this is all the sadness? All in all I love your story your doing great. Character development pretty good. Though a little creativity or originality with the wishes would've been nice but I like your choices. Still I love what your doing and good to see more.
Author starts with tragidy after tragidy but it’s helps us to connect to mc by triggering our sympathy and urge to side to /for weak and I especially like the way Author introduced the comics into mc life Cause it make sooo much sense than some random shit
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