I do like the story but there are many typos in there, also it is very paced and the character of Natalia isn't very clear. One moment he is a boss ***** and the next she goes soft. good story otherwise.
I love the story a lot and I think it’s very realistic in a sense because Mafia leaders tend to marry off their daughters to more powerful mafia leaders. It refreshing to see that Natalia doesn’t take anybody’s bull****, she is sure to tell everyone what’s her by right and isn’t afraid to tell Luca off. What I’d like to see is that the relationship of the two protagonists to be taken slow because Natalia was a hesitant in marrying Luca. Otherwise an excellent job ❤️
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