Hey Author,
Ever since I read Alice in Wonderland as a child I became fascinated with her adventures. From the moment she falls down a rabbit hole and lands into a fantasy world that is full of weird, wonderful people and animals her life changes, and in many ways does the life of the reader.
Your story is really unique as well. The name itself piqued my interest and when i read the synopsis, it got me hooked.
You have not only creatively used your imagination but also perfectly wrote it down. Few to none grammar errors were seen but then they are not disturbing the story plot at all.
Waiting for the story to unfold. All the best. :)
Readoholic