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Blackcrust
An interesting read. This story basically revolves around Jomaira(Jo) and Skylar (Lar) as the author likes to address them. The plot has the potential to break the hearts of many. The author is trying to bring something new to the table, and I like it very much. The story is setting in the modern world where Jomaira is heartbroken by Skylar after ditching her long-awaited date. She meets an accident, after which she meets James. Well, I think the author does a good job of bringing out the emotions in us; I hope my best wishes to the author. The effort author is putting in is worth the praise. Excited to see how the story unfolds. Keep it up and Good Luck.
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Dara_Manuel
I think this is a good story, their love story was unique , the suspense of what happened to Lar makes me want to read more, and the way you shifted the attention to Janes makes the story interesting... Keep up the good work.
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Joskylar
Shamelessly I'm giving five start to myself as I want encourage myself. Hello guys, If you feel my story is interesting please support this story by your precious Reviews, comments, Gifts and vote. I just want to share with you guys about this story. BECAUSE IT'S FIRST LOVE is the first story I'm writing. As it my first story it is so precious to me. I tried my best to show all my emotions in it. When it come to painful chapter I cried lots while writing it as I think myself in that situation and for happiest chapter there is a smile on my face. So I felt this book. The story start with Joskylar a young girl finding about why love is the drug that makes us blind by reading a book. Jomira(Aira) and Skylar(Lar) and their love is the main concept of this story. And I tried to show their journey to find each other's love and the people they meet on their journey. This story have lots of characters and there is also more couple can seen in it. Each characters are introduced shortly so may you feel bored please bear with me. These all are the people who around Aira and Lar. And I'm giving there story too because these characters are important part of the story and you can only find why these are important if you keep reading the story. May you feel bored but I can grantee that this story is one of the unique one and there is lots of sweet and hurtful moment in it. I won't disappoint you guys. As we hear a book can't judge by it's cover like wise a few chapters can't judge a book, If you keep reading you will feel interesting. I hope I won't disappoint you guys. I'm hardworking to give a smile on your face. I hope you guys give me support as I'm a beginner in this field and please forgive me for my fault and do correct me too. I hope you guys take care of me. Love you all lots.
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Kainloey
i am also an exo fan....😊😊😊😊😊😊 Anyway, i love the idea. the beginning was capturing
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Xia_Xia89
Nice plot. It seems heart warming! The synopsis was an interesting one. I wasn't much satisfied about your writing tbh. There are errors, grammatical mistakes and sentence correction. If you can do editing of thr story then it will be much more great to read. Anyway, it was a nice story. Support u author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Chang_mie
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kyle_irish
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Obenewaa_Esther
I really love this story, When are the two lovers( Aira and Lar) going to unite.... the to and fro is too much. I just can't wait to see them uniting
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shaheen30
This story is interesting. Written in a unique manner πŸ˜ƒπŸ’›...loved it till now πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ...The characters of Aira is wonderful... πŸ‘...worth reading
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gleerose
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kyle_irish
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Chanyeolexo_Exo
i am giving u a 5 star ...i just noticed this one ...i am attracted to the concept but...that one thing that pushed this book into my library is..u...being an EXO.L...weareone exo[img=update][img=update]
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Joskylar
Hi, my wonderful people, It's the author of this book. I hope you guys enjoying the story. Thank you for spending your precious time on my atory. And if you guys like my story please give a quick review, and share your suggestions, idias and your feelings about my book here. Hope get some soon. And happy reading. Love you guys lots.
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peacock_writer
This story is interesting with lots of suspense and twists. I am curious about the next updates. I will recommend this story who loves to read love story with suspense. All the best...authorr
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Potterhead_Niki
Very interesting and fresh plot. In love with the way author has sketched the plot and the character.Perfect blend of suspense and love. Can't wait to read more.
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Panqiuyan
A sweet story I love it. you write great. I like the characters. I can't wait for what happens next. keep up the good work............................
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peacock_writer
Firstly I liked the story title. The story plot is really interesting and intriguing. I liked the way, the writer ends every chapter with a cliff hanger which makes readers more curious. All the best πŸ‘ jo.
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rathisathi319
Need more. Worth read once. Unique concept. Enjoyed reading it. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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elvis1833x
Its a great story and worth reading once. Best thing its not slow and the story development is quick. Characters are likeable too. Overall must read😁😊
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kirthin903
It's me again. You made lots of suspense. I'm curious about it all. Waiting for more chapters. That young man next door is pretty good. Is he Lar? I think he is? If he is Lar whay about James, he will lost the girl again. My poor James, please don't hurt him.
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kirthin903
I love this story. Especially James. I read the reviews of this book. I don't feel this book have any problem. I can read it perfectly and I connect with the characters. I recomment this book to everyone it's a good story. Waiting for more chapters. Thank you author for such a nice story.
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mona_keshwari
Hey Jo, I loved the first love concept... Lar is Jo's first love, while James love is Jo... suspense you built is very good, want to know what happens next... I think there might be misunderstanding, as the young man who came to the seems to be Lar, waiting eagerly for the next chapter[img=update]
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Joskylar
it's the author of this book. Thank you for giving me such a honest review. because of that I find out the mistakes and reedited my story. Now it's re-uploaded. and become a fresh start. please do more reviews.i hope I cleared most of the mistake. Enjoy reading my story. Thank u for checking it. ❀️❀️❀️❀️
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Lullabybao
#honest review. I have read through all your chapter now and I want to give a very honest review. You have written a very good plot but it was lacking the feeling you get. Because sometimes the characters pov brings all the flare to a great novel. Try experimenting with your POV's. Try keeping the paragraphs fluid as possible. I've done this mistake and one kind reader corrected mine so I was able to develop my knowledge as a writer. P.s I hope you continue writing with all the passion you've gotβ™₯οΈπŸ˜‰
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YIANUWANGXIAO
Ah.....fling! fling! thats love hahahhahaha, You feel thrilled, excited, and all but in the end is only a choice to get hurt or to sacrifice being able to get what you need and want, yeah...love is a very sensitive and unpredictable words I must say cause it can be a healer and a joker chuar anyway I love this gotaa read more do continue doing your story author nim love it.
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deepu_
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Yes sometimes we can't accept the truth why it's bitter.. What happened to your parents is not James fault.. I like the story.. Poor jomaira, this lar is really stupid
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8thGradeSyndrome
The plot is great and you can easily find bits and pieces that you can relate with the MC, thou at the start the MC acted a bit unrealistically. She was willing to wait in the rain for a long time for someone who she never met, well I guess they say love blinds people.
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