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mssuigeneris
Yohoo! Author here!
If you are a new reader, welcome! If you've been here since this novel began, please be informed that this book has been edited heavily.
I deleted all previous chapters I wrote before to facilitate the TOTAL OVERHAUL of this book.
Yes, ya got it right. The characters are still the same, as well as the setting, but the entirety of it's plot has been changed. Now, we focus mainly on the sports aspect itself, and we are in the same universe as the anime/manga Haikyuu (Volleyball).
I do encourage you guys to read from the very beginning, not forgetting especially the auxiliary chapter.
I hope to see you around the comments, and give your thoughts about the story as it progresses. I highly appreciate any feedback too, especially if I can work on that to improve the quality of my novel.
Hmmm, what else?
Ah yes. Please support this fic through your votes, shares, recommendations, comments, reviews and additions to your library.
Thank you very much! Hope you'll stick around!
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ye3pz
Its a haikyuu story with no yaoi, of course its going to get a 5 star from me just off the bat. Also the writing is actually great and the characters are likeable
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DaoistL0BH5w
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JStyles
The mc is side character
The Oc are just a copy of the originals
2 new hinata's already introduced
Mc is weak af
Should change the title and say that the story is about the team not the mc
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PredatorDA2001
I Enjoyed the story as their is not alot of haikyuii fanfiction novels, hope u can come back and continue with your story. Thanks for the FanFic
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CrystalxClear
Tbh i didnt read The whole story yet but i already love it ,as i am a Gigantic Haikyuu fan an di found it funny she/he/they added sakusa into the story!
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Elite_Jumper1728
Aboslutely love this fanfic.Love how the characters arent written without emotion. I also love how you dont rush things and detail a lot of the scenarios in this fic. Still waiting for the MC to pop off, and show the world what he can do. Really Excited to read more.
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DaoOfPeeking
the synopsis is good HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA but I like the way where is this going author-chan please give moooreeee!!!ππππππππππππ
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uncultured
Well I'm up to CH.13 and the only complaint I have is that their skills or characteristics are too similar. I suggest you give them their own unique characteristics. The twins are exactly like the Miya's, shorty like Hinata, captain is pretty much like Daichi, setter is like Kageyama, and Hiro's playstyle like Suna. The story isn't bad but the characters are just too similar which kinda throws me off. So....their own unique characteristics. That's all I can say so far.
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uncultured
I havenβt gone to far in the book but I have a few questions.
1) how tall is the protagonist?
2) Whatβs is play style similar to?
( it would be nice if it was like hirugami)
3) does he ever interact with Karasuno?
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qweenamanda
Wow. This book is amazing. I love how you write so... It's so descriptive.
Chapters could use a little bit more of brushing up.
I can't wait for your next chapters.....
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SSKV_R3D
The only complain I could give was the lack of world exploring. But overall it was a good story for sports lovers, good story arc, good writing, good character development.
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Oemar_danoes
Whether you are brand-new to volleyball or not, this is a story for you! Make sure to know yourself beginning with the words in the first auxiliary chapter, to make yourself for the match progressing! Yes, there is a competition! I've read until the last chapter and it's so brightened and not your typical coming-of-age story!
The writing is wonderful! Stability, please, stay on updating. Users need a slice-of-life story now and then in this stage full of fantasy-fictions. Development, I can consider it, this plot is marvelous. From the description to the characters, forward to the game/sport details, it's astounding.
Characters, the most enjoyable part of this story! They are relatable and they tell the story from unconventional viewpoints, yet extra uncommon shape this novel has. Also, if this is an anime, I have an audible image of their designs. World, excellent, no other words.
I can't wait for the updates! I'll accompany this! This book should be in everyone's archives!
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chayasreedeka
I READ TILL CHAPTER THREE AND I M HONESTLY SHOOK.
THAT IS WHY I M HERE COZ PPL NEEDS TO KNOW THAT THIS BOOK ISππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
author u have my heart
highly recommended
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MrE
great character development
characters feel alive
descriptions are great
writing quality is beyond good
updates regular
keeps you on the edge
love it keep it up
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heyimliane
This story is goOoOoooD~ and I binge-read it xD. Very exciting but needs some edits and more world background, more like a description of the places so we can feel like we are inside the novel. But overall itβs a good book, highly recommended!
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The_Procrastinator
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Dunge
Volleyball fans!! Got this on my reading list, the first couple chapter is good I guess. Maybe it's will be confusing for someone who doesn't know anything about Japanese and stuff especially with the naming but it's up to them, it's nice that you put the auxiliary and explaining how the abreviation
Keep up updating ^^
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Ysabel_xox
Ooohhh!!! Hooked by the synopsis, now I'm interested in volleyball lol. I like how detailed you write the sentences. I like how you portray the characters personalities. Can't do constructive criticism if there's nothing to criticize about. Keep up the good work author! ππ
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camisola
Cute. Fresh. Unique storytelling perspectives. Great characters. Quite unexpected from this genre. The sport made it a class of its own. This story begins nicely and it slowly hooks you to the plot and the game. Be sure to reach it. It takes effort to imagine what's happening tho, since its not ******** action but a sport scene. I think you'll be a fan of this if you watch Haikyu because of the similar vibes it gives, plus the romance. Overall, a very good read. πππ
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XXXXC
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
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TaintedMetal
A simple yet engaging premise. Characters are presented nicely through dialogue, interaction and narration by the author. Fans of high school anime, manga or any media that portrays teenagers in general will surely enjoy this.
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JustVandal
Writing Quality? This one is top tier! The proses and character writing is very nice! Just by reading the first three chapters I was already hooked.
Stability of updates : Since it is a new novel, I'm not quite sure. I give a 5/5 and hope for the author to keep updating daily! Cause damn i cant get enough of it.
Story development : The development is decently paced, nothing is rushed and nothing is too slow. I like how the author hints the things to come which really gives you something to look forward to.
Character Design : As I've said the character writing is very nice! The characters interact well with each other and you feel like you have some kind of bond with them even though you're a reader.
World Background : I'd give this a 10/5. I love novels that focus on talking about the world. It makes imagining the scene much easier and it sets up the ambience for the reader! The author gives a lot of thought in writing the background. The imagery is beautifully written.
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yizreel_jez
Definitely a 5 over 5..
Writing Quality..is great, if you are looking for a story with clean prose and good grammar..then I would recommend this..the grammatical error and use of punctuations are a little to no error.
Stability of updates..since its a new story..ah..Nevermind haha...I gave it 5/5 since I have nothing to say about it.
Story development..by far..the nine chapters (Including the aux chapt.)..I am quite liking the story development.
The characters are designed very well, they have their own point of view in the story which made me had fun reading the story..also I love Japanese names cause I'm an Otaku.I just really love their names..It brings me back memories..that name "Megumi" and the words "Sensei" arrrghh it makes me love the story even more..
World background, no words to express..this is just an exceptional story for me..
Overall a good read....Oh..I forgot something..
Well, hehe..by the way The title hooks the readers already..as for the first chapter..It's quite nice..
Now..overall a good reading experience that suffices up my expectations...A BIG THUMBS UP TO YOU AUTHOR!
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