Another Shameless review, but this time I come with important news.
1) I opened a server. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TtnGfdKanr
2) The novel is being edited and will be improved when I get time to go back to it
hello. is there any cance that you will continue this novel. or have you dropped it fully and dont plan to continue it. its a really nice book so i hope you really do cotinue it. this was also the very first novel i ever read so im hoping to someday read the ending of this but if your not gonna continue then i would at least like to know so that i dont just keep waiting for something i will never get
OK be warm before you touch this novel. It has an absolutely pitiful main character itβs simply nauseating our trash. It is like everybody around him saving them thatβs not a main character. Thatβs a trash that needs to be saved all Tom out.
The special power sounds interesting, but the mc is to stupid to make good use of it.
He is unable to plan 5min ahead and can not use his power in a creative way.
He can create weapons at a distance, has telekinesis, can se everything around him and can also use a hoverboard, but he still insist to just charge into melee with the enemy, preferebly large groups of them.
Why not use hit and run, fast ambushes or ranged stealth kills?
There is also the first girl he meets in the story that he instantly dreams of having as a wife and starts trying to show off for.
They then have a tearful parting after knowing each other for an hour.
After two monster hunts it is clear that he wishes to die in battle, he has no survival instinct or insight in his own power.
He is a low level noob pulling aggro of a whole zone.
I am amazed that he did not challenge the whole camp as soon as he entered the beast dimension.
Overall the conversations is stilted and feels unnatural, no interaction with the 'scenery' or background characters. (nothing gets described or interacted with and he almost never speaks with anyone)
Look for another story, this MC is to stupid it hurts.
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Did the Author drop this novel?????? I was really interested but when I checked chapters, its only until 200+ and no recent updates... I hope the author does not drop this
Before I read any of it, the eyes on the cover look like Sasuke's Mangekyo Sharingan!(Not the eternal one)
Go watch "Naruto" and "Naruto Shippuden"! Great anime!
!!!Spoilers about Naruto/Naruto Shippuden below!!!
!!!May ruin your day!!!!
!!!Why are you still reading?!?
OK, OK!!! Go on!!! Read the spoilers!!!
Naruto can't do Clones, tho can do Shadow Clones at master level!(LOL)
Naruto gets stonger than Sasuke!
Sasuke will go to Orochimaru!
Garra will become Kazekage!
The masked member of Akatsuki in not Uchiha Madara, BUT Uchiha Obito!
Neji will die!
Kakashi will lose his sharingan!
In the end Sasuke won't get imprisoned!
Instead of imprisonment, Orochimaru gets "Home arrest"!
Although it has a good plot and a lot of potential there a certain references to well known anime and the marvel world what i think dilute the novel and could be better without.
This is a surprisingly good novel, it's definitely worth to read but it does the fast pass transition faster than other novels. So your gonna waste some fast passes.
that's one freaking good book,
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I found this to be a great read so far with the stories many neat ideas, and twists and turns, and while I am not at the latest chapter, I have been reading long enough to get hooked on it. so great job author
strong protagonist hiding true power
emotional scenes without cringe
time!
how can one not love this novel?
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history has a future. Only the beginning seemed very familiar with another novel, and the story is going well. Author, continue with the story, as your future can be great, depending on how you use the eye powers of the MC along with the system.
enjoying the novel so far hope the author doesn't drop it.nice work btw π₯π₯ loving the novel will drop a power stone a day as long as you keep writing
There has been too much system stories so much lately.
But this story does not fail to entertain its readers.
Hoping only for a better development.
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