Reviews of Our Story: Spirit Wielders by Xierryne - Webnovel

I am re-reviewing this, since I feel like my last review is too... "meh," or smthg like that-- I just wanna say that... THIS BOOK IS FREAKING AMAZING!!! I recommend those who love a story with a sense of family, or maybe those who love magic and adventures, THIS IS A STORY FOR YOU. The way the story flows makes you imagine that you, yourself is in the story as well. The way the author describes them also makes you imagine the scenes, which was *chef kiss,* PERFECTO. Also, can I just praise how much thought and detail that was put in this book? A M A Z I N G That's all I can say. If there's a word that can describe this book better, it would be... Hmm, "mesmerizing?" or maybe "imaginative" and "descriptive." The world buildings in this book are also great. The way the author describes them is beautiful and just perfecto. The characters are also all so unique, each having their own nature and behaviour-- I especially like the boyssssssss-- They be cyote tho... and YES, I fangirl over the author's beloved boys XD (Don't mind me here, just minding my own business, crazy over all the boys author-chan has created--) The author also balanced between conversations and story narrations, including descriptions and such. The story is divided into different arcs, in which the author decided to divide into volumes. Great job on that! I can imagine how the author is an outgoing and cheerful person since I also imagine her wanting to use kanjis and emojis so bad from her other book, full of character info (Which I am very grateful for). If only Webnovel allows pictures, then maybe the author can put a pic of how her characters would look like XD (So I can simp--) Okay, enough of my ranting... This book is full of mystery and solving stuff too, also teamwork and school days (If you haven't known already), that I exceptionally LOVE. Also, if you read this book, all the things that happened in their everyday lives are sort of the same with how most of us live our lives. I can relate to Shizuka so much -v-; Her brothers are all so fun and unique too! Yuzuru be mah favvvvvvv-- YAAASSSSS!!! (Tho I wanna love Eito so bad, but after realizing he's already freaking married, so no. I'm not that kind of girl XD) Aside from all this, I really love it, so keep up the good work, author-chan!!! Ganbatte-ganbatte!!! NOTE: If I can make this 10 stars instead of 5, I would've done so from the start XD

This is my second review, so I hope you don't mind... From all the books I've read in the past, this one piques my interest the most, tbh. It's fresh, it's new, the topics of the story are all fun and somewhat relatable, even though it's just a fictional story. Most protagonists would come off as "they knew everything from the start" or that "they're Invincinble" or something. However, Shizuka here isn't. Well, she IS smart, I can tell you that. The way the author portrayed her character was fun to read and watch. She's also not that OP like most protagonists are. Sure, she has an unbelievable power above others, but even she has some flaws here and there. And I like how the author balanced their (the Spirit Wielders') great power comes with great risks as well. It's not impossible to beat them, but it's not possible either without brains. The strategies the author placed in the story are amazing that I had to keep guessing and guessing, only to be amazed by the results and plot twists. All I can say is, a great story isn't a story that has great grammars or even great plots (this story has both), but a great story is a story that brings the readers into it, like they're the ones being in that particular tale. This story is exactly that. It made me imagine that I'm one of the characters in the story. The author changes our perspectives on the story a lot, so I don't really get bored reading it from Shizuka's side of the story only. We can see the other characters' perspectives on the matter, allowing us to also remember their behaviours, thoughts, and sometimes their backgrounds. Since the story and world buildings are in full detail, I can always imagine each scene in mind. The sense of family in this story is immaculate as well, it would be a lie to say that I don't love it. Their jobs and duties, being teens and trying to find their life choices, students and what not-- they're all really fun to read. This story is already over 250 chapters when I posted this review, so I hope it helps the new readers to have a grasp on what I thought on this book! Give a review to this book and support it, because the author gave a fantastic job at writing it! Also note that when I'm writing this review, most of the chapters haven't been edited like the first few ones, so a head's up!

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Great imagery right from the very first highly descriptive chapter. I can tell a lot of thought was put by the author into creating this. The grammar is fine too, very smooth in fact. The sheer number of characters introduced in the first chapter might overwhelm some, but I think they will be more defined from each other soon. Keep it up!

I have no words. This is bootiful, from the details and character descriptions. The world buildinh is very my taste. Imagined you lived in a world full of magic, and your story was already written down for you XD Anyways, keep going!! You do you