Wanna know how a story is good or not? Read the first chapter, find yourself amazed, and - almost instantaneously - rate it five stars. And boy oh boy, did this deserve it's 5 stars.
There's no actual easy to explain it (so read it!) but there's this certain style of writing the author uses that harkens back to Tolkien's works while simultaneously giving a chill like Stephen King's works. No, I'm not joking, that's literally what I felt when I read this. And trust me, I would know, cause the very first novel I read, was The Fellowship of the Ring (I know, I was 9 and the movie came out, you sure as hell bet I was gonna read it) and the second fantasy series that I read, which was the first two Dark Tower books. The way the author described the nightly city as a slumbering bruin was reminiscent to Tolkien's work, while the description of the Nightwalkers was similar the King's.
And don't get me started on grammar, there were no errors at all. Even if there were, I didn't pick it up till my second read cause I was too immersed in the story.
I think the only thing that could lower the overall rating of the novel, is that there are sooo few chapters. I'm at chapter 2, but I don't want to continue reading, not when I know there's only about 3 more chapters after that. So, I'm going to keep this in my collection, and read it only after a dozen or so more chapters are released. Otherwise, I will lose a few hours of sleep wondering what will happen next to the characters.
The deep lore and mystery immediately captivated me and immersed me into reading this. I treat this as a gem and can't help but be glad to have read it. Good job!
I aspire to write as good as you. No amount of words cna describe the nigh amount of satisfaction and use of words this book derives out of me, my reading ccomprehension, your art work is incredulous in all I've read in this site. You have granted me an insight that a hidden gem would truly grant me. I wish you well in continuing this work of Grandeur, and good tidings to you.
okay so I read the further chapters and I must say this is GOOD. like if you keep doing this well then thus is THAT book that will keep you awake all might. I'm so happy that you updated because I was literally looking forward to what happens. improve your updating schedule author-nim and you've got yourself loyal readers like me!
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Started reading this book because of a recommendation from my friend and immediately fell in love. 30 chapters of absolute amazingness and love. I wished it had 100+ chapters already but this book has just begun to bloom and I will definitely stay till the very end of it.
Good writing. I love this novel. itβs really nice. highly recommend! [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
Am not usually a fun of pure fiction but this book got me hooked from chapter one.. it's hard to tell between the way the author perfectly describes the feelings of the characters, the breathtaking twists in the book, or the magnificent way the author builds the strong and relatable characters, you just can't tell which aspect gets you more hooked... It's a beautifully written book, worth your time ... And BTW dear Author... You are so damn talented!!!
overall a great book!! the author is so dedicated to their work, I'm sure all their hard work will pay off. Amazing whirl of character and a very well play with the words, I can literally Imagine the scenes playing in front of my eyes, all explained in such detailed manner.
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. The writing is extraordinary and the descriptions are so perfect. like, such simple words that bring so much emotions from inside. the prowess of your words is so spectacular. 100% recommend.
Looking forward to this authors characters growing up together & moving through their daily lives & adventures ! The little βprequelβ chapters on the beginning of their friendship was really sweet. May yourl ife open more opportunities to give you tIme to wrIte & update your nice piece.
this looks very very good so far. i don't have much more to say, because this is one of the few novels on this sight I would wholeheartedly recommend on its own merits
Fantasy had always been my fav genre and yours proves to be magnificent! Your unique style of writing keeps me wanting more. And Ayraπβ€ love her character, you design them well!
Reader! This masterpiece is must read! Take your time and enjoy every detail of it!!
Good job, Author!
I am loving this story so much!
The vocabulary is better than mine that I have to search it up, haha~
Anyways, it gets a full 5 stars from me!
I also love the description of the situation Ayra's in, making me feel like I was there as well ^^
Though I don't mind some curses she said XD, I LOVE her.
I also love her personality so much, that I'm thoroughly enjoying every word, and second I read this book >///<
Keep up the great work, Author!
Author should be giving a big hand of applause for creating such a wonderful fantasy work. Reading the first chapter itself captivates a reader to read it more. The way you expressed the characters, it's amazing. You have a wonderful writing style and also maintained the regular updates..... Keep it up author[img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
This--THIS story is freaking amazing. I loved EVERY aspect of it. The characters, the setting, the ddescriptions, everuthing was perfect. This story is one of a kind im very sure its going to go BIG. Keep going author. Im rooting for you!!!
Hello, Miwa! I just read your latest chapter and I couldn't stop saying omg. I love where this story is going and I'm literally waiting for the next update(please do it soon xddd). I loved how you included neslyn's and valda's thoughts and emotions in the last chapter. It was such a treat. And the dream omfg, it was SO good. It gave me the chills when I realized that in all of ayra's dreams she is legit facing herself and fighting herself. Ayra's character design is my absolute favourite and I'm also waiting to know who ruhnn is . I know he(?) Is her childhood friend but im curious on how his personality is. I'm desperately waiting for the next chapterrrr!!!
Thank you author for this story. Firstly i must say well done at keeping the suspense intact at the begening. I was trying to figure out more on Ayra ..what is she? what special powers she has that even she can create such fear when she was deeply stared upon by another ruthless being.
I like the way the βdreamβ of hers is being described, i could feel myself in the forest and the wind and misty fog surrounding the area. And the run...through the forest, very well described i could feel myself running there.
Looking forward to more chapters filling up the curiosity as a reader to discover more on Ayraβs character, her past and what is the link to the enaction of The first Gate 10 years ago which is now broken. Her past and the people surrounding her, what are their roles today and what will they be tomorrow once she learns more of her past and the power that she possesses. Interestingly intriguing my curiosity as I read pass each chapter.
Well done and keep up the good work!π
First of all, baddass charecters are one of favs... So while I read it whilst imagining the situations it was like watching some quality TvShow... Point is it's very interesting and the writing style is so nice that it explains the fantasy really nicely. It's worth a read! Do check it out!
Wow. Just reading the synopsis I was already hooked. Reading the initial chapter, I was brought to the scene as if I was watching from a movie βΊοΈ I love the characters, they have a distinct quality and personality in them. I'm already shipping the friendship and I'm staying tuned. Highly recommended for a good read! β₯οΈ
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
This is really good. I read the first chapter and I was already interested in the book. Your writing prowess is just god tier. The world building is amazing, characters are lovely, and plot is building up. I had to stop at chapter 4, cause ending on a cliffhanger is annoying. I can't wait for your next update. Please keep up the good work author!!
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