This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.
I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...
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Story so far is entertaining. There are spelling and grammar errors, but they are not bad enough to make the reading experience unenjoyable. Looking forward to see how his sisters and their demons growth happens.
Alright, I have read up until chaper 28 so far and I am liking it.
Careful! 1 Spoiler incoming.
The only reason I really have any troubles with what is going on, is that at one point there was a sudden and drastic change. But it is not really explained why he couldnt both use magic and cultivate right? Or did I read over it it?
It seemed like it was a forced choice. But the reason why it was a choice, is not really explained.
please someone enlighten me <3
concept and theme of the story is very good, it unique too.
I read around 25 chapters, the writing quality is very bad. Grammar, P/V voices, narration parts are worst. But, I hope the further chapters to be good.
The start of it's so incredible that it will draw you in quicker than any kid on Christmas, morning. Also, it's fascinating how easy it is to dive into, and how the characters are so well made that it can have an anime.
Like I said within chapters, you should be proud of yourself. Your description is very comprehensive for me as a reader and author, it's not easy to get someone stuck into a story. But your first paragraph said a lot. I was able to see the scene in the play. I meant it when I said I wanted to read your book. Anyway, can't say much other than you are talented and keep on with the good work!
Also...merci pour le block.
Better with age; just like a fine wine.
I have a few books on which I am willing to spend coins to unlock chapters and this is one of them.
If you're looking for a novel that has magic, cultivation with a tinge of technology—then look no further, you've found it!
there's not much depth in pretty much all of the story. everything happens so quickly with minimal dialog or even the main characters thoughts. one second he is fighting in class and one sentence later without any explanation or expanding on what happened or other people's thoughts the class is just over. I can understand time skipping over his first fifteen years even if I felt that his parents weren't really explained at all or his thoughts on the situation cuz it can be explained later but to the whole time he is in the academy the story just feels rushed. it's like "he arrives at school. he meets a friend. he arrives in class." obviously it's not that ridiculous but that's what it feels like.
great book overall and i was really looking forward to reading it. that was until i woke up to discover that about 20 chapters i have already read have gone premium. its such a letdown cause i had very high hopes for this book
just how the freaking hell did the author wrote a great book like this! i'm really jealous you know. it got me hooked in the first read and my mind was subconciously craving for more. i didn't expect but it turned out that this story really was great as well as its potential. i'm really wanting for more so please, update more chapters. at least 10 daily so you can attract more readers like me. 😌
Alright, this book is really good and wilm get you hooked in.
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The title is a little clickbaity, he won't remain a magician for long. Other than that the other part is something you would notice from his first life, and stuff about his first life missing in his second. The characters are a little consistent but the world background is a little inconsistent, it's a great book tho, peace.
Overall a nice read. It has some spelling errors, but it's not so bad that it bothers you much while reading. The story develops at a nice pace and the characters are decently established.
I'd say there could be improvements for the most parts, but it's already at a good point and I think you should give it a try. I enjoyed the story so far.
Overall it’s a fine story. The main issues are that all the girls surrounding the main character cry whenever something happens. Its used way to much to be normal. It would also be nice if the author had an auxiliary chapter or something similar that explains the different cultivation stages and gives some world background. There are also a few grammer and spelling errors, but it isnt too bad.
For a new novel this has some spelling errors But that doesnt really affect the story Line. I would recommend this novel to anyone. The character design is amazing how the story changed going grom magic to cultivation was amazing. Props to the author. I fell in love with this novel hope to be able to continue reading it. This is one of the novels I’ve read so far and I know that it will always be one of my favorites.