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sweeter_than_u
interesting concept, you have a way of telling a story that makes your readers fell in love with your characters. Some grammar mistakes in there but it doesn't hinder much with the reading experience.
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Zhangyenumberone
This story reminds me if the Kdrama called habaek bride? I for got the name but it was about a man who is the the god of water and when he entered the the human realm he lost his powers and Etc. the difference is that the female lead is supposed to be the remaining divine spirit. anyways this story really reminds me of it so i really like this story.
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ShadowPrincess96
To be honest I am a big fan of this cute authorโค๏ธ
And fantasy is my always loved genre!
And this story has a complete unique plot along with storyline, that's why everyone should give it a read!
I loved the summary and the chapters I read and Gongzhu is my obviously favourite character (U know what I mean๐๐คญ๐)
More power to you, keep it up honeyโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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sillymlk
First of all...I love the concept. When I opened the authors profile (cause I'm a stalker) I was hooked by this story just by its summary.
Fantasy has always been my favorite genre, and I know how hard it is to deliver it properly. But this author never fails to entertain me with her chapters...
From liking Xuan to liking the crazy interactions he had initially when he came to human world๐๐๐คฃ.. man I had a good laugh..
But most importantly I fell for the chatecter who resembled me so much (nope not revealing who). I literally jump and blush when I read their interactions...
I love this book author, and I love the way you tell your stories. Keep publishing more ๐๐๐
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shortmotor
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Ying92
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Shakirara03
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shortmotor
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spicyscribbles
I really like the idea of an all powerful being losing their power and having to learn how to live like a normal person. The story is developing at a smooth pace, which is nice. One way the story could be improved is if the author took the time to "show" us more scenes rather than just describing them. There are also some grammar issues such as wrong punctuation and fluctuating verb tenses that need addressing, but it's not a huge deal. I think it would be pretty cool if the characters had some more substance, because though their interactions are interesting, all of them feel a little flat. In summary, this book has a really interesting concept and, if certain issues are addressed, has a bright future. Best of luck to the author and keep up the good work :D
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Dawn_in_dark
This story is interesting and I'm sure I'm going to have great fun in this novel. It's characters are good alongwith story plot. I recommend reader to read it. Good job dear author. Keep updating new chapters regularly ๐๐
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Nicole_99
An interesting story depicting a demon general(from what I understood), who finally came back to his home, only to be sent on another journey yet again.
It's intriguing to see how Xuan will hold himself when he is sent to Earth without any of his powers. Real interesting work!
The language is relatively good, considering its probably not your first language. This is a great effort considering the fact, keep it up!โบ
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DeathSinger
Great read... I Recommend everyone to read it as it is written very well with good quality. The Story gets more and more interesting as I further read it.
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The_Procrastinator
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Rein_U
Interesting plot author. The protagonist has no powers and with his unknown identity he has to find the things. I loved the way other characters are introduced. Keep up with your work author......
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bibiyenini
Reminds me of the Webtoon entitled Devil Number 4 who crossed the demon world towards the humans!!!!
This novel is amazing, comprises again of supernatural creatures that will surely give you the heavy drama feels and excitement!! Add also the suspense on what is gonna happen in the love story between the humans and the demons!!โค
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XXXXC
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
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qweenamanda
Everyone should read this book!!!
Overall it is a nice book. Just a few punctuation errors that can be solved easily. Keep up the good work. I await your future chapters. Your creativity is amazing. This book is going placesโฅ๏ธ
Amazing work.
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Rika_67
Loved the story author.
More updates and chapters please............
Keep it up Author..............................
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Zone_out
Since there are only a few chapters so I'm giving review on the basis of that. I enjoyed reading the chapters. The storyline is quite interesting. More chapters author and keep updating
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CheezyMayo
Hahah! I think this story is going to be fun. Though it's still on the early chapters, I found myself entertained. good job author! Please update more chapters!
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Rika_67
I loved the story..............more updates author and keep updating....................
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Geminiman_Sam
I love this story. It's like a different demon world unlike explained in most of the other novels. Since only two chapters are released so I'm looking forward where's the story goes. Keep it up author.......
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MoeJam90
Strong introduction of the main character. Nice character interaction.A novel you can look forward to. Although, I would really recommend you to practice your sentence building more for a cohesive interaction.
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