Reviews of The Eye Of The Moon Plan by Legendary_Person - Webnovel

I have read till chapter 23 and it is simply FANTASTIC an awesome story with an even impressive character The character has an aura of mystery (thanks to various secrets of him we know nothing about) he is calm and is a cool mc The story is not a stupid wish fulfilment one as IT HAS ORIGINALITY (which is usually lacking in most Fanfics ) Mc is older than tatsuya So we can be sure he is not going to become some Lackey or a part of his friends *ahem* subordinates *ahem* Anyway writting quality is pretty good and the grammar is perfect So no issues on writing end I think 4 updates a week are pretty decent . Though as a greedy person that I am I am nit satisfied with it Author explains basic stuff which helps as I read the novel long time back Now here is a tiny tiny spoiler u can ignore it Author mentions somewhere that mc would leave this world . Now this is my question/request to the author to tell me if he is going to other world and .if he is then , is he going to take his wife with him because I am a fan of mild romance in action and am not very amused by the idea of leaving ur loved ones behind That being said, it is but a speculation which I wanted to clarify ... Anyway the author is doing a great job and I hope he doesn't get influenced by other people views , ultimately being unsatisfied by his own novel and then leaving it ... I can't imagine such a novel being left 😭 in middle of writing U Hv my support and of course my power stones. I am Still a minor So nothing on patreon end (if u hv one) for now ...Sorry and THANKS Keep updating

Great writing quality. Powerful MC. Smart MC. Stable Updates. This is such a great read. Recommended for those looking for Irregular at Magic High School fanfic.

I will skip through the usual pleasantries as this review is more like a complaint than anything else, a complaint to the author that seems he's hellbent on adding flaws to his own masterpiece. As you can see everything up there are 5 stars as everything is perfect, no typos, perfect character development, and design, perfect background description. Nothing to say here. My issues are the following... Why the hell are there so few romantic scenes with Mayumi... There is a lot of contradiction regarding what exactly does this novel represents. Sometimes, it is very serious, sometimes it has comedy, sometimes it has romance and sometimes I don't know, that in itself is not the problem as a book usually has all that. The problem is that they are not being properly merged together. Sometimes a situation that should be serious turns comedic thus taking out some impact from it. Sometimes, situations that should be romantic turn serious or comedic, also taking out the impact of the romance. It is frustrating that other pairings in this novel have more moments or development than the main pairing that is MC and Mayumi. Look and learn author, you can have many pairings in a novel, but you can never show more development than necessary with the secondary pairings. You can show that there is development for example that Erika is flushing in front of Leo or something like that, indicating that there might be some relationship between them in the future or them mentioning that they're going on a date, and then show the conclusion of the date. But no one fking cares about the date itself! Bro I swear, that date between the Chiba guy and Kyoko I was like: 'Okay, they are in a relationship, and talking about their future is normal' 'Okay, she made a rather bold and sultry remark there but I guess it can be expected for a couple' 'Why the hell are you showing me the lemon!!!!'*skips lemon* 'Why the hell are you showing me the after taste!!!!!!!!!!'*skips after taste* I mean for real you only do that in these cases: Either you're planning to make a Netori scenario where MC steals her or... I don't know as nobody fking cares about them, especially when they were introduced like 5 chapters ago. So please, even Naotsugu and Mari have more moments than Mayumi and MC. I would have been more interested in an MC x Miya situation than that unsettling scene you showed. Keep a proper flow, if the novel is serious, keep it serious. If it is funny, then keep it funny. Best Regards.

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THIS IS EXTREMELY GOOD!! I AWAIT THE DAY YOU COME BACK The FitnessGram™ Pacer Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues. The 20-meter pacer test will begin in 30 seconds. Line up at the start. The running speed starts slowly but gets faster each minute after you hear this signal. A single lap should be completed each time you hear this sound. Remember to run in a straight line, and run as long as possible. The second time you fail to complete a lap before the sound, your test is over. The test will begin on the word start. On your mark, get ready, start.

Haven't read anything yet, but this is super unique and I can tell I will love it!!! Will give an update after passing the 20th chapter mark. P.S. Saegusa best girl

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This fanfic that the author has written is very entertaining and engaging. I would say many novels created on Webnovel lack that. I honestly binge read the up until the latest chapter from start to finish. The grammar usage was great and words were properly capitalized and unclear points of the story were clarified. Overall one of the best reads in awhile for me. I hope that whoever reads this gives it a great chance.

Great Novel Man. This novel shows some of the dark sides of the Irregular At Magic Highschool world and I absolutely love it. His ideals & philosophy are amazing and the way he goes about it is just excellent. I love his character design, his family background, & his pairing. I hope you don't drop this novel, I personally think this is your best work. Keep it up.

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B-BAKANA a R-18 no harem, a normal relationship between two people of opposite gender in a fanfic. ........................................

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One of the amazing... if not the best Irregular fan-fic out there👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I love this novel, please don't drop it and continue posting more chapters! I love this novel, please don't drop it and continue posting more chapters! I love this novel, please don't drop it and continue posting more chapters! I love this novel, please don't drop it and continue posting more chapters! I love this novel, please don't drop it and continue posting more chapters!

The story is very interesting, Mc is manipulative when he needs to be and solely focuses on his goals. This Mc will sacrifice anything and is willing to take anything to transform his dream into reality. Which in my opinion makes him an interesting character.

A good story to read. Just don't like how manipulative the mc can be with the people around him and putting all of that under the excuse of it's for the "greater good" And the peace project is a bit idiotic if i may say. There can never be true peace in the world. Everyone has his ideals and those ideals make it so that people are differents from each others and thus creating conflicts. And thats a perfectly normal thing. If there weren't any conflict between people that would be quiet eery. I don't know if you understod what i wanted to say but that's it. The story is good and i like the power of the mc but i don't really like his goal and how he do things with the people who loves him.

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This dude is cracked out of his mind bruv! This dude is cracked out of his mind bruv! This dude is cracked out of his mind bruv! This dude is cracked out of his mind bruv!

I read your previous works, and I like them too! Keep up the good work and keep em chapters coming, hehe boi! Nice story by the way, I really like this novel.

An original novel with an original idea and the writing is Op! An original novel with an original idea and the writing is Op! An original novel with an original idea and the writing is Op! An original novel with an original idea and the writing is Op!

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This novel is lit af! This novel is lit af! This novel is lit af! This novel is lit af! This novel is lit af! This novel is lit af! This novel is lit af!

Amazing story, totally original and fresh read, I like it... Amazing story, totally original and fresh read, I like it... Amazing story, totally original and fresh read, I like it... Amazing story, totally original and fresh read, I like it...

I love this novel, please don't drop! I love this novel, please don't drop! I love this novel, please don't drop! I love this novel, please don't drop!

it's a good story and enjoyable to read........................................................................................................................................................................

“We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark; the real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light.” You have a good novel with a good plot, plus it is original so, yeah. Keep up the good work.

I really like your work author-san, you write really well. I really like your work author-san, you write really well. I really like your work author-san, you write really well. I really like your work author-san, you write really well.

Author-san, really turns into a legendary person when writing, you have a lot in mind in writing this piece, while not making it look crowded and out place. You have a really great ability in contextualizing your ideas into a written form; not many could that (including me😅).