Reviews of Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson by ForgottenLife - Webnovel

Hello! Author here. I am a new writer who is writing a original novel. I have read various and thought of writing a fan-fiction to improve my writing skills. NOW FOR THE FAN-FIC There will be no harem, sorry to disappoint harem lovers. Though there can be two wives depending on reader's demand. A poll will be conducted to decide that. I am writing a action novel with mix elements of fantasy and adventure. I have zero experience in writing romance and don't expect me to pull out cheesy romance out of nowhere, though I am currently reading some romance novels to learn, but that will not be the focus for this novel. As unnecessary romance and harem may f**k up the story and drastically reduce the quality of reading experiences. Thank you and stay tuned with me and also don't forget to check out my original Novel based on Indian Mythology with many legendary beings and powers.

I enjoy the consistency of the updates, so I really appreciate that. Sometimes in the story, I get lost and have to reread it to understand, but I think that's just me. The jokes, while sometimes out of place, I still enjoy. I think doing what you're doing in the way you want is a good idea. I can't really suggest anything because I'm not a writer, but I'll keep reading if you keep updating.

It is just perfect perfect to the last detail

The story is just forced and full of plot holes

I like the story and development of character

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I keep getting spammed by bots advertising this story. I see that there are no other comments calling this out, so I can only assume the author is deleting them. If my review gets deleted ill just leave another, so on so on. Your behavior is predatory. It’s also illegal.

Great story I’m not even a quarter way through and it’s getting not slowing down

Please can someone tell me if Izuna the MC returns to be the protagonist after his "death" if so, in which chapter does he return?

Author tried to make this fanfic into one piece(anime)🥲

I'm a new reader to the fan-fic but I love the story and the development of the MC and the other side character I love a good story and hope continues to be a great story so I gave it a full 5 star rating because I love the story so much!!

Overall I think this is a really great novel sure the beginning was a bit rough but I did start getting better later. The author did play with the world background which was a nice touch though that nerf was annoying lol. However the author did improve his writing which is more than u can say for a lot of authors.

It is quite good to read , later on it makes mc op and then lower his involvement in the cannon

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I think this fanfic is quite good, the author created a different storyline, okay I'll give it a rating like this first ............................

I do like the character and the story developed in the novel which get us involved in the Naruto world in different timeline. but I didn't get why people expect our world rule in Naruto and are getting offended because of some minor change in story. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------AMAZING WORK AUTHORE ---------------------------------------------KEEP IT UP ---------------------------------------------------------DON'T LISTEN STUPID COMMENTS -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------LASTLY IT A FAN FIC !!!! JUST HAVE TO ENJOY WHY SO SERIOUS ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------THANKS AUTHUR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It’s absolutely amazing, it’s just that there are some grammatical errors that annoy me because of my ocd.

My eyes hurt from reading this fic in huge chunks. Not a problem though; had fun the whole time. Favorite things: the humor used throughout and Izuna and his amusing ways of being a good older brother, dad, and husband. And seeing his personality rub off on other characters. Makes me laugh every time. Thank you, Life.

At first grammer of this novel truly disappointed me which leads me to drop the novel.After some time i again give a try to this nove, surprisingly the grammer turns out to be good and tha story is interesting.But to me adding the 'sin of seal' to MC is most disappointing.I think 'sin of seal' is the most frustrating part of this novel for me.I hope Author can pull it out in good way, apart from that i am okay with this novel.

I still don't understand how did this was viewed by 20 million people

I didn't get how mc could use sharingan without chakra? I mean he unlocked his chakra when he was 4 years old. didn't get it . lolololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololll

I don't like it. Not one bit. Give it a try though. Some people seem to like it even if I'm not one of them, but maybe you are.

This is one of the if not the best naruto fanfic. My experience of reading more than 50 Naruto fanfic can attest to that. Writing Quality: It has pretty good grammar and has fewer to no errors. Stability of updates: It's very rare for fanfics to cross 500 chapters and still have a stable update. This author has been writing for 2 years. Hats off to the author. Story development: you need to read at least 100 chs to get an idea of the story. The author is planning a grand story with lots of unique plots with carefully considered decisions. The starting 50chs will be rough as the author was starting out as an author but he improves really well. These chapters will little harder to understand, you gotta be patient. Character design: I can confidently character development is really good. If you ignore the rookie mistakes in the starting, the Main character along with the side characters have a huge play in the story. The story won't be just Izuna(MC) soloing everything. The side characters have a healthy development too. World development: Whatever i typed above

one of the best fanfic .like to have more chapters author atleast 2 chps a day hopes that the author will not drop the fanfic. the character design world background everything is good.

I absolutely love this story,the character development and writing quality is all good the only thing is the sin grimoire i dont really dislike it but it just makes the world too OP (well again this is only my opinion) but cant say i dislike this story, keep it up Author!