Reviews of The Secrets Untold by Nachetanya_Akira - Webnovel

Ohh myyy!!! My new obsession😍 and I am new here at Webnovel and I am so grateful that the first that I have read is THE SECRETS UNTOLD by AKIRA_NACHETANYA. I want to congratulate the author for doing a job well done:) And about the story I like the plot, the structure of the story, and how the flow of the story goes, the character's name is also beautiful I highly recommends this story guys:>

This is so good!!!! I like how the story goes and I just want to congratulate the author Nachetanya_Akira for making this book, I really love it!!!!❤ I really highly recommend this book.

You know what guys, I really appreciate the support and all to my first book ( The Secrets Untold ) Sorry for the slow update for this week I am really sick hehe, Anyways thanks for the support and if you have any suggestion to my story please let me know and I will gladly accept your suggestions and of course your opinion, Hope you guys like the story and if you didn't like it I am so sorry for that, We all have our own opinions and taste when it comes to stories and books, Sorry for all the grammatical errors, Wrong spellings and wrong structure of words, English is not my native language but I will do my best to correct all my mistakes Stay safe everyone and remember to always move forward[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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The character is very relatable, and that's probably the sole reason I'm hooked. It's mysterious at the same time since I'm dying to know what the secrets are. Writing style is nice, though there are few errors nothing that can distract the readers from having a good time reading Cheers to Aki! xoxo bleedingpapers

Exciting premise! The storyline is very promising with quite interesting characters. It's great on its own but it can still shine with a little bit editing. Good luck and keep on writing, author!

Very interesting concept... honestly can't say I've seen anything like this. Definitely got me curious. Keep it up author!!!

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Another marvelous story I found. One of a kind story, it has so much potential to be great. The concept itself has got me hooked. Reading through the chapters, I enjoyed myself without realizing the time has passed due to my interest in reading further. The development and flow of the story are written well. The Author knows how to weave and carve certain emotions to its readers that can leave us wanting for more. It is a talent! A remarkable talent that the Author has. Though, there are minor issues I would like to point out such as the grammar. There are no distracting errors, in my opinion. But, I think there are Singular-Plural verb tenses and words that should be re-checked. I suggest the author to use such as Grammarly or any app that can help the grammar technicality. So far, 10/10! Must-Read!

what can I say I'm liking it! I like the fl..her childhood friend and her music partner. the world background so far is being developed nicely, the character build as well. slowly but surely all the twists are being unfolded. and this...this is great I look forward to reading more as the story continues to unfold.

Hmmmm.... From the initial chapters I've read, I'm quite getting the vibe that this story has an emotional undertone. Stability, Characters and World - good job, although I'm looking for more but I understand its not easy since this is modern-world **** fic. Writing and Development - there were grammar errors here and there, which could use a little more proofreading to improve the quality of this story's writing. It leans too much on dialogues, and personally, I think it can be made better if you added a few more narrations, like description of the setting, or harnessing more emotions from the characters. The repetitive use of '___ said' and '___ asked' kinda irked me too, because there are far more creative ways to write a dialogue than just leave it like that. Suggestion, for example (1st person POV): I pouted a little when I realized too late the bad situation I'm currently in. Hailey noticed this, so she raised her eyebrows at me and inquired, "What's wrong? Hey, if you think you can't enter, you can just use my ID. Don't sweat it, its fine." In that way, the dialogues won't be bland. And at the same time, there won't be an overuse of the same phrase over and over again. Imagine yourself inside the dialogue, like what you will do, and begin from that. In short, add a little more wordplay in your narrations. That will give us more imagery. Hope you take this nicely. Your story has good promise. Cheers 🥂

The story is well written with the author improving as the work goes on. The characters and their dynamics are interesting and fun to read as well.

Honestly I really like these type of stories, as they remind me of a secret passion of mine, shoujo stories, as I read this, it was the vibe that I got (perhaps I'm wrong, but hey that's the vibe I got) I really liked the story the Author is telling here, the characters were all described very well and they are also really likable (the main lead was my favourite here) and the excellent writing (at least in my opinion) is pretty good. All in all keep it going, Author!

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I REALLY LOVE IT!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST STORY SO FAR THAT I HAVE READ AND IT'S NOT EVEN FAMOUS WHY?!!! DO ANYTHING TO MAKE THIS STORY FAMOUS I HIGHLY RECOMMEND IT AND I WILL SHARE THIS TO MY BOOKWORM FRIENDS HAHAHA!!!💖💝💝[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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I just started reading your book. Finished the prologue and I found the book very interesting. I am excited to see how this turns out. I enjoyed the writing style and you're doing a great job. Its remarkable for your first book.

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A little more for grammars, Good luck author for making this story a little bit wider, I am not a fan of books since I am busy but someone recommended me this app and the first thing that I read is this book, It's not famous I think but I know it will be, The book and the whole story is good and the author did a good job of showing and letting my imaginations control me, It's a good job and thumbs up for the author of this book, Was it, Nachetanya_Akira

I am not really a fan of music even mysteries but I am a fan of the harem and this story gave me what I want to read, I am now a big fan of this story, I want to send a gift to the author but it's not yet a premium so I guess I will only vote but if this story becomes so famous remember me

just searching for a good and mystery novel when I found this the Secrets untold, It's pretty good and I love how the story goes, You did a good job author Nachetanya_Akira, Hope to read your other story too Unexpected Romance with you

Like The story, Nachetanya_Akira I think you have the potential to be a good author keep it up, Your imaginations are wide hope I can read all of the chapters so please finish it

I like the plot of the story and how it goes, It's just that the grammar Author but I understand since you are from the Philippines right? Anyways I love your first story I saw that you have as a new story but It said coming soon I am so excited for it

This story is good, This is my new addiction, I just hope that the author can publish more of the chapters I really want more author give me give me

Highly recommended!!!! This book is good and the progress of the story keeps getting interesting, I will share it with my friends who read webnovel Author good job, and thank you for sharing this book and creation to us

this is what we call a mystery life, I really love how you express every character's emotion and how you made this a really good story, Music and Mystery? What? You are a great author indeed keep it up!!!!

pssshhhhh so unfair Author why does Calesie have the pink hair, HAHAHAHA I love Calesie so much because she is pure and innocent, I like girls like that I hope they are real especially Clios and Deyro I feel like they are the Male lead here

what a beautiful story author, There are so many men around the female lead, I hope I am her, Joke anyway good job author keep on writing and I will keep on reading your work and be your supporter