Was a really amazing read! It took me a while as I am a slow reader but well oh my god, it doesn't disappoint at all. Writer have done a great work and I'll be looking forward to more : )
I'm jealous...
Such great grammar and flow in telling the story...
Got a clear image of characters in my mind~
very interesting as I cannot wait how she would take her revenge...
Nice work~
Good luck, Author.
Wow, you're honestly superb with descriptions that it was easy-peasy to create vivid scenarios in our heads. I am a sucker for strong female leads so seeing Aurora all fierce and dominant really make me giddy and proud. I also must say you wrote a super intriguing synopsis. My only personal recommendation are avoid using excessive punctuations(personally, I don't find it nice) and please be gentle with flooding us with characters and their POV(I felt kinda overwhelmed). So far the story is going smooth sailing and I'm thrilled where it begins to go down crazy and hyped.
PS. The novel's cover photo rocks!!!
The story is well detailed and also describe her surrounding like she is in a close room and she a noble girl. I got to read more though.
keep it up author.👍
This novel had the execellent grammar what I looking for. The story development was narrated successfully and you coudn't see any flaws. I had a big hope for this novel, so please, gimme more chapter 😁😁
Loved it! It's very well written, and the storytelling is amazing.
Will definetely come back for more! Good job honey <3
Five stars from a new fan, hehe.
There is a lot of novels that are writing in POV, that I don't like, but I like more when I read it in your work, I didn't dislike it! Keep going, your story can improve in grammar, but the rest is cool. Hope to read more!
Definitely worth the five... I love this book... I don't mean 'love' casually... I mean I LOVE this book and it's definitely worth the read. Please author... Gimme more chapters 😍😍😍😍
This novel was lit! Good grammar and writing already have such quality! Slight edits that have to be made and boom! It will be a bomb that will explode in my mind. I can't wait to see it coming! Nice narration and point of views. Already veteran when it comes to switching Third-person narration and first. I am quite jealous of the author's writing quality itself. All in all a good hooking read! Nice! 👍
The writing style is excellent. Easy to understand. the descriptions are also well done.
You know it's a good read from the prologue. good luck to the author for the rest of the story.
one piece of advice -- might work on viewpoint. I felt extremely uncomfortable during the transition.
This is super interesting! The plot really shows that this story is going to be much different than any other story I have read! I simply love Aurora and I can't wait for what fate holds for her in the future. She is really a mysterious character for me. Also, I like the idea of how you give different povs to every other character- so we can know what they're thinking.
Jasper is also an interesting character and I'm quite intrigued with what will happen next
LOVED THIS NOVEL!
Captivating storyline. I liked the starting and the story developed pretty well in further chapters. Story detailing is clear and the writing style is well written. I'm totally shipping for Aurora and Jasper. I liked the author's creative and unique ideas in the story. added to my library. Keep up the good work, Author!
This book is amazunggggggg!!!
Really, I'm in love with Aurora already and my ship has sailed for she and Jasper!!
Please do continue. You guys should really try this out, you wont regret it.
Very interesting story. Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
LEMME KNOW LEMME KNOW LEMME KNOW WWHEN THERE' A NEW CHAPTER, BECAUSE I'M FREAKIN HOOKED, this needs attention errbody needs to red this, i wish the best
This book is severely underrated it has good grammar, an interesting plot, and it is professionally written.
Please don't drop this it will probably get more attention.
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