ja estou nessa site a um bom tempo e esse รฉ a primeira obra q eu avalio, realmente muito boa e cantivante, espero que continue postando [img=recommend]
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I pleasantly enjoyed this novel and you deserve this 5star review. It has just the type of character that I like and I am hooked. Good day to you and I hope you continue writing.
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I think it's time to leave this novel...like many novels this novel also going to leave us in midways....it was a good novel....
m removing u from my library...thank u for those lovely hipe moments...I feel during reading this novel...c ya
plz update more chapters atleast 2 chapters per day .......I really like this novel.....hope u ll keep my request....may b there r more like me....who wants to read more chapters of this......plz pllz....
Really good novel! Letโs start !
Writing quality: Perfect. Easy and smooth reading, no mistakes and all cool!
Stability of updates: Here we have missed days from time to time so 4* as itโs not so often.
Story development: Nice and creative. Really fun to read (except some chapters about business but nothing serious).
Character design is realistic even with system implementation, just some of mc decisions from time to time seem irrational (like he had good business but now he doesnโt want to do it again as he has sport and does something else. Like really, did anyone protest that they have too much money? The only decision in the novel that for me seem bizzare. He could allow his mother to take care of it as she is housewife with 2 ***** children and ex bankier. Always assurence for family โJust in caseโ.
World background normal but you can see the Author though it through.
Overall I would really recommend the novel for all to read!
Author I like how your story is going ryt now but still I would like to mention some things:-
1. First about the system, do not make the system spoon feed the skills to the mc, we should be able to see him rise through his own hardwork the system should be there only as a support. Make him lose if you have to, but make sure he has genuine skills and is not winning because he has the system.
2. You have picked up football for your sports novel and you have a great advantage because of this, there is no other football based sports novel on this site.
3. As you have just started you should increase your chapter release rate as it helps to attract readers to the novel. As you know in the beginning the pace is slow so more chapters always help.
4. Also don't make the games too long, don't stretch them for too many chapters, just focus on the important parts. Keep your story's pace a bit fast and give the MC some good friends both girls and boys.
Well that's about it. Good luck author and keep writing more chapters. I
please man, don't mind the haters. please continue the novel. We don't have any decent sports novels. all soccer abilities are mine have only 40 chapters. please don't drop this
I like it keep up the good work
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i am enjoying it quite a lot, it is not exactly the greatest story ever written or has a very intricate plot, but it is nice to read and enjoy for football fans. Would recommend 9/10
Very good story and plot development. Please do not drop it and keep updating. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I donโt how to write a review, bare with me. I like how this novel going somewhere, itโs really interesting and keep writing more maybe you will reach the TOP1. ๐๐้ ๅผตใฃใฆใใ ใใ๏ผ^_^
You can do it. Keep going and don't give up, block the hatters.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐จโ๐ง๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐๐คค๐๐๐๐โบ๐๐๐๐๐คข๐คง๐ณ๐คฎ๐จโ๐ณ๐ฉโ๐๐๐คฎ๐คซ๐ค๐ณ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบ๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฉโ๐ณ๐จโ๐ง๐ฉโ๐ผ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐คจ๐๐ค๐๐๐ฒ๐๐ฒ๐พ๐ฝ๐ค๐ค๐คข๐ต๐๐ฉโ๐พ๐ฉโ๐พ
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