Hello everyone. This will be my last message here.
First of all, I have no intention at all to continue this story. Since I cannot delete the novel, I do some edit based on some opinion I get from asking around because I am afraid the sin will continue. Even so, I cannot continue the story. I am sorry.
Second, I read a few comments asking me to give the story to other author. I want to but I cannot do that because the idea is mine and if the story continues, I am considered to take part in the story. So, I am afraid I will still get the sin. So, once again, I am sorry.
Lastly, I am really sorry to everyone again. I hope everyone can forgive me. Thank you.
was an enjoyable read with dynamif characters and a unique system that really drew you in but the author had some kind of religious dilemma over the novel so instead of trying to tweak bits to make it suitable to continue they gave up on writing it. Wish they would've tried to continue on with a different approach or something but cant be helped
loving this book so far, got a great structure and not many spelling mistakes however in the latest chapters it goes on about the side characters and not about the mc who is who I want to read about. but apart from that great job and keep up the good work
Announcement to all my readers
I have asked around and it is fine for me to write this story.
However, I need to change a few things and these things may be big to the story. I will need some time to change everything so, there will be no new chapters for the next few days.
I hope the changes I make will still be enjoyable for everyone.
I am sorry and I hope everyone will understand me.
I usually like these kinds of stories with the character getting a cheat system and all that, but I have to say that this story goes above what I've seen before in stories such as this. The author seems very nice and I always enjoy authors that are active and put messages into their chapters. I don't know enough about how often the author uploads new chapters so I can't say much on that but I enjoy reading and will continue to do so.
This is a good and refreshing piece of work. The character development and the world background are pretty well done, the interaction between the user, his family and the system are something I find myself enjoying quite a bit while reading this
awesome novel , well defined story at least u know where systems are coming from , with each person having system atleast stats can be seen by everyone , whereas in other novel only mc is privy of that info. and talent is well defined everyone know what theirs is unlike in other novel only some super dooper strong people can feel talent of a person.
Keep up the good work buddy u r doing great , and u know pun between system and universe guardian 😂
the core story is great and the characters are really solid I'm on almost 400th chapter and still no harem for you harem haters my big problem with it is the beginning off the book is rough and dont always make sense gets much better as you read but theres lots of repeats such as paragraphs and even some chapters and this author is sooooo long winded and likes to to do a lot of shameless filler (think naruto) not the storyline but filler writing style with great core story
Really loving this story so far!! System stories can be hit or miss with me, but I really like what you are doing with the system. Looking forward to where you take this story.
The only criticism I have is the English is not the best, but it is certainly not the worst I've read on this site either.
I really think this novel deserves a high rating, good quality, likable characters, the great clans aren't extremely arrogant they have a good understanding and actual members listen to the elders, no jealousy. The Pokémon aspect is polished and still uniquely its own thing. Main character actually trains hard, and soon his family will not be bottom feeders aswell, no desperate protecting of his family. Good work, keep it up.
Tl;dr at bottom
To anyone who is tired of waiting for astral pet store to update and are looking for something similar, i would not recommend this series. It is basically the opposite, in APS the story maily revolves about the store, the system is stingy, and su ping is selfish, and in this the story is mostly focused on lucas training, the system is too generous, and lucas is too kind and borderline useless. And because it seems that this story is building itself up to be the opposite to APS its just not as interesting, I have problems other than the story only being a subversion of expectations set up by APS, the first is that the system is too cheat, there has never really been any challeng for lucas, second the power sytem is a little too specific it becomes ridiculous, and finally the characters are either bland and one dimensional or unlikable.
Tl;dr it just feels like the entire schtick of this series is to subvert expectations, ours or the people in the book, and it really suffers for that. Its not abhorrantly bad but ist not that spectacular either.
So far.. it's good. It's different from the astral pet but good. Love the nursery system and was name Sery. hehehe. Love the interaction of the family as well. His goal making the cute monster to be strong was also genius. hehehe
keep it up man your doing great I wish you had a clone or two but hey still doing great and the book is still great as well if you haven't read it yet then .......IDK what your waiting for go...go....read the book..........why are you still here......lol
Love this novel come check it out. it's got pets and an evil bugs bunny race and everyone's got a system and some people lm e have better systems even and can even be shared with family. c9me check it out!!!
Hmmm Thee Novel is good but at the sametime its plain no fun i mean no strugles he always put the problem to system like hes dont have a commonsese ehh butt maybe hes going to mature So 4.0 all i can give to this novel idont have a problem about grammar or other cause its easy to read but its too plainnn BUT STILL GOODDD
I love this book its one of my favourites I have to say that tHis is one of the beSt monster tamer type books ive read and ive read alOt of them It also has a great system which although revoles around the nursery it still encourages and helps Its master become stronger
In my opinion it is not only a great system novel buf also a great tamer/pet book And you Should definitely read it
Ps. im up to date with thIs book and loads other if anTone has recommendations for grEat tamer or system novels pls tell me xx