Love this novel come check it out. it's got pets and an evil bugs bunny race and everyone's got a system and some people lm e have better systems even and can even be shared with family. c9me check it out!!!
I should give this five stars because the author does come out with 2 chapters daily but hes so good that I WANT MORE MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...MUAH...!!! KEEP IT UP BRO...π
Hmmm Thee Novel is good but at the sametime its plain no fun i mean no strugles he always put the problem to system like hes dont have a commonsese ehh butt maybe hes going to mature So 4.0 all i can give to this novel idont have a problem about grammar or other cause its easy to read but its too plainnn BUT STILL GOODDD
I love this book its one of my favourites I have to say that tHis is one of the beSt monster tamer type books ive read and ive read alOt of them It also has a great system which although revoles around the nursery it still encourages and helps Its master become stronger
In my opinion it is not only a great system novel buf also a great tamer/pet book And you Should definitely read it
Ps. im up to date with thIs book and loads other if anTone has recommendations for grEat tamer or system novels pls tell me xx
Good Writing Quality and a relative new background for the world. Thats a job well done.
The characters till now have a personality, but sadly the MC could rival japanese protagonists with the kind of Beta and always be good behavior. Only point to be sad about.
I have read up to 23 chapters and I like the story.
I recommend giving this story a try(beyond chapter 1 - Chapter 1 is more an introduction/summary to give background to the start of the story, which is setting up the shop. Which is fine for me. From the summary, I expect the story to start there and not before. And then having to read dozens of chapters just to get to the starting line).
Grammer:
Noticed 1 or 2 small typos, but that's it. The rest is fine in my eyes. Nothing that would disturb the "reading flow".
Story Development:
From what I have read now, I like what I have read and like where it's going.
Character Design:
The main character(Lucas) and system are likeable to me. The support characters(Lucas's Mother and sister) are reasonable and come across as real "persons". The passerby characters also behave reasonable like a real human would.
World Background:
Can't say much to it. Haven't read enough about it to have an opinion.
Well, first of all, I'll say that I love this novel. Now why do I love it and why the 5 stars will be explained. (I'm at the 100th chapter)
1. Writing quality
- While the authors makes some minor mistakes here and there, the grammar is above 90% of the novels on this app. Moreover, if you spot an error and write it in the commentary section, the author will fix it. As such, I gave this section 5 stars.
2. Updating stability
- Since I started this novel, the author has released 2 chapters per day every day without forgetting or taking a day off. So, I'll give this section 5 stars.
3. Story development
- This novel is going great. It is neither too slow nor too fast, just perfect (even tho I would have loved for the character to increase his cultivation and his number of tamed monsters faster. However, I'm not the author so, I won't be mad for that haha). Secondly, we see that the story has a goal and it's getting more and more interesting to read the novel as the chapters increases. So, I'm giving a 5 stars here.
4. Character design
- For the characters, we see a development in how the act and how they improve upon themselves. I totally love how they develop their own characters and we can easily see the improvement. I rarely read something which has such a perfect character development so, 5 stars straigt.
5. World background
The world background is well written and developped. I really have nothing more to say here since I don't want to spoil anyone. However, I will for a certain point since it could make a lot of readers drop it. In this world, systems exists for everyone but they are basics. However, there exists cheat systems or super system as I like to call them. There have been a few of those systems and only the top of the world and their user knows about them. So, it's not actually necessary to 'hide' their system like in other novels. Well, there are a lot of explanation and you'll understand it as long as you give it a chance. So, for such an exceptional world background and difference in system, I decided to give it 5 stars.
I hope you enjoy this great novel cause I sure do!
Have a great day, and thank you author for writing such an incredible story!
well rounded and well pleasing this story has got it. its fast paced and stays pretty exciting if you came looking for a good pet store story that has decent grammar and pretty good writing this is it. I even wish I had found it later so I could binge read it all lol
this book has good grammar and a good storyline that really grabs you by the heart strings and leads you around. the pets ain't bad either I look forward to reading more but unfortunately I'm caught up. I will say I'm still waiting on tha I mass release though
if your a pet fan then this is for you. y9u wont regret it. it's also got everybody in the story with a system and unique cheater systems can be shared with family
This novel is like black internet cafe system but with a monster tamer concept or like astral pet store with good background development.This novel is like slice of life at early chapters then it will improve to adventures.So if you like Astral pet store or black internet cafe system but with a friendly system then you will love this novel.I just hope that lucas mind development will become faster and overcome his trauma specially aftet his father died and lucas to have his "Main Goal" to his life.Also it will be interesting if lucas have one or some mythical pet ofcouse its still okay even he does not have.Looking forward for the upcomming updates ^_^ keep up the good work author
As of now I've only read 8 or so chapters of this novel and I can say fully that this story is good. But also needs improvement. While the characters and story is good, the fluency and how he writes can use some work. The sentences can have some minor grammar mistakes and the fluency can be flawed at times. But I can say that reading this novel is doable as his mistakes so far aren't as severe as what I have seen from others. The author also has a thing for either explaining a little too much or explaining later than what you would expect to be explained. Overall, this novel is worth it if you, the reader, are fond of systems, magic/fantasy, pets, and other op stuff. With some improvement, I believe that the author may have the capability to create a wonderful novel.
Bueno pero se puede mejorar en primera tal vez un compromiso arreglado por parte de su familia materna que la conozca durante la escuela y que se ayuden sin que se peleen cada 4 de 5 discuciones
Mc is too pure and childish(Naive).How can someone like him survive without cheat and luck. This novel is only suited for childrens. Writings quality is good. I would prefer if the mc don't have a family because it becomes his weakness.
published by far as the new England journal of the American society of god at a time when a man who had never share the same feelings as a child in his
The novel so far is entertaining and endearing, the MC has a family, is humble, a little bit naive and with a behavior according to his age. So if you are for heartwarming and Pokemon like experience, this novel may be what you want.
i haven't really read the novel yet but yeah just reading the synopsis made me love it immediately!π I love systems and since this is also about pets...Hurray for me! π₯° seeing that there is only a few reviews, i decided to add mine tooπ
great story, the story of the story is really great and the background of the shop. There is a few story that have pets fighting one another like pokemon, I enjoy those storys
Great story. A premise you can indulge in, characters you can empathise with. A world whose growth you can be excited for.
The author seems to be new to writing this type of story as there are so many poorly explained conveniences. However, the work oozes potential and with the way it is going, it seems the author will grow in the future. I, for one, am excited for that.
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