Reviews of OUTRUNNING TIME by Dvanzy6 - Webnovel

Hello lovely readers! This is your author, shamelessly giving her own book a review. I'm extremely pleasured to tell you all that our book got contracted!! I'll try to update everyday and please don't hesitate to share your suggestions in the comments. All your opinions will be strongly valued. Your votes and gifts shall mean a lot to me. Thank you so much for being such considerate readers! Regards Dvanzy6 ❤

Amazing story, absolutely stunning and definitely one of the better ones on Webnovel. The development is fantastic. The characters are awesome. The story instantly gets readers hooked and has them begging for more. The world background is great for this sort of story because tons of it are not necessary for this kind of time-tested thriller. My only minor complaint is I'd like to you to label the chapters and given them titles. It would be a nice touch. I'll still give you 5 stars for creativity though. You are welcome to check out my story, "Avatar: Macai's Journey".

In your story, you deal with many very difficult issues, such as suicide, rejection, mother's trauma after the child's death, life after death, or the existence of spiritual beings, and many other related issues. The plot is intriguing and your main characters are also. Well done! I hope Ophelia will overcome her traumas, deal with the rejection, understands her mother... and Xavier will understand that life is not easy for anyone... One thing ;) For the future, remember that jumping between POVs shows the imperfection of the author's workshop.

Overall: This is a very good novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a girl named Ophelia who'll embark on a journey to save a boy who committed suicide, and at the same time evade death itself. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially Ophelia. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy romance genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.

Dear author, your book are totally great. Just wanted to say that I find your story are totally interesting! Please keep up your excellent work 😆😆 Also, if you have time kindly check out my book too!

The book has a pretty cover but in my opinion, it still has some room for improvement. If the title could be made into an ambiguous one, it will attract a lot of people. I loved the synopsis! It hasn't given out the suspense and one would definitely be intrigued to read it, although it could be made a bit longer and slightly improved. The story is rather interesting but the chapters need to be longer and more engaging. Some parts of the story are great but with an addition of details, the story will definitely be amazing.

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The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins]

Oh Wow! Our story had a bit similarity in the soulmate stuff, while yours is with time, mine is colorblind🤣🤣 it hooked me up just from the synopsis! The beginning is goodx and ophelia... such a relatable one💜 good job author! keep it up!

The first chapter itself touched me. It started off on a dark tone. As the story progressed, though, the author brings out the little delights in the dark world. It's a leisurely read and is quite enjoyable. Keep it up!

I absolutely love this book! I highly recommend it. Not to mention the writer has some writing skills, and consistent grammar as well. Kudos to the author. [img=recommend]

an amazing and heart-warming novel! I have yet to read more and Ophelia is so relatable as a person! I love the story line and the route the plot takes and hopes she is able to save Xavier! love both their names by the way❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I have read the initial chapters and i liked it already. Author did a great work in the character development. I loved the pace of the novel. Want to read more.Keep updating author.😊😊❤

So far so gooood am loving it congrats .....☺☺☺i wish Ophelia goodluck she can do it ...I hope she does actually 15 days to goo ..I just hope Xavier can help easen things ..and Damon too

I realized that I'm already turning the pages, I alsooo like Ophelia so much and also Xavier. I can somewhat relate to them both. I like the way you write it, its detailed. keep writing :))

This is an amazing **** novel. I only read its initial chapters but I liked it. Its an interesting novel with nice character development and story plot. Wish best wishes to author. Keep writing and updating. ALL THE BEST.....[img=recommend]

OMO. I love your book. It has a very interesting story line that really captured my interest. Also, the cliffhangers at the end leaves you wanting for more. I greatly recommend this book. It's worth reading. :D I'll keep reading too. :)

i like the story line and enjoyed the book in general. keep up the good work!

So where do I start? lol just kidding! I read the first chapter and I was immediately hooked the moment I started! It's an intriguing read and I always loved time travel novels. The plot line looks interesting and I'm intrigued to learn how things will turn out! Btw, the opening lines were amazing, author! well done! great job! 👌👍😌😊 Keep updating! 🌸👍

This is an amazing novel. I read only initial chapters but still I found it very interesting. Want to read more. Dear author please make sure to update new chapters regularly. keep it up 👍 Best wishes for future work ❤️

This deserves 5 rating... the first chapter itself makes you hooked up with the story and the author succeeded in making readers curious.. The cliff hangers are simply 👌👌👌

I really liked this novel. The story plot and pace is just awesome. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon. Good job author.

Although I have only read 11 chapters but I can already tell that it's going to be a good story. And I liked the plot. I am hoping to see more interactions between characters. I hope she will be able to save them both. The writing is good & smooth flow. I didn't feel that author is trying to rush. So, I enjoy while reading it. Keep up.

I love this book so much.I keep reading it and wait desperately for the bexr chapter to come out .Look forward to reading more if your books because u really are a great writer❤❤❤❤

Liking the novel so far. keep up the good work and i think this novel will blosom into a great book in the future. 👍

The book is really good... The character discription and the story description are really nice... I'm looking forward to read next Chapters 😊

Really a nice book author! The start is too sweet with that small description it really pulled me into reading more if it. Keep going, WOW! It's in my collections.. keep it up! keep it up!