CONSIDER THIS A SHAMELESS SELF PROMOTION FROM THE AUTHOR. I HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY MY WORK AND THE JOURNEY OF BUILDING CIVILIZATION. PLEASE RATE THE STORY IF YOU ENJOY IT!
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Really nice story about being Transmigrated to a prehistoric world and becoming the leader of a tribe.
Good use of Modern Knowledge in combination with Kingdom Building.
The MC's main love interest has the curiosity and scientific mind of a modern person, maybe even more in many cases.
But, I don't know if we're ever going to see him become the emperor because the author seems to have stopped updating since about 4 months ago.
this is NO for me i'm not even gonna bother continuing reading it not gonna i thought it was a good story but turns trash very quickly
3 star for writing quality
2 star for story development
2 star for character design (describe as people with animal pelt bruhπ)
2 star for update stability (once a monthπ)
2 star for world building (lacked of description not that i would bother reading it for 40 chp ain't got no time for that
another 1 star for because a lot of people seems to spam 5 star even it's even worth it just because they can(Must be spam not or somethin dunno)
Review chapter 1-62. I'm giving this one a five star for now, the MCs logic is quite hmm believable but sometimes annoying and the author knows he needs to add logic in every possible way because of the worldbuilding but..
I'm curious how they are communicating and words just translate but how do you explain words so foreign like fashion to a caveman and they somehow grasp it?
the story is very entertaining.
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I really love the theme of the book and the goals and I like how the mc takes time to change. I enjoyed reading the chapters so please don't drop the book
An interesting story, it's a pity that there are so few chapters. Maybe someone knows similar novels with getting into the past, the development of tribes, etc
Intersting story this far. Characters are intersting. Realeas frequency is less frequent than i would prefer but the story is moving in an intersting direction.
I am really loving this story so far I just hope for a new chapter soon or at least tell us if you dropped the story or if its a weekly update or monthly
Great book!! This has good plots and understanding of Stone Age. It shows the survival, the struggle, and how the MC introduce new technology to help with his tribe to overcome hardship. I canβt wait for him to become emperor.
I'm not yet a reader, but I'm hoping your storh will reach a million views before this year ends. I will come back for my next review. I'd love to read tribe stories and found a little. Thanks.
Your trying to put too many things into movement. Focus on one part of the plot and improve on that then the story will be easier to follow. However, i like this story even though its slow paced at times its also intresting. Deffinately not one of those stories you can flick through easily you gotta commit to enjoy this story!
Very intresting story, with slow and very Well made tribe development. The fact that you can read how happy and passionate the tribsmen are after every small quality of live update from Edward puts the smile on my face.
Great Idea but too many ascenin things the priotities of the mc are all over thje place and he is supposed to a survivalist. so much potential but not maximized not a bad read tho
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! πͺπͺ
Great Idea, terrible execution ... like 90% of the novels in the Original-Section
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Honestly, this novel is a gem. I've only ever found a couple of other novels that were this good, and I've read many. I'm sad that there aren't hundreds of chapters, but I guess that just means I'm early to the bandwagon. I hope the author gets a lot more support from others so this novel can keep going strong.
I'm giving this a four solely based on the solid synopsis!!!!
This novel is giving me a good feeling, hopefully t would be a good one and the author won't drop it.
I really like this story. I think its pretty taught out and I love the fact of an modern person teaching primitive people things as well. I recommend reading this
A well written story that is occasionally mired with grammatical errors, however they do not detract from the reading much. The setting of the story is interesting: it's an isekai with a prehistoric twist made possible with the help of cliff-kun (since trunk-san was on holiday). Some people might get triggered by the fact that the MC got cucked so soon in the plot, but it really is just setting the story and quickly gets shuffled away so don't judge the story and drop it so quickly.
Again, there were some errors grammatically speaking, but it's not that bad. One thing that I think does need improving is the characters' description. For example, Night, the only thing I know about her is that she's got dark eyes, tanned, and has toned legs. That's it. Not much to go on. Other than that, there's not much else to complain about.
Oh but there's one thing and this isn't the author's fault. It's just ... I was laughing with tears when I read the synopsis and even when reading parts of the story. I mean, in this setting - the prehistoric setting - were the girls really beautiful? I mean ... I don't think they had brushes so uh ... kissing is ... yeah. Then there's ... they barely had knives so no scissors or shears ... which means bushy outta control body hair. And I'm part of the shave/trim team so ... yeeaaahhh.
But I digress. The point is, the story's good and give it a shot.
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The story is well written and I especially like some of the language choices that the author uses. The action and the drama is compelling. The plot is also unique and interesting.
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