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Faolan
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Faolan

I'm just gonna keep this simple. Dweia, the author, knows what she/he is doing. The other book on here written by her/him, 'A Remnant of The Ancients' hooks you as fast as this one. The end of each chapter has you craving for answers and thirsting for more. The spelling and grammar is flawless, and the character building is superb! Make sure you definitely give this book and the author a chance, I promise you won't miss out!
3yr
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_MASTER_
The description of the novel is more like a future event. Character is the usual beta MC with not so well family. No 'friends' but somehow he hangs out with the popular ones. He doesn't understand why people behave the way they behave. It's like everyone owes him something and he expects too much from friends he barely met a week ago but is kinda indebted to them, maybe because they are the first friends he ever had. _ So far, there's no direct description of the VR-world. _ Story development is simply amazing. And because of MCs character, the story always gets me on edge as if something is about to happen. Got me completely hooked up. Didn't like the part where MC is in a scheme before the story even developed, the story hasn't directly given a hint but I can tell. Strong SAO vibes but I'm sure there's something different and author has plans for it. Well thought background of MCs friends. No grammatical errors and I realised that I didn't once binge read and read word to word. _ Updates are fast. _ Take away my powerstones.
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3yr
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NightGale35
I was hooked from the start. I like a fast-paced story with solid background. The author has a good grasp on the main plot and the characters develop nicely while the story unfolds. There were some times that the plot wavered but the end is satisfactory. The world background (well the novel in general) is very detailed with plenty of descriptions. Though it actually was overwhelming for me at times sinse every little detail was more or less important. πŸ˜… A story well written to say the least, a bit dark maybe. In my opinion this story isn't so much about revenge, neither is it a watertight hero vs villain scenario. It is one of those novels where everyone can read it and form their own opinion. It is worth reading. Thank you for the time and effort, Dweia!
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asphyxia778
The start while a bit confusing was interesting but the MC repeatedly ignores his gut instincts and naively trusts people he shouldn't. There's no breathing time at all because MC is used and swindled by one person after the otherOther players know more about him than he does himself and his class growth is very confusing. especially the distribution of the stats. Literally everyone knows more about MC's class than the MCMC keeps saying he won't naively trust again but he ends up doing just that. His personality is definitely not stable cause at one moment he acts out but he becomes a doormat in front of his so called friends. MC's history also isn't shown and the hints dropped are not given any resolution. Overall MC's foolish decisions made me drop this. He got tangled in a subordinate contract twice! ugh this had potential but it ruined it
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mike_mullins
I really enjoyed the chapters I've read, and i have to say this work of art is on par with Shadow Slave (that's the novel I've probably spent the most coins on). I just have one request for the author. MOAR!
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ealdgyth
A story I picked up during an event, and then stayed with till the end. The fact that it actually swayed me from the Trilogy I’ve been reading for the last couple of years says A LOT. I appreciate the fact that this is not just a completed work, but that it has a tight and fast-paced plotβ€”unlike most of the serial stories here with no denouement in sight. I won’t say more about the vivid imagery and world building, or the well fleshed out and very relatable characters as other reviewers have already mentioned. What makes this stand out for me is how clean and well written it is (hello, grammar!), a few lapses in details but nothing that detracts from the overall feel of the storyβ€”reason why I give it a less than perfect score, as there is always room to grow and improve. Excellent use of foreshadowing and flags that add just the right touch of suspense, and boom! several plot twists to keep readers on edge. Keeping this in my library for future re-reading. Very highly recommended!
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7white_wolf7
The choices the author makes are ridiculous, it's painful to read the decisions he makes the Mc make, and every other word someone has to 'flinch' at something. This is better than some, but it's gross and I don't like it.
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TyDO
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TyDO

This was a beautiful, gripping, comprehensive book to read. I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter.
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DarkX24
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DarkX24

this book is either a hit or miss, as you start off the mc is pretty good but as you ready you can see how much of a pushover he is and he becomes almost stupid, he never trusts his gut, and he forces someone to do something then questions there motive on why they did it like he didn't force them too. he doesn't learn from his mistakes so he constantly makes them! last be not least there's forced romance, a female character suddenly starts liking him out of nowhere, there is barely platonic interaction between him and her yet she suddenly like him, so it doesn't make any sense. I stopped reading after the pay wall showed up,it's not worth buying
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Blinddesire
the synopsis broke what could of been a good story. i couldn't read past more than a few chapters, because thinking about the synopsis kept bothering me. it felt like i was constantly waiting for the prologue to end a synopsis should give a rough idea what the story is about. i do wish to know why the author wrote it that way.
2yr
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Shouting_Monk_584
Description is misleading. I've read to ch23. Mc shows typical traits of someone who has been abused (so trigger warning). Story is not reincarnation (I guess I somehow got that from the death scene in the description). Mc is trapped in a game/alternate world.
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Relz
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Relz

This book gets 5 stars from me because it managed to tell a whole story from beginning to end. It didnt stretch anything on for too long like most webnovles do. Its a complete book that i spent more money on than i would on a physical book. FML.
2yr
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Apostle_of_Noice
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cookiefan22
The story is pretty interesting so far, but I'm still waiting for the scene in the synopsis to occur. Everything I've read so far just feels like build up. The synopsis is clearly a future event, but it seems like the main plot of this story won't start until after the main character dies. I'm undecided on whether or not to keep reading this.
2yr
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Kakkarotto
Very good writing quality but very poor story design . There is no sense of anticipation in the first half of the story because of the synopsis.
2yr
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Master_Of_gu
False summary, just a hoax from the writer. A trivial novel, a hero, friends, a skirt girl, a trivial novel like the rest of the novel .hjkllllllkkkkkkkkkkkk
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WinterTexan
All in all a good read πŸ‘ I enjoyed the world building, the different characters and the way the storyline is built. Tho if I may, I believe that by the end the author rushed things up a bit since even not being an english speaker as a first language myself, many mistakes where apparent in the last chapters that where not present in the earlier ones
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BlackBeautybunny
This is an amazing story filled with action, suspense, and a whole lot of discovery. I loved this story. It was very well written and developed. I highly recommend giving it a shot.
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Jrk234
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Jrk234

I truly enjoyed thIs story! I cannot give it any hIgher praise, the characters are very well written and the plot is wonderful too. ?????
2yr
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EIo_Police
the fact that the synopsis is not the start of the story but a far away event in the future makes the synopsis redundant. ppl read a book based on the synopsis because it sheds light on what to expect. But here ppl read the synopsis and then wonder why after all those chapters nothing happens. It's like this synopsis is from another book. very disappointing since I couldn't care less about the boring build up for his betrayal by his 'friends'. The worst part is that the story should only start after he dies and the endless chapters right now are filler chapters.
2yr
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Shadyrealm
Great story, insane plot within a plot. I only wish that there were more than one chapter a day. The characters are good, and their personalities are pretty fleshed out. The story definitely keeps you guessing.
2yr
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DiminishingLight
163 chapters of prologue. Which indecent, demented, messed up person would write something like this? The entire story is just clichΓ© over clichΓ© over clichΓ© on an infinite loop. I would rather search up spritecranberry.com before reading this webnovel.
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shacochan
I've read 60 chapters so far and this review will be based on them. The story is not original then again nothing is. The writing is mediocre. It lacks constant conflict resulting in a tedious read. Adding to that a main character with poor charcter development and sometimes irrational decisions prompt me to drop the novel. The author is adamant on keeping the main character naive even tho he's struggled with events that would break his naivety. Most characters are one dimensional not even questioning the world. characters morals aren't even explored. players kill monsters without batting an eye like it's normal. Is it a justifiable action just because they think it's a game when it mirrors realism? It's an ok read I guess I you want to binge without thinking much. If you are looking for an immersive world with details and believable characters, look elswhere.
3yr
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AnthonyCerbic
The summary would make you believe the MC was somehow abused or mistreated. I've read the prologue (which is frustratingly long and lasts 5 chapters) and nothing of sorts is happening. In fact, everyone is super-nice to him and he is the one who acts weird and extremely paranoid. To main character, Kai, is some introverted kid with inferiority complex so deep, he flinches even when people give him compliments. He can't talk to his mother, he can't talk to his landlady and he can barely communicate with his new friends. If (on of his friends) wasn't so social and kept inviting him in, he'd probably never had any friends at all. All along the story (as far as I read) he is complaining on an on in his head, feeling miserable for no reason, even when his friends offer him amazing adventure, he somehow twists it in his head to feel like a victim of kidnapping. Its like if you constantly hear ominous music playing in the background of his life... Really, if something bad happens to him in the story, I would feel satisfaction. He probably deserves it at some point.
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SacarothIsWriting
Yeah, just the synopsis got you five stars, man. That was incredible, just reading that. Nice Job, bout to start reading. Placeeeeeee Filler
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GoodForNothing_776
I kinda Disappointed Because The Synopsis Doesn't Related To The Story, But The Story Is Still Good. Hope To Clarify What Is The Plot To....
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ShiLOh
Future event synopsis ruined it for me. Not a big fan of that. It was a major spoiler. I Wasted my time reading this. ___________________
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vishal_singh_0552
I like the plot you are doing in each chapter unquie good I hope the gets better and better. Even the grammar portions were also great hope you keep on doing this in a long run.
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Gabriel_Ursu
The synopsis is no good, you practically spoils the reader, create a background of enterily sth else u write, even put reincarcation in tags for what. Is like we can skip all the story to the part of reincarnation and boom nothing is affected except some mc changes or shit, everything is restarting (kind off u start writing the past life of an mc reincarnated like the great thief, the strongest sword god, and continue with the story in the actual novel) and if somehow the situation in synopsis changes, u choosed a wrong hook for the readers and is returning back to you with negative feelings. Not talking about how bad the mc is in the start
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Rakshak_Awasthi
i really dont know what to say but i'll just say i am a bit dissapointed with the development of story so far the betrayal thta was foreshadowing is taking too long
3yr
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