It's mind-blowing I love the characters and their world they were placed in I love the lessons from each chapter it is quite Fun when reading this,I will obliged the writer/author of this piece to update it as soon as possible cuz I really want to see how it ends........I love the Novel alot....and I really want to finish it
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Love this story. Can't wait for more; although, I would really like to see them go back to the acadamy soon to visit. Of course they need to deal with the Nine Tails Sect first.
The novel just doesn't make sense. Hard to read and the story is all over the place. The characters are so bland and their conversations are either boring, cringey, or makes no sense.
This novel is quite good to get hooked but can be better if bellow points are handled better
1. Fighting scenes are very boring with mc and opponents having very limited skills .Fighting pattern is getting similar as story process.
2. Making chaps lengthy with unnecessary words describing how a person looks and what he wears (even if you know he'll get killed within the same chap)
3. Same constant reaction from mc and fmc like they smirks cruelly, smirks mischievously, smirks like this like that (getting a very frustrated vibe reading that)
4. R-18 scenes are very simplistic with not much detailing and a tad bit boring (feels like r-18 scenes are there or not doesn't matter)
There are parts of the story that are well thought out and have a unique take on the cultivation shstem that differs from other stories. And i have no issue with them being able to fight stronger people, but at times it they can utterly destroy someone nearing the peak of a realm, but then a few days later absolutely struggle to fight someone at the same power.
I havenโt read with the updates, as in keeping up with chapter releases. But reading through at once, it feels like the story is rushed and isnโt fully developed. A lot of things arenโt really explained or given background. It also seems that over 80% of females in this story look absolutely the same except hair/eye color.
I know this sounds like i despise the story, but i truly donโt. I think the setting and the story itself are good, but a lot of potential is missed out on and lack of variety/creativity in characters. i.e. busty women with big buttโฆ literally all of them and given the same body description.
Author pls keep writing and we readers hope to reach the end of the novel with you, pls keep in mind that there are still others anticipating for this novel and they just don't comment pretty much also,Thanks for your hardwork.
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Good morning Mr author I hope you are doing. I just wanted to say I love this book so please keep write. Don't mind me I am out of words so. Km km km mm km km kkkkkkkkkkk
To start with this story has a different way of going about things than most stories which isnt bad at all but being as light hearted as it has been it needs to either add a good amount of comedy or wit to carry it to betterment as only being lighthearted is horrible for a story in the long run.
The personalities of the the mc and the women are fleshed out enough and frankly much better than the majority of the other webnovel novels have, but its gotten to mushy and the way the self confidence or any behaviour is shown between them has become repeated and is just making the story weak at this point, at this point the main characters need to be treated as normal people and behave normally rather than this stuff.
The cultivation level jumping was already exaggerated and has since become just nonsense at this point since they got that chaos energy stuff, this has to been reduced at the divine realm to a normaler degree because rigjt now its just a pathetic joke the way theyre jumping entire realms. Just because every other novel makes the mc jump stages doesnt mean it has to be done and if it has to then certainly not like this.
To summarize not bad for a novel just with issues which need to be fixed asap to stop it from becoming worse.
An interesting book, but sometimes incomprehensible, what the author wanted to say by some kind of action. The characters are written well, but the world as a whole is incomprehensible, and there is no clearly expressed plot.
pelo que vejo o prazer yin tem varios links, entao vai ser um harem em vez de um unico parceiro?, estou atualmente no capitulo 58, achei legal.
desenvolvimente nao รฉ muito lento e tambem nao tao rapido,bom.
Fazit: Great read! Chapters are rather long (which I like). There are basically 2 MCs with funny dynamics between them. The writing quality (grammar and spelling) are good - things are easy to read. The cultivation speed is fast - so there are no "holdups". The world background good - interesting enough ;)
So once again - give it a try, there are many free chapters to get your own opinion!
Canโt read this. Every character so far has such an annoying, snarky way of speech. Theyโre all radiating nauseating amounts sacarsm and I cringe at every conversation. I donโt really get how someone can enjoy this but we all have different tastes I guess.
I rarely drop novels this early but I just got fed up and tired of the MC. He doesn't make sense. Many of his decisions or interactions make little logical sense as if the author didn't flush out or think things through. The descriptions of the scenes and the world around the characters was mediocre at best. I'm out and don't care if things improve later on. Not when they lost me so early on.
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Got to say, Pretty good novel. hardly any errors With grammar, second its got an intersting stsrt and good characters with a lot of mystery. addiTional its Got a bit of a dark mc wHich i love
Please I'd really appreciate it if someone could tell me whether this novel is interesting to read or not.
I'm afraid of wasting my time glued to my computer screen reading the book only to be disappointed by how much bullshit it has.
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