Writing Quality: 5 - Nice
Stability of Updates: 3 - welp... Idk what happened to this story but hasn't been updated for a long time...
Story Development: 4 - Reincarnation as tradition π BUT this one is peculiar, a sinful guy dies and meets devil and he literally makes a pact with him so he can have a second life, its a good approach to the story, what threw me off was the tail thing... but thats ok for now, there is not much story yet so i await for ur return.
Character Design: 3- no comments here...
World Background : 3 -no comments here...
total score: 3.6
All in all, I do appreciated the approaches u have when doing ur thing, I would love to see u doing a dbz fanfic or a more strategic one like code geass, attack on titan, or even fairy tail ! but please don't drop this novel, or at least open a patreon or a group on discord were we can discuss and share ideas to improve the fanfics !
thanks for showing ur work !
I really like this ff. Its so interesting and all in good ways.
Plus it's really and I mean really hard to find novel on baki and the ones they do have which are very few usually are never updated again.PLEEEAAASSSSEEEEE DON'T DROPPP CAUSE ITS AN AMAZING NOVEL SO CONTINUE
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I really like your other story fiction on naruto !! I really like the way you write stories because they are brutal !! it feels fresh to Me, and I just saw this another masterpiece !! Hope you can keep up with the updates on both book tho. GOODLUCK.
I hope you donβt back out since itβs literally a good start atm. And also your novel about Naruto is literally one of the best Naruto fan-fictions Iβve ever read tbh.
Btw Baki and other martial arts anime fanfic are rare these days and I hope you donβt give up just because itβs long or weird or ****. No dawg, you do your thing and if you like then keep going and donβt stop and ignore the criticism.
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