Reviews of Magic and Martial War God

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Devil_In_disguise
Its an ok story line even thought its a bit basic , my biggest complain is that the main charackter seems a bit too mature? Like he is way too maturr so its a bit unrealistic
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Skywolf_1
It was good for a while Then I realised this is yet another worthless system novel Why is the system plot so popular on this app I genuinely hate system novel I feel it just ruins everything fantasy or eastern fantasy stories are all about btw It's just my personal opinion and not review for novel
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Stealth95
Despite the fact that I like the story there are many glaring issues. The cultivation system doesn’t make sense. You can either be a martial artist, a mage, or both. In order to increase your rank you must open up meridians which there are nine of. However if you practice both then you need to share so the ratio becomes 5/4 which means you are weaker than a pure mage and martial artist when instead you should be stronger so the concept doesn’t make sense. Instead it should be different concepts such as using dark energy to increase bodily functions, and strength for martial artists and for mages they could convert that energy into mana which is stored somewhere in the body. The author also creates these “spaces” that are very confusing and quite frankly shouldn’t exist.
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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
I gave it a five star as a shameless review. I deleted my previous review to write a new one. In this review, I'll give you some pros and cons of this novel, so please read this before reading the novel. ....... Pros; 1- Small Harem (Can be both pros and cons) 2- Outer Space War and World Building (This novel is going to have the best Outer Space War and World Building. It'll have many planetary explorations, galaxies wars, and an expanded universe.) 3- Best Cultivation Art, Martial Art, Bloodlines, Power Weapons, Dao, Laws, Heaven Chosen, and Heaven Defier. 4- It'll include the best action scenes, with full explanation, with the wonderful army or sect battles. 5- Slow and Fast Mystery Reveal ( This is an awkward pro, but this story will reveal some mysteries earlier on, some later on, based on the story plot.) Cons; 1-Update Instability- This has been its greatest problem till now, but I'll soon have a better update once I finish my first novel 'Fighting For Eternity'. 2- Many Loopholes in the first fifty chapters. 3- Harem (It depends on personal choice) 4- Bad Grammer and Explanation 5- Some boring chapters out of all
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LoyalCultivator
So far amazing but lol everytime is just like oh cool oh cool oh cool every single time we find something new about him each time as he gets more and more op seriously but still its a really fun novel to read so yeah keep up the hard work man
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Daoist587037
I given this novel Many expectations , but unfortunately it did not meet it. The story is ridiculously slow and the information is given all at once, which increases the difficulty of reading, understanding and enjoying it.
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DarkDragonGod
It's a great action-packed novel filled with interesting characters. The storyline is also interesting and not one moment is dull. Its background setting and description are also one of its strong points.
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bibiyenini
A marvelous and applause for a great start! Martial Arts action novel is never really my thing but you broke that. Another action that will make the readers go crazy when reading this💓
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Jyojiko
The story is very interesting on how the changes Earth will go through in the future. You describe them well. Keep up the good work and updates soon!
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Xia_Fei
It is amazing to think about something like dark energy for cultivation and in the real-world we know nothing about it. The most amazing part of this novel is our earth, it seems we will see lots of fighting between different races in the universe.
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Milan_Subedi
Truly a marvelous start, author is trying to keep some secrets and reveal them just when they are needed. Its seems author imagination is also very good at Martial and Magic World
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Ganesh_Subedi
This is an awesome modern world cultivation novel. Though its just four chapter, it is enough for us to realize to good this novel is going to be but this still depend on author's thought. I hope to read more and more chapters like this in future.
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mysticaurathings
Amazing! <3 The story plot is superb.I really loved your writing style. Can't wait to read more of it! 😍
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Readoholic
Wonderful story plot. The story is very well written and the plot is purely original. The world description is beautifully written. The mystery is retained throughout chapters and though it is just 3 chapters and has already gained my attention. Waiting for more chapters to unfold the story. Good Work.
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Sandhya_Rijal
This is truly a interesting world with interesting stuff like dark energy. Author really imagined something that matches with our real world unknown stuff. I am looking forward to see how story progresses
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NuiXiel
It's nice, though it's still two chapters but i am super looking forward to what will happen next kyahhhh keep up the good work my co-writer
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SaberFate
I can see some great sci-fi coming up with some superb settings, keep it up Aurthor, added to my collection and will catch up with progress.
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Why do I feel it's true to life? Haha I like how you giving spices the flow of your novel. Organized and vivid . Continue working on it. Keep it up :C
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