Reviews of A Beautiful Nightmare

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THE_WORDSMITH
Very well written, intriguing, and clear. This is what I felt when I was reading this story. The only thing which I would like to point out is. The character description as in features can be written even better and also world set up.
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ChristySeraSwiftcc
Omg! So here's my review! The Prologue was "shockingly" amazing! I love how poetic and beautifully it was written. A round of applause for the writer's writing skills!! ;33 The story is intriguing, but I think author-san you need to improvise on the blurb a bit, it feels crowded and heavy and you should make it lighter! The story looks intriguing. Wonder what Aerial is gonna do once the power is in her hands! Sooo I really love the writing style of this author. It's beautiful. Keep up the good work author! ;) ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ (here's some love for you and your hardwork)
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ky_rine
I got really hooked! The synopsis was interesting and it drew me in. The writing quality was good. The characters were unique on their own way. I like the MC the best. Keep it up!
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Whendhie
Kudos to the author. Great synopsis and character building that keeps you hooked. Definitely something I would love to read. Looking forward to new chapters Added to library 😁❤️
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FLORA_BARUA
Nice story. Loved the plot. You should describe the world a little bit more. That would be really good for us. And overall it's nice. Your vocabulary is great along with your sentence development.
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Bishtf
I like the flow of the story and how the author describes each scene. The sypnosis was captivating. I am looking forward to the pilot's further development.
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mochiharp
I like the angst of the mc, plus there's the magical power you'd rarely see in stories such as this, it has given me inspiration too. And I'd always look forward to seeing what challenges the mc would cross in order to grow. Keep up the good job ^^
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Aaliyah_Stark_
This is great. I fell in love with the synopsis. The book has a great potential and its hooking because I loved the genre. It's my favourite. Keep posting.
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marichat_nettenoir
The books are well written, and it has nice grammar. Kudos to the author, and I hope you can post more chapters to the book! [img=update][img=recommend]
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ALLEY
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ALLEY

I like the plot of the story and starting from the title it really is intriguing. Hope you update everyday because this is a very wonderful novel
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CarrotOnTheStick
First, claps for the author for trying her best to have different vocabularies even though sometimes it isn't fit the grammar quite right. Second, the plot was kinda intriguing, so hopefully, that continues. Third, the flow of the storyline is consistent somehow to not be dull. Tips The only thing I can tip is that the grammar. Not the whole grammar. I'm talking about how you would deliver your character conversation. Don't cluster them in the same paragraph, so it'll be not too confusing. You need to be aware that many readers in her use phone, so that was quite a mistake. Final All in all, a good start and keep writing. Hope we have a great day! My thoughts I actually not on FL novel, not because I'm a male, but the novel was still far too on the actual story in my opinion and I hate waiting. So I'll preserve this on my library for a moment and check when it became 20 or 15 chapters.
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spicyscribbles
The premise of this story is an interesting one, and those who are interested in this genre should def look into it!! There are some flaws with the grammar, but it is not so bad that it can't be overlooked. I feel like the story's worlds and characters could be developed more, but as the story has just begun I suppose we'll be seeing that in the future. Overall, good work to the author ^u^
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immabecale
The good thing in this novel is that the author writes magically. Although I am still looking forward to seeking the magic from the characters especially their background story, and the world itself too. I'm gonna put this in my collection, and will look forward to updates! [img=recommend]
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Unknown_storyteler
Wow!! I really like the wordings they are really attractive... And also I like the main character ... I'm looking forward to read more.. You have done the Great job...Keep going ♥ ♥
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Senpaipuku
It's great overall but I strongly suggest you to do a proper spacing in dialogues as they are hard to read when stacked up in one long paragraph.
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Miss_Elated03
I love the way you explained everything in details, it makes it so easy to understand. So much emotions in the chapters and you don't have to second guess what they are feeling. Good job.
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Aine_17
These few chapters were are good, I am waiting for more. I like this book a lot, this helped me improve my vocab too. The characters are amazing and quite hooking. KEEP GOING AUTHOR, DON'T GIVE UP
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b3_rt
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i really like the way you write it and describe everything in detail so that the reader like me can really get the emotion and make us think that we are somehow inside the novel. Good job :D
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69420_69420
It is great. One of the best romance stories I've read so far. Hope the author keeps updating it daily. .............................................................................................................................................................
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Kookie_Gee
I love your writing style and the characters omg! and the story building up makes it really exciting! again I love it keep it up author! Happy writing! [img=update]
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GibberishDude
I really like the plot! The story is easy to follow, and other than a few missing letters or commas, your vocabulary is quite large. I think something you could work on is not repeating sentences. For example, you ended a few sentences with "she yowled sniffling".
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JP_TransLaLa
A unique story with an underdog protagonist. A lot of descriptive text mixed with some interesting setup and action. Hoping for a good payoff!
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Dingoa
Fantastic descriptions (both informative, unique, and sometimes humorous), lovable main character, and interesting storyline so far. There is some mystery here that I'm intrigued by. Flashbacks are an interesting way to reveal information, and I think they're used well here. Looking forward to seeing where things go.
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CrimsonMoonLover
Love the story line, it is intressting making you want to read and know more. My fav character is Clair, she has a bubbly personality that makes you smile. The intro really captivate the reader, getting them hooked on right at the start. Making the reader want to know more about the Aerial and the mysterical voice. Eagerly waiting for some more! [img=update]
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