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NauticalLuck
To be honest when I first started the book I wasn’t expecting much, but when you read deeper into the novel it becomes so much more intresting and while it may hint of other novels such as “Only I level up solo”, it puts a twist on those things making it have a overall charm to it. Overall it is a outstanding book and I cant wait for more chapters!
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Yggdrasil_
Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? I'd like to join your discord to know about the new chapter relases but it seems to expired. Can you update the link plaese x?
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YaMETeKuDASai
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laotzu999
dumb mc ✓ check
annoying mc ✓ check
simp mc ✓ check
mc is just retard doesn't even learn from his past mistakes , calls his system annoying , he has foolish pipe dream of become hero and make world in which every hero is good .drools over every girl .
I think author delete bad reviews for maintaining rating. this story is utter garbage, waste of brain cell
im sure if u hate dumb mc this story is seriously not for u .
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yayeetbruh
Good good good good good good good good gooD gOod good good good good Good gooD good doodododododododoofofoeowowpwppwowowowowowowowowowooeowo
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Big_T_Big_H
Another hiatus? Bro i like the novel and all with potential it had but please keep updating. Meanwhile i do Understand things happen in life which takes importance and all but You have a good story that could be Great with more tweaks and the lack of updates kind Of suck
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zaifi007
It is a good novel and engage its readers . But the authot need to post chapter more regularly. Overall it is good. So i hope you keep it up .
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CrazePar
Good good good good good good good good gooD gOod good good good good Good gooD good doodododododododoofofoeowowpwppwowowowowowowowowowooeowo
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ahmed_tanim
I read till chapter 10. I am really fed up with this guy's naive hypocritical thoughts. I don't think a hero needs to save people freely. soldiers fought for countries and take money in return. these make them bad people?? no they are real heroes guarding the border so that we can sleep in peace.
please someone tell me will mc's naive mentality changes or he will remain like this in the future. if mc's mentally changes for the better, I will continue with the novel. if not, I will drop right now.. time is precious
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KeiJu
Everythings great but the mc really pisses me off sometimes. Dropped it cause I found something else to read but it's great if you have nothing else to read. (Not saying that that's the only circumstance in which you could read it)
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powerkrish120
One funny thing is that MC got a quest to do exercise at 5AM daily. First day he get up 5AM and he has to go out of his room and greet the girl he wasted time and couldn't complete. Now here comes the funny part if you want go out at 5AM what will you do get up at 5AM and fresh up then start going out. You should be atleast 10min early. The next he get up at 5AM and waste another 5min and still can't complete quest.
Funny moments 🤣🤣
Overall a good story.. Character development is good too.
Here MC didn't blindly follow beliefs that a hero shouldn't kill and spare every villain. He thought that if that villain goes and kill some innocent isn't that exact opposite thing he do.
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Aaron_McLeod_1690
horrible english. not worth the read as you spend more time trying to figure out what the author is trying to say as opposed to enjoying the story or characters.
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Glory2345678
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Bradley_A_T_Bright
Love the work and development you can tell a lot of work went into this can’t wait to see more.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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Tiny_Box_Tim
The story had potential, the writing quality was good and the MC was likable enough, but it progresses to fast. After a single day he gets into a meeting with the highest ranking people and they personally give him information he doesn’t really need to know at the moment and exposit their inner thoughts every chance they get merely because he is “trustworthy” and “good looking”. If he was alowed to develop and grow a little more without the plot rainning on us like artillery shells in WWII, it would be much more bearable read.
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Big_T_Big_H
So I REALLY like this novel, at first it reminded me of solo leveling, not in a bad way but just how Alex got his powers. I like the way the author makes the characters still seem human and vulnerable in the way that he doesnt make them seem too OP just cause they are awakened.
ThE only thing i dont like is that the author doesnt update consistentl….hope that it doesnt stay that way
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Rooky_AL
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one_punch_senpai
Nice 👍 I live the story and the story development too. ______________________________________________________________________________________________
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cheryl_candy
From what part onwards does the story become fascinating? pls tell me....! I have read until ch 40. I look forward to more complex events and battles.
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DaoistQenC7Y
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SoggyBread1244
I enjoyed reading this as I felt like it was a nice time killer, although I was a bit upset whenever I reached chapter 31 and it seemed like he took a bit too much inspiration from I Alone Level-Up (solo leveling) whenever he put the whole red gate part. In the end I just felt like saying this since I noticed there weren't any comments about it since most people probably didn't care but I just felt like venting a bit. (I'm not angry I was just a bit upset about it and I'm sorry if this offended you author!)
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Blackwater
It's a decent if generic story, with a Gaming like system and Portals. The Quality and the story are a average, the Characters are a little bit above average.
Like I said the story is decent, if you are not awaiting super High-Level stuff and just want something more inline with what you have read of this type its pretty good.
The setup is not unsimilar to Solo Leveling, even if many points are different, like instead of Dungeons you have those reaper.
I have read much worse and the story itself is Solid.
3.8/5
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ThePumpkinGod
I've read the first chapter and I am getting some serious solo leveling vibes, I mean he is about to die and then like KABLAMO wanna be a fucking player.
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cheryl_candy
I really feel good about it.l haven't read it completely, but I'm gonna love it even more than what I currently do. Keep going! We will support you!✨
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DisconsolateWeeb
Mostly for XP, but while I am here:
1.I like the main character
2.I like the side characters
3.The grammar isn't too bad (some errors, but not nearly as bad as I have seen around this website)
4.The story is pretty good so far (I am only about 40 chapters in though).
Overall, I would say it is worth a shot if you don't hate system stories (or isekai)
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SYZ
I don't really know how to say this but this book feels nice to me. It feels amazing! I mean like...WOW even if they wrote something wrong it would still be understandable. I just like this book... That's all
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Thanks_For_Reading
Super duper cash money! Www***
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7sin_Playz
A great story that has nice characters as well as a sense of justice. It also matches up with the Hero feel, where the Hero should kill the bad guys and save the good people.
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Star_12
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