Reviews of My Succubus System by DreamOfRen - Webnovel

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4.46

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Vedhon
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Vedhon

so far it's great but is it only yuri? i honestly hope it's bi. there is just something in the corruption factor I love.
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Jacko91
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Jacko91

I don’t know why I’m drawn to this book it’s probably because I like succubus stories keep it up.
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Nytrives
Im so happy this is back, I throughly enjoy seeing the journey of accepting the gender change and themselves. I hope you have taken the time to fix your mebal and physic health and i hooe you have a good new year
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61END19
I love the lore and character Development and the system I hope you update Soon[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Kiera_Kowaliw
Great storyline and character development only thing that could make it better is a more consistent chapter update such as once a day or once a week would be nice.
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TragicHysteria
A surprisingly good isekai fish out of water story with good character development and world building. There are some iffy parts but read past them it's worth it.
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SeagullWatcher
Excellent character development and interesting story. The novel also does a great job making the explicit scenes flow with the novel and story. A good novel for a more mature audience that is more realistic in its content instead of trying to purposefully include or avoid "things".
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Pandoras_Actor
The story is quite good but I am realy wondering about one thing that happend when the main character gets staged an I hope we get to find out soon
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TheSDH90
This novel is a fantastic rendition of the reincarnation with a system genre. It uses the genre as a base while also showing that the main character isn't all powerful. While Agni is more powerful than most people it is a novel about weakness rising to strength. While the above mentioned is a great aspect, the best part about this novel is that that is a side aspect of the story. The main aspect is that you follow the story of a girl trying to get used to the world. This novel does have some sexual scenes but up to this point (ch 109) it hasn't been the major focus. It is an additional aspect of the story to give more life to the characters. the only downside is that the updates take so long. My only wish with this novel is that it would get monetized by webnovel in order to encourage the author to update more frequently. overall this is a fantastic story that people should read.
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DaoistxtgDdT
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Hempy
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Hempy

I can't get enough of this, I eagerly wait each chapter now, purposely tried to take breaks in between chapters so I wouldn't be waiting, but when the writing leaves you wondering & formulating ideas it's... ugh I love it so much. Thank you P.S. I also find how you include lewd without it being the center piece or crux of story, it just allows interesting scenarios without.. um overwhelming? idk how to phrase it.
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Leo_Hex
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Leo_Hex

TL;DR "A succubus rencarnation sexy-funtime isekai power fantasy." I'm not gonna stand here and tell you if you should burn this from your memory or if your gonna defend this as "not-hentai." Also, it is hentai because the first two scenes are were the story actively describes its characters in a sexual manner, In The First Two Scenes, WHILE ALL OF THEM ARE IN THE NUDE! IT'S!!! HENTAI!!!!! Sorry about that I just had to let off some steam. So, yea our "not-hentai" protagonist is a superpowered isekai succubus, who's overpowered and has all of the wishfufilment BS of the story drop on them. Look, it isn't offensive to people's sexuality from what I saw. And there's no grooming or rape so honestly it's not immoral to read, at least by the rate of the first 15 chapters. But if this isn't your thing then you shouldn't read, and if it is then it's not bad, but it isn't good either.
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Gray_Fox_6070
I have no words to describe it, it is very good, I really liked Agni's development as a protagonist and his actions I would probably give five stars if I could be led to feel a very strong emotion, I think. But I really liked this fic
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Lord_of_Mysteries
i can see where the story comes from but if you were to do story like this you could have done anything else than this, the story gets boring overtime and content is really slow and as of 50 chapters there really is only annoying people and the mc seems like an idiot i dont honestly want to continue there are dozens of books that are better than this in every aspect theres books with better stories better charatcters better world, even better writing i dont want to waste time in your run of the mill average and nothing unique fantasy story which has only one thing that makes it unique, every last adventurer other than shop keeper is girl no boys at all but that makes it even more boring for me
3yr
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Aoki_Aku
Started reading expecting generic succubus smut (no, I didn't bother reading the synopsis) but it's actually a great story with character development, an actual story line, and a well developed world. I'm very impressed, hope it keeps updating regularly
3yr
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Hempy
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Hempy

left a review on ch 22 but wanted to make sure its seen here, I've been searching desperately for gender bender that makes the character relatable, but if/until I find something else this one is number #1 for me, either the mentality of character or the Awesomeness of detail & I only just started reading this date!
3yr
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Colin_Holman
I enjoy this story very much and have interest in concepts characters good put into situations that are difficult for them but not impossible
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Pill_Guy
Honestly, I could only get to the latest chapter on the premise. The world feels like remnant crossed with genshin impact and the story so far is just a "real world video game." Also, I really don't like random snap shots of the future theme. Anyway that's why its not a 5, but writing quality is great and the characters base design is great. My only issues are with the world and plot. I'll probably keep reading it.
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Delem

extraordinary writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
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Avizura
I was honestly skeptical because of the R18 tag however it wasn't so bad, in fact, it's actually pretty good story and I'm totes looking for it. Recently I've been reading a lot of gender bender because it's very interesting how men act or react to such situations when they're women and this story explores a lot on the MC and the companions. Totally recommend this, give it a try.
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BrabbitX
yaoi, mc raped. enough said...............................................................................................................................................
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DemonPinkQueen
Buen trabajo .............................................. .................................... ............................................
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NowhereOmen
The story is simple but fun. Straight forward system hyjinks. that leaves us free to concentrate on the characters and how the main character explores her new self. Fun and sexy. If you're looking for anything deeper, look elsewhere.
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MargeBarge
I really like this so far, of course it's got the overused system thing, but, the way this world is built is pretty interesting and I haven't seen it before. I can't wait for this to get more attention.
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avidanimefan
This is honestly probably one of the best r18 web novels I've read. and it's updated everyday on the patreon page which is pretty impressive. I recommend it if you're a fan of fantasy , magic and of course isekai smut .
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TakanashiiKiaraaa
My Succubus Sytem, My Vampire System', My Slime System'.....Whatever I Love It. β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️ β™₯️
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NamelessPersona
You gotta at least add the R18 Tag or something, how on earth is anyone gonna find your novel throught the regular searches or the SMUT tag. Im sure that way more people interested will find this novel.
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DaoistTamashii
This book has very good quality, rarely seen in erotic novels here. The story is interesting and the characters seem believable. All in all this book is worth supporting!
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Luketothepast
Really good overall! So... yeah It's written way better than some stories I've read and it actually kept me more interested than some of the other ones on the platform!
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ProfessorofCulture
it's pretty good.
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