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DaoistWdqRYY
A really well written plot consisting of short stories which will keep you glued to this novel. Really great and amazingly sketched out characters.
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Aadin
It is a good book comprising of different stories!
Good description and short to the point.
So far I have completed the third story and I must say... it was worth my time!
There are some errors, just if you go through all the chapters once again, you can edit them. (wink)
Another suggestion from me - please add some action romance story, too! I really need those. :) :) :)
Good luck!
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Khawla_Amini
Interesting book, with a good style of writing and a wonderful plot 👌 So far .. I just read 10 chapters, and I'm totally hooked up 😍 keep up with the good joob [img=recommend]
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NoahSky
I like the derversity of the characters personalities. Please keep up the good work. You also have a excellent plot line. I'm look forward to seeing where you take us reader's with this story.
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Alexandra_An
Dear readers,
do not be afraid to leave a few words of comment or a review!!!
Dear Author,
You already published many chapters and have great views. Why you don't have reviews??? I don't like it ;)
I read the frirst story and will read more (added to my library).
You're doing great job! The story has everything that supossed to have. Interesting plot, some characters, described background, etc...
I would add some more action. As I already said to somebody, even "50 shades of grey" besides spicy *** scenes has a lot of action...
All the best with your writing!
BTW Jo asked me to help you a little bit... :)
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Jo_J
Honestly. I'm not a fan of sweet stories, I don't like arranged marriages etc. So I'll try to be objective, I won't judge the content, just the structure etc.
After reading a few chapters, I can confidently say that you know how to write. There is verything that should be in place!
Just pay more attention to punctuation marks, spaces, etc.
I wish you a perpetual inspiration and o lot of great ideas! :)
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Shenyechi
I absolutely love romance 🥰 but I have never really delved into romance short stories. I'm glad I did, the first story starts off with an interesting plot which compels you to keep reading. I've added the work to my library so I can read the other shorts within the novel.
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BlaccLotus
A good read for those who are into light harlequin romance. There are a lot interesting stories on the book which are good for you who aren't interested in long story.
Each of the stories have their own unique characters and different plot which I found this is interesting concept.
Overall, it's pretty good read so please give a try!
Good luck to you.
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Yaminoyosei
I really like that it has a lot of stories inside. It keeps you wanting to read about the variety of characters. It seems pretty good this far. Keep up the good work
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defrost
it's a very good book for those who don't like to read long novels. short sweet stories with full of love and family vibe, good for reading if you like sweet love stories and that also with simple endings just a bit more suspense or thrill is needed.
good work author keep it up.[img=recommend]
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CoolForniteplayer
Good book and good selection of characters. I am not a big fan of the systems novels but this... seems intriguing to me for some reasons... Keep up the work, Author!
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Zoro_The_Dark
This is really a great work! I don't read romance novels so much but I'm liking this because of its short stories. I would suggest you if you could please create a short story with fantasy element? Hero fighting to protect or capture the princess or something or princess trying to find a prince through a league of wars? Action scenes along with spicy scenes would be really great!
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Glenstonx
Hi author~~
Upon reading your first chapter I was delved into your novel but there are some errors I have encountered, I also commented on some parts of which I think something must be changed so feel free to improve your writing, Im just trying to help
Anyway, the story is really nice although there was not much of a hook in your story, but it gradually piques your interest as you read some more. That is all~~~
Toriatim