1- will MC be the usual heroic retard? Doing heroic **** when he barely has power, not killing, and basically a fanboy? And is every women a horny slut that loses em selves cause MC is so Goodlooking? A perverted MC?
2- the chick, IDK but it seemed forced, like there was no build between em, build it. In the start she acted like a ***** but as the chp progressed she apparently liked him? ( my thoughts)
Mc give up on life, goes to the new world with money(?) that should be enough to last him a couple of yrs but he only have 3k left? Where did he spend them? He guve up on life and become a neet so he obviously did not enjoy himself with luxurious stuff.
Also mc seems like he give up on life and dont want to do sht in the real world but he has a hero complex? What was that about?
With how the even are going. i bet it will be a chain reaction until you drag mc in to the light where he has no choice or something. Like the typical xianxia. And then all the drama from the first part of this chap is forgotten. Well character development the hero complex will win than the “i dont give a fck” attitude.
So he's basically a tsundere? I mean If he didn't want to be bothered by Batman he could have just left Gotham, it's not like Batman has ever heard of another city
For stuff like DC its easier to write a story for it if it isnt a harem cause with harem you start to focus to much on their reletionship like how to build them closer and forget or atleast not put to much effeort and focu on thier love life i thing this should be a non harem with 1 girl
first: great story. second: I hope the MC will overcome his problems. third: I hope there are some villains in the harem, only those who are not entirely bad.
I remember this now. forced or reneging on dragon bloodline deal that seems maybe a method to steal character's being away for dragon to live again or something. be well pervs.
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