What an interesting story! I have never seen such kinds of story! I salute you for your great imagination! Synopsis is too much attractive and so it dragged me to take a look at the book. Keep it up! I cheer you!
The intricate world that is described from Chapter 4 onwards is exciting stuff and we get deep into the mind of the nihilistic protagonist - this is a great contrast! It was a bit interesting to see (sfx splash!) to indicate sounds, but now we're used to this notation. Keep up the good work!
I cannot give constructive feedback for now as I have only read a few chaps.
Interesting. So far I am hooked.
The characters are nicely portrayed.
The story also has potential. There were grammatical mistakes here and there but I know that author will improve as the story progresses.
I assure you that this novel will be worth the read.
Highly recommended.
Hello, I am not too good at reviews but I enjoy reading this novel. The author phrases things in a way that make sense and while there are a few problems, they are small and too insignificant to ruin the content of the story.
The story has a lot of potential.
I'm hooked from the first chapter, I love the way the main characters don't take themselves as serious as others view them. Also the World building it's amazing can't wait to see more of this story unfold, few grammar errors here and there but all in all a good story.
Hello has the author I believe I can say without a doubt that's the best story I've ever read, if you don't believe me read it and prove me wrong. All jokes aside I really enjoy writing this story, and I hope you all find it as amazing as I do.
The story has potential, you can see that the Author's is improving with every chapter. The story is actually pretty nice. It's worth reading, and I have a feeling that in the end it will be a decent story to read. Some mistakes here and there, but they can be ignored. Good Job to the Author!
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The protagonist: I'm lazy, don't plan on doing anything.
The the country's fighting each other to the death, destroying the land he lives on: Hold my beer
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