A bit too much like Astral Pet Store, feel like the whole angel situation was in bad taste and was unrealistic. Realistically, an angel with that level of strength should have seen her fair share of tricksters and still agreeing to the second contract without seriously considering seems unrealistic to me. It is like the whole concept of once bitten, twice shy is lost on her. I find it hard to believe that these past few chaps were anything more than brutish writing; willing outcomes without appropriate explanations. I'm going to move away from this for a while and maybe come back when it all makes sense again. Or at least is a little more original.
this is basicaly Astral Pet Store. Only written way worse, without the necessary details and rushed. If you don't have original ideas don't write an "original". Which this novel is not.
Do the Chinese have a fetish with being beaten?... my friend literally killed the mc many times if it weren't for the system he would be dead, but the mc still wants to talk to the angel, under what reasoning? It's just stupid, why do the Chinese always do the same thing in their novels? Do you have any mental problems?
so fast le hired one worker. and u just wasted your 150 points for being an idiot. also the angel also is on the idiot side.
author, if u got 'inspired' by the other novel please make a statement.
say la something like this novel is based on the APS novel instead of saying this is your novel entirely. i agree it looks shameless.
elano77