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Draevin the elf. I loved that the protagonist was a true elf with elven views and arrogance it was quite refreshing . Peter the human didn’t have much of a personality But i was curious about his magic and wanted to see how him and Drae would get along. Tho i dropped the novel because of the female character Sylnyan , dont know why but the way she treated the protagonist who was doing her some favors by driving her and her human charge and even answers peter’s questions quite amicably considering his background . yet he gets constantly shit on by her for not being nice enough. like i too want to see them get along as I think they would be a great tag team. but the way she is forcing it just backfires and even make me dislike peter a bit. The worldbuilding is incredible, it has only been like 13ch but i can see quite alot of the world through how the characters act (the occasional info dumps confuse me instead) . The story seems to hide alot of secrets , like why has there never been Other known Human mages? I dont buy the “well you never let us” thing. What is drae’s past and the reason for his wish? What is peter? I had too many questions and while they look like they would be adressed in the future, i myself couldn’t stand the onslot of mystery after mystery and secret after secret. I think the character interactions are what are supposed to keep you hooked till the mysteries get resolved but since that was one of the things that got under my skin i couldn’t continue. But in the end thats just due to my own taste, not really the stories fault. I just wanted to write This review to give my thoughts and to add a review that actually talks about what happens in the story and was not a Vague “it was Great! Read it” nor a “Its horrible skip iT!”

Extremely well written. Kinda feels like WebNovel doesnt deserve to have a novel of this caliber. It has an interesting concept, much better than systems. Characters are well portrayed and information blended really well with the narrative unlike certain novels where information overload happens.

I seriously did not see that coming with Peter. Looking backwards at the older chapters it was so obvious in hindsight that he was an illusionist though, since he probably made that illusion the smugglers(?) used in the first chapter. Great stuff! I can't wait to see how Peter wins the rest of his matches since that trick ins't going to work a second time.

Grammar and writing really flows in thus story. The characters are extremely likeable and three dimensional as well. I know to others the concept of superpowered elves and normal humans might seem cliche and overdone, but this story manages to shed a interesting new light upon it.