Reviews of Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws by iam_adh - Webnovel

Unfortunately the author has dropped the novel, I know this because I am friends with her. Don't worry though I'll pick it up, so you won't have to see such a gem go to waste.

A nice read. This story gives a lot and little to the readers at the same time. A perfect blend sure to keep the readers curious enough to keep reading and reading. With so much to offer, it’s a must read. From Review swap.

I really like the story! The writing quality is amazing and is really understandable. There were no grammatical errors. The author is good at giving descriptions of areas and newly introduced characters, which was really helpful. The main character is really interesting and entertaining. The whole plot is well written and I can't help but want to read more. Keep it up author!

Loved the story. Hope to see it have great success. The storyline is very nice. It's kinda different which makes it more interesting . looking for forward chapters 💜👍

It's a good work, mysteries are in place and I felt the brutality of forcing fourteen year-olds to war, I can't with it. The narrative is good and like I said it's a good work. Keep Slaying, Author💯

The premise is unique in the sense that’s more like studying the MC’s psychic condition, but I’d present more external experiences than inner monologues to create more impact with the reader, the grammar is very nice and overall I’d recommend, it kinda reminds me of a movie which title I don’t recal right now, about a grandpa that lived in England, the story is shown as if everyone thinks he’s going insane, as the spectator we think he’s right because we’re seeing his viewpoint together with his delusions, by the end of the movie, we’re surprised to know that he was mad all along. I’d recommend an approach like that to a psyche research book. Also be careful with the words you translate from Spanish to English, although some of them exist, they’re not widely used. Adolescent is not common, it’s mostly teenager that’s used in that case. Best of look.

A very nice story with a solid plot. It has enough intrigue to pull you in from just reading the synopsis. There are little to no grammatical errors making this a very easy read. Amazing work author! [img=recommend]

Mysterious enough to keep you engaged. Grammar was decent for me and plotting was carefully made. I like the story! 👍 Keep it up, more readers will surely get your work into their reading lists and will be in tune for your updates. Details were standard and narrations were fluent. Just like the other reviewers said, your story is lit! Gold!

This book have everything you need... awesome work!! keep up the spirit and hope to see more wonderful works from you! The writing was captivating, the characters are believable and I care about them! :)

The writing quality is good so I gave you five star for that! So far, the story was also good and interesting. I can’t wait to continue reading new chapters soon. More chapters author! Thank you!!

The author has a way of describing things very vividly which lets you experience the book in a very interesting way. The plot is also interesting but I feel that the novel needs a little bit more work to translate from 'spoken language' to 'written language' .

This is one book that will keep you holding your breath! The author just knew the time to keep the readers hanging. It is indeed intriguing and so far, plot is developing beautifully. Great job author

This story starts very well and has good pacing, which combined with good grammar and punctuation (something lacking on this platform) make up for quite the smooth read. Congratulations on this, author. The characters are well written and interesting to follow, it's like watching a movie. The setting is also original and leaves you wanting to know more. Recommended.

i really love your story! the plot is super unique and i love how it starts. it has a sense of mystery that just draws readers in i normally don't read much on here, but i will definitely continue reading this book! great job 💓

WOW author, what an amazing introduction 🌸✨!! The first chapter is filled with just the right amount of mystery to keep any reader easily wanting to read more 🤩. And I absolutely love the fact that the author created Auo Ju to be such a smart character. I found his first conversation with Irene to be quite clever and enjoyable! This book is so good! I did notice an accidental shift or two between the past and present tense, but those simple mistakes didn’t at all hinder my reading. Great job author! This is a really good work :)

Extremely captivating story. I can't wait for future chapters and added it to my library. Thank you for the amazing story and good luck to the author.

The start is intriguing, and pulls you into continue reading to find out what's truly going on. It's descriptive, allowing you to easily visualize the characters and the world they're in. Check it out if you're here already!

Liked your story. Writing Quality is really good, Having no obvious grammar mistakes just makes the whole process smooth when I read it. I also like these types of novels a lot. Definitely recommend it.

the concept is very much intriguing, and the writing style makes it easier to keep up with the story. nothing i would read on a daily basis, but it's fun to read something unique

OMG. I just read the first chapter and it's just amazing. You know the way you described everything seems so realistic. I would like to continue with this book. Amazing work!

This book is amazing 👏 once you have a peek at the first chapter you'll be so engross you do not want to stop from reading 😀 it happened to me so I know 😂 So if you want an escape from reality add this fascinating novel to your library and get lost in the wonders 😄

I am totally in love with the unique storytelling. We only see what Au sees, this gives chill. The world setting is beautifully pictured.There is so much to learn from the way you explain is describe. The readers can easily feel the psychological tension. It'd be great to see how this will turn out.

The story is well written. Rarely saw any mistakes honestly, The only thing I dislike is how a few parts are developed. Still good nonetheless, [img=update][img=update][img=update]

It's a great read. The description is wonderful and the characters are likeable. The world background has potential and the plot seems to offer a lot. The only thing I feel needs to be changed is the pacing. It seems to be going a bit slow but I can handle it.

This is good, the writing is detailed and the beginning chapter hooked the reader by rendering them with several questions inside their head. Keep it up, author!

I really love the descriptive writing. The story has great potential so I'm looking forward to more chapters. The main character could use a lot more work though, but overall good story.

I love this story so much! The amount od description used for the story makes it so I can literally see what is going on in the story. I also like the idea of having a explicitly mentally unstable MC. I can't wait for more!

just the intro threw me for a twist with compelling into and character description it makes the reader (me) want to dive in and read more I added you to collection keep it up.

i love this story so much. there are little to np grammar mistakes, the charactera are well developed, the dialogue between the characters is realistic and the world building has a lot of potential. i can't wait fo the story to risr to the top.

In my opinion, story wise, it is interesting to read but I just felt the main character is still lacking of something, a conviction perhaps? I hope to read that part soon. Thank you and good job.