Overall i like the story but don't you think MC's power a little bit too exaggerating?........................…………………………..............................._______________________________''''''''-_7_7_7_7_+__+_+_+_+_+_+xoxoxpxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxxoxo
hey author please upload more chapters on twilight fanfic man
everyone loves those fanfic that get updates regularly and in continuation
you try some many fanfiction and none has a chapter close to 100 man
trust me
I am against your ideas
you have some great storyline for fanfiction but they look like they are failed because you're not working on single fanfiction
it's just my personal opinion but try to write fanfiction
in continuation and you'll see magic
you won't believe but the support you'll get for just updating one fanfic is on another level
everyone will support you
I hope you'll consider my request and twilight fanfic it's I like it
but you can choose any fanfic but continue only one at time
try to create more that 100-150 chapters you'll see what I have said was true
and if you cross over 200-300 chapters man
you'll be The Author Of Fanfiction..............
I have been doing a lot of Fanfics these days but i like this the most and i think i wrote it better than the others so i think you will like it just as much as me and if you do please leave a powerstone and a review and add it to your library!
Rynier_Isaac