I am loving this story ! It makes want to keep reading and I can't wait to see what the next Chapter will bring. I usually only read romance novels and comics on here . I love how it has magic in the mix!
The story is set beautifully and the descriptions are all perfect, this story also has really different types of characters with nice-to-read interactions between them. Gives a fairytale vibe which makes the story interesting.
Although, there a handful of typos and grammar mistakes that makes it hard to understand some sentences. With that fixed, the story should be a smooth and magical read <3
Wow. I smell something women empowerment here. Since thatβs what Iβve read in the sypnosis. π But anyway, this story is different from other stories about female lead that Iβve read as the story progresses. Fighting beasts and creatures? Woah, I love that! π My favorite is the MC, she has character development. Good job on this, author! β€οΈππ»
Still reading, but would reccomend it so far. The pacing is good with quirky traits / personalities in the characters. Would make a good animated series or comic.
I couldn't sleep making sure I consume every chapter,so interesting and captivating pls I want more of this,I can't wait to see more chapter,I love Laura the legendary queen she is strong and smart and I want to know what is happening to Cordelia,who took her away and why was she not defending herself with her power
I really want to know more. The way you describe everything, it really peaked my interest. I loved one certain badass character if I do say so myself, and I canβt wait to read more chapters.[img=recommend]
A really interesting plot! I love the desprictions of the characters. This is a book that will definitely keep you hooked. Just make sure to go into more detail and not rush any scenes.
Keep up the good work! :)
Wow , this is great. I LOVE IT. its really wonderful how you have described the story in synopsis it really makes readers wanna know more. Great going and keep updating. Will read them
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I have to say i love it! The character designs are unique and has a character of their own. I did have a problem with the dialog at first because of different writing style, but that was not a problem, i could get used to it fast!
The plot it good, the development of it is even more! keep up the good work, author and update soon!!
I like where the story is going , tgis story has a lot of potential i find it so interesting, I recommend it to you guys , π€π€π€πππππ i hope you enjoy as well as i did , i want more .
This looks cool so far. There is some mystery to everyone, it seems, even the MC (with the instability of her magic), which pulls the reader in and makes them want to learn more. Each core character shown so far seems to have both obvious strengths and weaknesses, which is good, because that's realistic to how people really are, and it opens up doors for various ways the story could go. The way the author writes nails the royal-fantasy mood, so good for you, author. Occasionally this is difficult to follow due to pronoun switching and punctuation complications, but it makes up for it with and interesting storyline and enjoyable characters.
Hey I'm new here . I liked this story so much ,and i recommend it to others as well , its interesting I like the plot and backstory , I liked witches especially when a queen is a witch
I always liked witches story, like hp or ahs , this one is really cool. I like how Cordelia starts from a weak princess and will be a witch with Noahβs help soon
I really enjoy reading this book , you are really talented. Keep writing, its so good I love reading it , I love Noahβs characters i wish Siren was more I hope to read about her more she is so cute
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