Reviews of Hybrid’s Revelation by RJMidnight - Webnovel

Author here! I apologize for doing this, but I joined KDP Select and can only show 10% of book one. Chapters 5-46 are gone. If you want to read them, my book is only $1.99 on Amazon. Chapters 1-4 of book one is here while Chapters 47-? of book two are still here and available. Once again, I am sorry, and please understand why I did this. Thank you for all your support!

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I think this reincarnation type of story is quite great. Awaiting for more growth for the MC, since this will have a lot of potentials. I also like the idea that the author creates his own creatures on the world that he created. Which is why I think the world building is decent. I also like how the writing is done, its smooth and clear. The mc will grow further as the chapters unravel, I will put this in my library since I like it.

This is beyond amazing 👏 I highly recommend this to anyone and everyone who is looking for something interesting and catching to read 😊 I find nor have any fault.... amazingly good 🤗🤗

Your story is well written, nd the characters are well introduced. There are many elements in the story which come as a surprise to me. I wish you the best in your book, good luck!

Overall, a very strong story! I'm only around chapter 12 at the moment, but I enjoy the world-building so far. There are a few clerical errors that stand out, but they can be easily overlooked in favor of the detailed storytelling! Endru seems like a unique MC, and I wonder how his powers will grow with time. All things said, great work, and I look forward to seeing more in the future!

Your story is lovely and well built. I feel like the story's setting is good and has a strong base. Keep up the good work . Your book will go very far.[img=recommend]

There were 46 chapters when I made this review. I was originally planning on just giving it a try, with the intention of looking for something different, but once I began, I could not really stop again. Time flashed by, and I had suddenly caught up. I really like this story! The writing had me immersed, and the characters were very likeable. I am not going to spoil anything, but the plot was intriguing and I really liked the pace. I would definitely suggest everyone who are considering it to try it, the book is worth a try. I have added it to my library!

Lovely fantasy story. I like the rhythm of the story so far, the characters, and the way you describe everything. I love it, keep it up.

The novel quality is good. Worldbuilding, character building, and story development are superb.The story is not rushed and the author's writing style is also good.

A nice story about a hidden past and self-discovery, in a fantasy setting, that most definitely piques the reader's interest. Good mix of action and comedic relief, as the story progresses. Well done, author ^^

A very great story, with refreshing start and well thought of world building. the MC isn't human, and that adds more points to the story. The writing has a fixed, stable, professional taste style in it, that I personally enjoyed. I added it to my collection, and I'm sure if the author kept progressing like the strong pen he has, this novel will turn out to be a gem in the near future. Keep the hard work, thumbs up!

I believe I have been quite candid while writing this review. But I think that you are the kind of writer that understands constructive criticism and will not be dissuaded by some honest feedback. I focused on what - in my best opinion - has the most need or potential for improvement, (in the hope to help you progress rather than simply sing you praise). Your premise is compelling and I believe it is a story very suited for this platform, but I fail to become immersed. The characters themselves are lively, but there is not much dept. As your reader, I need more information in order for them to feel like actual people. Not necessarily about how they look, but rather how they move. How they feel. Is there a certain charm or abruptness about the way they move? Do their smiles reach their eyes? Give me some more inner turmoil or emotion behind the characters. Your writing style itself is very clean and it flows easily. It’s very relaxing to read. There is, however, an absence of rhythm in your writing. Having said that, I must confess that your grammar is excellent, something I learned not to take for granted on webnovel. I applaud the clear enthusiasm you put into your work and wish you a lot of fun continuing to write your story.

well written! the plots and development of it is building up steadily. The writing style is also good. Each character are unique. Good job Author, keep it up!

I love the the Mc and the choice of characterization the author went with. It's one of the better written novels on the platform. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and can't wait for more from the author.

This novel is well written, good English throughout which made the reading easy and enjoyable. The descriptions of the world are also well crafted, allowing me to form a clear idea of what the world is like. Look forward, to how the story will be further developed down the line!

The hybrid concept is really great. Your writing style is amazing. I love the action scenes you wrote, they are really captivating..👍 The theme of the story is really different and flow of your writing is awesome. Great going author...👏👏👍

Awesome novel! I like this piece, gonna add it to my library. Hmnn, let' see. I got nothing to say about the grammar. It's almost perfect. It's easy to read. So I will go on things that I can offer. The plot. I think the authors can still maximize the potential of this novel. Since the novel still in the early phases - it would be best to develop your characters first especially regarding the family. Make me care more! I suggest dwelling more on the interactions of the family and Endru. Give it a few more chapters, it takes time to build relationships up. Show me the process "the what, where, why, how, and when the family came to love Endru. What did our birdy dragon did to make the family love him aside from pecking some meat. Put yourself in the family's shoes. Overall, its a goody! I'll come back to read or binge after a few more chapters. Done with the honest review keep it up. Wishing for the best! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

I can definitely tell the author put his work in to draw sympathy for the MC because I felt it every step of the way. It is a refreshing change of pace from the usual pace. Stellar characterization and an intriguing plotline is how I would summarize this novel.

I am only in chapter 3 and I can not stop reading, the Characters are well written the story development is great. I can live myself in the story, well-done author and please keep updating! I can't wait to read more.

Before anything else, I'd like you to know that my review is with the genuine intent to help you improve by pointing out strong points and mistakes. First of all, please a little bit of mystery to your synopsis. Next, to create an immersive story, you should work more on focusing on one perspective else the reader would know too much. That makes them less immersed, my friend. You are a great writer and have an impressive story. Keep it up! :)

Defenetly an interesting story, both plot, and character-wise. From the few chapters that I have read I can say its a story worth giving a read to, and the writing itself is fantastic. best regards, author.

Solid premise, a demonic dragon is an interesting mc. the execution seems to be going well too. I can see a lot of potential. looking forward to the rest.

Nice non human mc,i like the way you mixed the half dragon and demon.The story development and character design is good Well written and quality writing. I like especially fantasy story keep going.

This is really interesting! I love the world structure, I love the details and explanation and I love how smooth the transition is from one thing to another. I hope this book gets the attention that it deserves because this is truly a hidden gem. Please keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work!

I love the premise. A forbidden love's fruit is sent to another world. The writing quality is great, characters are all relatable, especially the children, and the world background is slowly being expanded, but I love that for now Endru is focused on keeping his family safe.

Very interesting concept and it's quite refreshing to read considering that there's only so much info you can cram per chapter. This is a wonderful time to pass the time and it's definitely worth reading.

I was hooked by just the synopsis lol and honestly the way you built the world the story is set is was done really well. I am hoping I can get to that level sometime. Your characters seem really interesting too. Good job all the way!

Baby Raven is so cute yet so powerful... A combination of dragon and demon kid is quite interesting... I feel there's less interaction between the family and Endru.. your vocabulary and writing style is so good author