The story is interesting, but the writing is disjointed.
I can't figure out the character to be honest - but the biggest problem is that the chapters starting at 72 start repeating from earlier chapters.
the writing us definitely off, or maybe it's the translation. it's not really that good and the story doesn't flow well. it's hard to tell who's who and the dialogue isn't the best
When you say Ranger. Is that the title they are given the players or is it what the main character is going to be? I am just confused which is why i am asking this question.
Now was mystery shrouded.
I like the game elements and two world meeting.
I think the higher existence is the bad guys
Is the female lead alive or will she be reborn like him
Since I read author another book tried this and it's my second review
It was good story with lot of suspense and personality development.
Hope it gets regular update
And drop like those other novels
I love the book, it says about a new world and it's a intresting read.. I love how Taylor makes a slow development... and love that there's is a past and future intertwining together
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So far I read, it's a great story, full of mysteries about Taylor and his strange dreams. As far I read, I think he has a system, plus his wicked dreams and gloomy personality. The writing quality gets better with chapters, and I want to know what is happening to Taylor, so I will add to my library and read it later.
Good work author.
Great VR MMORPG novel to read... the story goes on flow, but the characters are few... it has a suspenseful backstory to wait for the upcoming chapters...
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